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Wow wonderful end but surely its the beginning of the new story I guess with Momma G and Stump n Tiny introduced t he very end Say yes please coming

Wow Finally Shakti admitted his love for Jai great chapter and beautifully narrated

after all the love Simon has for Jaime and Jaime for Simon it would be sad to see Paul ruining there life Great story will look forward to upcoming chapters

IS the summer heat getting to all of them or are they slowly missing home? Whatever it is hope it passes soon as they will need to be ready for oncoming winter So Shakti does not remember anything about the feast nite, thats the reason Jai is hiding from him and sad all the time

Please let Lee run to the hospital to see Avery safe and dont make him go back to the scumbag

Well done Sergio! Eric good that you gave into ur love instead of revenge Now u both can fight the world together Adriana you got ur wish come true now its ur time to gat with Steve😉

Great story, ofcourse no one likes sad endings but that is the reality of life sometimes Until the society accepts gay and lesbians and trans these things may still happen Bill keep up the good work

Wow what a beautiful chapter, really enjoyed learning about different traditions around the globe Vikki u r either a history buff or do a lot of research but I think u r former Thanks and as always enjoy reading ur work n look forward for more

Nice exploration since Shakti was restless night before thought something bad was going to happen liked Jai arm wrapped at Shaktis hip😉 thanks all went smooth

Wow if this is the begging can’t wait to see what follows we see not just lust n desire in Shiro n Keith but also something developing between them don’t delay n write soon

Wow I am sure Afridi enjoyed Justin's gesture and wont think of Jai as he is looking forward to his time with Shakti, I hope he gets it soon I wonder with such close space in the house how can Afridi n Justin have sex and Shakti n Jai not know about it, or are they just appearing not to know about it Nice story and always look forward for the next chapter

Perfect entry Eric, go kill the show! Wish Sergio would have confided with Adriana Trev and Giada your downfall has come Please dont make us wait so long , everyday I look up if any new chapter has been posted

Great story just started reading today cant wait for the next chapter

Wow How us Sergio ever going to forget Eric? He is going to be miserable till he gets Eric back if Eric will have him after the revealation. Hope Sergio does not sexually take advantage of Eric before he lets him down in deep despair Eric be strong and dont let him know the amount of hurt you feel when Sergio reveals his reason to befriend you please

Hi What about Trev, Sergio and him have been in love for a long time, its not fair to him unless he has been having some fun on the side too

Another great start, will wait for the next chapter with a roll o f Bounty just for ur stock CJ!

Dylan surely needs Liam to know how he let him down, and make him repent for it and sure with Jake being such a gem of a person D better not leave him for the jerk like Liam

Well finally happy for Penn and Nash, now just waiting for Nash to move back. Loved how Penn finalyy handled the rift

Very interesting beginning, cant wait to see friendship and love developing between Paul and Adrian Really am very sad that a father can be so partial to one child just because he doesn't fit his shoe Hope there is a lesson for him to learn in future

Emma deserved what she got but this is just the tip of the iceberg I hope. Happy for Granny and hope she recovers soon and gains her memory back in flashes so that she can help Praveen Travis always a good person at heart no matter how much u have been ill treated by the so called Gonzales family

Wow, what happened to Praveen? Like the new Travis but still miss taht loving and caring Praveen Andrea deserved what she got but surprised that Bruce is unscathed yet Antonio, you deserved at least this much cant wait to see what's in store for Emma Sean and Stephanie you are going to be the mender looks like with a surprise for Celine Where is Santiago Please post soooon

After reading the story my heart was so broken that I did not want to write any review. So much pain and suffering in one's life that there is never an end to it was disappointing. I thought the title of the story should have been Broken Hearts instead of Destined Hearts since all we see are broken hearts of Praveen, Santiago, Antonio, Bruce, Emilia, Granny but since there is a sequel in Raging love I have some hope. Please slowly ease the pain in Praveen's life and let us see some happiness Ethan, I was very disappointed with you just crying and not believing in Praveen, were you so blinded with your friendship with Antonio that you could not see anything beyond it? You should have reprimanded Antonio for his action as what right did he have to blame Praveen when all he did was keep on having affair with Bruce and flaunting in front of Praveen. Isnt Praveen a healthy 18 years old human who would also have raging hormones, not once there is any mention of him jerking of to relieve his sexual tension, so Antonio had no rights to ask that Praveen be pure, it can never be a one sided game Emilia, after seeing how much Praveen cares for the family that he never ever complained of being mishandled by Antonio which you had already witnessed, how could you turn your face away and have so much hatred in you without even having doubted that photos and listening to Emma who was always said openly that she hated Praveen and vowed to have Praveen thrown pout of the family. Antonio, you are the last person to expect anything from Praveen after taunting and haressing him ever since your wedding and you did see blood on ur c--k next morning to prove that he was virgin. Being in the modelling industry you should have been aware that photoshopping is so very possible and knowing how Bruce always wanted to be in your bed there should have been some doubt in your mind before casting Praveen away as dirt and throwing insults at him Santiago, hats of to your unconditional love towards Praveen that you agreed to get married with bitch Andrea. Hope you just waited outside longer to see if Praveen was safe Celine, your faith and love for Praveen is worth saluting, why did you not convince Eduardo to step in when the whole family was against Praveen Emma, don't you have a family of your own that you come and stay here and interfere with other people's life? Thanks for the sequel as the story really left me restless and that's the reason I did not post any comment till is I saw Raging Hearts

Thanks for beautiful chapter, I was hoping to see some light at the end of the tunnel for Praveen's suffering but I gues will have to wait till next chapter Indications were that Santiago is also gay the way he was speaking to Praveen Sometimes when you meet the one you want, you might find that person is taken. Dont make us wait too long

way to go Jason, a perfect answer for Ava bitch, do not go through the electric shock treatment, run before that happens and take the rest of them with you or even better destroy Ava

Are you serious? No way you can let your readers hang in limbo like this After all the pain that Jaime and Ali have went through we sure need a closure please😘