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Excellent chapter! Donald has taken the first step toward finally admitting that his over the top hatred of gays was his own fears of discovery and the hatred his father showed constantly. The most vehement homophobes are generally closeted gays unable or unwilling to admit to themselves who they are. Hopefully this relationship with Connor will help him to accept who he is and allow him to be truly happy for the first time in his life. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! I totally love Nate, he’s become such an amazing person and he is always correct when he’s giving Eddie or Matty his view on how they can solve whatever problems they are facing at that moment. I’d like to see more about Nate and Simon. Connor seems to be a good candidate for Eddie to have a great new friend. Who knew that Donald knew ASL. There’s an attraction between Donald and Connor. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Eric has befriended the Captain now, he’s from Malta and became the tour guide. He showed them his family’s home and took them to an ancient church from before christianity. They’re enjoying the tour so far. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Eric continues to doubt his worth to the Royal Family and the decisions that he’s been making. Peter sets him straight about his worth and value to all of Makarovia. Henri was impressed with how much in love the guys are. They’ve arrived in Malta and they are going to visit the archeological sites in disguise. What could possibly go wrong? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! I’m really enjoying the rapport between Eric, Peter and all of the people on board the Duchess. They’ve added more pieces to their own family. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! I really hate people who abuse children. I hope that they are roasting in hell! Alec was victimized, overcame the trauma and shame associated, and became a successful guard in Makarovia. Now he and the Prince’s have become friends and I believe that his life will take a turn for the better. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! The crew and security personnel are cooperating with Eric’s request for having a deck party and cookout. Alec is being stubborn, but Eric will get him to relax sooner rather than later. He won’t push for every detail. Abuse can take many forms. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Eric, Peter, Pano, Barry and Edger became very close friends over their stay in Athens. Now they’ve sailed away on board the Duchess heading to Antikythera. These last two chapters have been very entertaining and fun. I know that you are telling these stories for your own sanity’s sake, but we all enjoy sharing the wonderful imagination you bring to these stories and characters. Thank you for all of the hard work that you put into each chapter. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Eric and Peter spending time with the security team in a less formal setting has lead to the security personnel getting to leave the yacht and spend time sightseeing and shopping for their families and friends. The prince’s are still planning to return to Big, which turns out to be a private club, they’ve passed the ouzo test and are now members themselves. I think that when the honeymoon finally concludes, the staff on the yacht will miss them since they treat them all as friends rather than as servants. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Big was such a treat for the guys and their security team. The owners and regular patrons were very kind and treated them both like regular guys. The bar posted very large patrons to prevent paparazzi outside. The police prevented them from following by requiring documents that they’re required to carry. I’d like to visit such an amazing place, unfortunately I am very short, so would stand out like a beacon. I’m very sorry to hear about the sweet tea disaster with your Mac. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Very different days for the guys. Jealousy isn’t the best emotion for Eddie to be experiencing this early into their separation. Matty’s bewildered by this reaction. I’m concerned that Eddie’s jealousy may cause unfortunate problems later. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter 😃❤️ I would absolutely love another Barnstable novel. I miss those amazing characters!
