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  1. Matt think about Seamus and atleast talk it out before making plans, good that u r going to clarify any misunderstanding You both are too good to stay apart!
  2. long1jo

    Chapter 9

    Thanks for “Because…” he says, looking into my eyes. “I love you.” he says quietly. That leaves us with a good mood that Hunter is going to know that he is still loved Just needed to end with a chaste kiss from Dale to hunter lol
  3. Beautiful but I only feel sorry for Trevor as it was not his fault that his mom poisoned him against Eric and Sergio was in his life before Eric came in Poor boy terrible way to end up, if Jayden was excused sure Trevor needed another chance Just my thoughts I guess I am the softie one haha
  4. Hi I think I have read this story somewhere before but it is always a peasure to read it over and over again I like the way the plot is developing and cant wait for whats coming next
  5. long1jo

    Chapter 5

    Awesome, no back fire from the family now lets wait and see how Ronnie and the rest of the team take it
  6. Hello CassieQ Loved this story and read it twice. Love the pure and selfless love that flowed between Mikael and Adam One thing that I would like to comment is that in may stories that I have read about the adopted kids I always see taht they get angry at their parents for not letting them know and give them a hard time. When they get jealous of their boyfriends and are scared to loose them why dont they see that those parents may also be scared to loose their child if he found his biological parents wanted him back and he would go away Beside what do the parents have to gain by hiding the fact the the child is adopted Biological parents gave up the kid for adoption because they could not raise the child for whatever reason so be grateful that you have such wonderful parents who brought you in their life poured out all their love Imagine if he would have been left in the street ang brought up in orphanage or been transferred from one foster home to another In Hindu mythology God Krishna was brought up by Yasoda and Nandbaba and till this day people always relay them as His parents and not Devaki and Vasudev who are his biological parents It is said that parents who raise you are more to be cherished and worshipped then the one that gave birth to you I am only posting this so that if any adopted person reads this hopefully he will be more grateful towards his adopted parents when he finds out about it then getting angry and being ungrateful Mikael you know your mom was always reserved and just not with you but with Lily and Hyacinth too Stand in her foot before going and judging her, and how could you leave your father who loved you unconditionally go through the pain of not knowing that you are safe Just hope all the adopted kids are grateful for their loving parents and give them the respect they deserve
  7. Thanks for posting the chapter and that too it was long enough Love to see Eric and David behind all the warehouse fires Cant wait for the next one
  8. long1jo

    Chapter 5

    I hope Madox kills Mayson
  9. long1jo

    Chapter 4

    No please end this torture
  10. long1jo

    Chapter 3

    well take the video and that bastard to the cops for raping
  11. long1jo

    Chapter 1

    Love the start, have to read other chapters right away, wonder how I missed this one Hunter you are in BIG trouble!
  12. long1jo

    Yonder

    Wow wonderful end but surely its the beginning of the new story I guess with Momma G and Stump n Tiny introduced t he very end Say yes please coming
  13. Wow Finally Shakti admitted his love for Jai great chapter and beautifully narrated
  14. long1jo

    Chapter 4

    after all the love Simon has for Jaime and Jaime for Simon it would be sad to see Paul ruining there life Great story will look forward to upcoming chapters
  15. IS the summer heat getting to all of them or are they slowly missing home? Whatever it is hope it passes soon as they will need to be ready for oncoming winter So Shakti does not remember anything about the feast nite, thats the reason Jai is hiding from him and sad all the time
  16. long1jo

    Nightfall

    Please let Lee run to the hospital to see Avery safe and dont make him go back to the scumbag
  17. Well done Sergio! Eric good that you gave into ur love instead of revenge Now u both can fight the world together Adriana you got ur wish come true now its ur time to gat with Steve😉
  18. Great story, ofcourse no one likes sad endings but that is the reality of life sometimes Until the society accepts gay and lesbians and trans these things may still happen Bill keep up the good work
  19. Wow what a beautiful chapter, really enjoyed learning about different traditions around the globe Vikki u r either a history buff or do a lot of research but I think u r former Thanks and as always enjoy reading ur work n look forward for more
  20. Nice exploration since Shakti was restless night before thought something bad was going to happen liked Jai arm wrapped at Shaktis hip😉 thanks all went smooth
  21. long1jo

    Exhibit

    Wow if this is the begging can’t wait to see what follows we see not just lust n desire in Shiro n Keith but also something developing between them don’t delay n write soon
  22. Wow I am sure Afridi enjoyed Justin's gesture and wont think of Jai as he is looking forward to his time with Shakti, I hope he gets it soon I wonder with such close space in the house how can Afridi n Justin have sex and Shakti n Jai not know about it, or are they just appearing not to know about it Nice story and always look forward for the next chapter
  23. Perfect entry Eric, go kill the show! Wish Sergio would have confided with Adriana Trev and Giada your downfall has come Please dont make us wait so long , everyday I look up if any new chapter has been posted
  24. long1jo

    Rotten

    Great story just started reading today cant wait for the next chapter
  25. Wow How us Sergio ever going to forget Eric? He is going to be miserable till he gets Eric back if Eric will have him after the revealation. Hope Sergio does not sexually take advantage of Eric before he lets him down in deep despair Eric be strong and dont let him know the amount of hurt you feel when Sergio reveals his reason to befriend you please
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