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Thanks for saving Erik and Sheth from the gruesome molestation! Can't wait to see Deena's execution, that was a nice way to get Deena give up
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Please don't let Sheth or Erik be molested,
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As always, lot of love and passion, will wait for Cinderfella 2
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Nice start to the Honeymoon!
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Well I think Zac should set his priorities and not lead Omari if his heart is not into it and if he is still looking for Adrian, it's not like Omari hides his intentions from Zac and then taking any undue advantage when he sees Adrian's reaction towards Zac Hope next chapter has cleared Zac's mind
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Chapter 13 The Crime and The Punishment
long1jo commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Chapter 13 The Crime and The Punishment
Hi I would have made her work in the vineyard and doing chores at Thorne palace as a chambermaid -
Well finally Corey is realizing that once a cheat is always not a cheat and trusting Jase. Epilogue can wait till next Wednesday unless you have another story to be posted
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getting more gripping, looking forward to next chapter Good luck with ur surgery
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Ok Enough of tormenting Tracy, can we get Chewy admit he always liked Tracy always and that was the sole reason he bought his art, he did ask Callen about Tracy's whereabouts and went to his school to get his art Did Chewy had a hand in getting Callen job in Florida?
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Chapter 9 We Saw the Light
long1jo commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Chapter 9 We Saw the Light
You have outdone yourself again Eric, Seth getting back his handsome face, that is interesting. Lets find Samuel and the evils next -
Chapter 8 The Plot Sickens
long1jo commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Chapter 8 The Plot Sickens
Interesting, Lukus Caine huh a new character or in disguise? Can't wait for the wedding though -
Lovely chapter. Nice to see Zac free spirited and happy, just hope Billy and Lonnie don't get in trouble
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Chapter 7 The Truth and The Law
long1jo commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Chapter 7 The Truth and The Law
Wonderful, So Thornes are the evil ones Lets find Samuel -
Chapter 6 Is He or Isn't He?
long1jo commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Chapter 6 Is He or Isn't He?
Eric, always enjoy your style of writing, definitely Seth recognized Eric snce he saw him with the eyes of his heart! Please don't make us wait too long Definitely Seth has to be revealed as the son of King Alexander please -
I hope Corey does not mess up this time and give Jason a chance to explain please, I am sure he should learn from his previous encounter
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Chapter 4 - Football practice
long1jo commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Football practice
Hi why is Chris afraid of music classes, he can play football and music -
Chapter 3 - Pop but not so cool
long1jo commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Pop but not so cool
Hi I don't see any connection with Peter in High School. Nevertheless this is interesting by itself, I feel sorry for Chris that he has to show a different face then what he is. Please keep going! -
Hi read it twice and will read t over, please try to finish this one Just beautifully written
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Hi that was a long wait over a month for this chapter, but is worth it who is this Chris? well hope he uses the lube in next chapter hehe Please don't make us drool too long
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Again, great story Eric!
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Wow, I envy you, but am happy that you have love of your life Not many of us are that lucky and specially in the 70's it was like going thru hell Bravo