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Excellent chapter! The overheard arguments from the soldiers is very concerning. Jake and Alex start to sneak away when Preston asks where their going and if he can come with them. They’re enjoying their first sexual experiences when their rudely interrupted by Preston. They are all screaming at the shock, hopefully the soldiers won’t overhear and come rushing in. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Jihan’s faith in Firuz and Lord Silver rescuing him from the trap he willingly walked into worked out, barely. Duke Silver’s comment about Firuz turning Jihan over his knee, is fitting and hinted at his genuine concern for him. The eagle that landed on Jihan’s arm must have a very interesting story that I hope you will share in future chapters. Andiya has departed from the Kamran estate. The ghost warriors at the inn has a tale all it’s own. I’m trying not to figure out how we get to the Duke’s army’s holding Jihan for execution. I am aware that you’re enjoying having everyone guessing, and that you started this story in this way to throw us off balance. You’ve succeeded. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Matty’s debut as a back up quarterback went amazingly well. His first autograph goes to a bullied teen who is inspired by he and Eddie. Nate has matured so much. The separation becomes more lengthy and more difficult. Lots of temptations. Are they strong enough to resist? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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.Outstanding chapter! Eddie has the empathy necessary to be able to help youth and the compassion needed to guide them into discovering their inner strength to discover their own path to confidence and happiness. The fact that he got an assist from Matty was just icing on the cake. The death of Donald’s mother is sad and adds a new wrinkle to their relationship. Being apart for their college careers will bring new and complicated issues to bear on their relationship. We’ll definitely have to hope that they will get through their trials without destroying their very special relationship. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! The relationship between Henri and the Prince’s seems to be strengthening, they love the genuine joy and dedication to excellence that Henri places on each and every meal that he prepares. Henri admires and appreciates the laidback non pretentious people the Prince’s are and the absolute joy they receive from eating the meals that he prepares. Athens gives the honeymooners ancient sites to see, a delightful lunch with Capriano the waiter who aids them in escaping the paparazzi with the help of the police. The dance club Big and it’s really big bear of an owner sounds like fun. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding story! This was a truly enjoyable short story with dynamic characters and lots of emotional moments. You are always so talented at having us feel and experience every nuance of the characters emotions and the dramatic moments of their lives. Thank you for another wonderful story. 😡❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Kastan and Jihan have met for the second time and Kastan announced that he owed Jihan a favor for saving his son’s life. He also invited Jihan to come meet Rashan at their home. Hopefully the next meeting between them won’t end at the point of a sword. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Jihan has saved Rashan from injury or even death which should help him survive the encounter with Kastan in the future. I’m enjoying the foundations of the story and the characters you are laying out, albeit painfully slowly. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! There’s quite a bit going on behind the scenes. The emperor is plotting, Rashan has a secret wish, and there’s no shortage of intrigue at court. This has all the ingredients of one of your amazing, twisting, turning and surprise filled novels. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! You’ve jumped in and captured our attention with intrigue, bravery, treachery and.... I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Eddie’s perfectly suited for the position of youth minister. He learned more than those he was teaching through their experiences. He learned that he was a terrible older brother because he was a typical bully. This character flaw was pointed out by Nate, but was prefaced with the statement “I want everyone to know that my brother is my hero. I love my brother more than anyone else in my family. But it wasn’t always like that.” Eddie upon personal reflection realized just how badly he treated Nate. He apologized but Nate said get over it Eddie, I have! I really love Nate and hope that he’ll appear regularly. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! ❤️😃
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Outstanding chapter! The trip to London was typical for teen aged males. Consensual relations between the couple and a third person are very often exciting and fulfilling. Problems usually develop when a bit of fun turns into the third wheel of the relationship. In my 29th year of marriage to my husband we have enjoyed a playmate on a few occasions. We only had difficulties whenever lust and sexual release were confused with emotional attachment. Someone in the triple person relationship always feels left out or ignored. A weekend tryst with three willing partners does not always lead to relationship problems. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! ❤️😃
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Excellent chapter! The guys are feeling a bit guilty for enjoying Henri’s amazing seafood dishes. They’re afraid that Boris may be offended by their reactions to Henri’s cooking. Fortunately Henri was able to reassure them both that they can love more than one chefs cooking. He used art as a reference which they clearly understood. The invitation to Makarovia and Boston for Henri will lead to an understanding between Boris and Henri. I’m certain that Boris was fully briefed about Henri and his abilities on board the Duchess. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! ❤️😃
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Outstanding chapter! The guys are experiencing the local dance club when they meet newlyweds on their honeymoon from America and are enjoying their evening, when a drunken American women fills the role of the “ugly American tourist.” Both sets of newlyweds were embarraced by the appearance of this woman who epitomized every thing wrong with the prototypical American tourists with plenty of money and absolutely no understanding of the local experiences and traditions. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
