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Excellent chapter! Matty’s debut as a back up quarterback went amazingly well. His first autograph goes to a bullied teen who is inspired by he and Eddie. Nate has matured so much. The separation becomes more lengthy and more difficult. Lots of temptations. Are they strong enough to resist? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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.Outstanding chapter! Eddie has the empathy necessary to be able to help youth and the compassion needed to guide them into discovering their inner strength to discover their own path to confidence and happiness. The fact that he got an assist from Matty was just icing on the cake. The death of Donald’s mother is sad and adds a new wrinkle to their relationship. Being apart for their college careers will bring new and complicated issues to bear on their relationship. We’ll definitely have to hope that they will get through their trials without destroying their very special relationship. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! The relationship between Henri and the Prince’s seems to be strengthening, they love the genuine joy and dedication to excellence that Henri places on each and every meal that he prepares. Henri admires and appreciates the laidback non pretentious people the Prince’s are and the absolute joy they receive from eating the meals that he prepares. Athens gives the honeymooners ancient sites to see, a delightful lunch with Capriano the waiter who aids them in escaping the paparazzi with the help of the police. The dance club Big and it’s really big bear of an owner sounds like fun. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding story! This was a truly enjoyable short story with dynamic characters and lots of emotional moments. You are always so talented at having us feel and experience every nuance of the characters emotions and the dramatic moments of their lives. Thank you for another wonderful story. 😡❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Kastan and Jihan have met for the second time and Kastan announced that he owed Jihan a favor for saving his son’s life. He also invited Jihan to come meet Rashan at their home. Hopefully the next meeting between them won’t end at the point of a sword. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Jihan has saved Rashan from injury or even death which should help him survive the encounter with Kastan in the future. I’m enjoying the foundations of the story and the characters you are laying out, albeit painfully slowly. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! There’s quite a bit going on behind the scenes. The emperor is plotting, Rashan has a secret wish, and there’s no shortage of intrigue at court. This has all the ingredients of one of your amazing, twisting, turning and surprise filled novels. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! You’ve jumped in and captured our attention with intrigue, bravery, treachery and.... I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Eddie’s perfectly suited for the position of youth minister. He learned more than those he was teaching through their experiences. He learned that he was a terrible older brother because he was a typical bully. This character flaw was pointed out by Nate, but was prefaced with the statement “I want everyone to know that my brother is my hero. I love my brother more than anyone else in my family. But it wasn’t always like that.” Eddie upon personal reflection realized just how badly he treated Nate. He apologized but Nate said get over it Eddie, I have! I really love Nate and hope that he’ll appear regularly. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! ❤️😃
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Outstanding chapter! The trip to London was typical for teen aged males. Consensual relations between the couple and a third person are very often exciting and fulfilling. Problems usually develop when a bit of fun turns into the third wheel of the relationship. In my 29th year of marriage to my husband we have enjoyed a playmate on a few occasions. We only had difficulties whenever lust and sexual release were confused with emotional attachment. Someone in the triple person relationship always feels left out or ignored. A weekend tryst with three willing partners does not always lead to relationship problems. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! ❤️😃
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Excellent chapter! The guys are feeling a bit guilty for enjoying Henri’s amazing seafood dishes. They’re afraid that Boris may be offended by their reactions to Henri’s cooking. Fortunately Henri was able to reassure them both that they can love more than one chefs cooking. He used art as a reference which they clearly understood. The invitation to Makarovia and Boston for Henri will lead to an understanding between Boris and Henri. I’m certain that Boris was fully briefed about Henri and his abilities on board the Duchess. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! ❤️😃
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Outstanding chapter! The guys are experiencing the local dance club when they meet newlyweds on their honeymoon from America and are enjoying their evening, when a drunken American women fills the role of the “ugly American tourist.” Both sets of newlyweds were embarraced by the appearance of this woman who epitomized every thing wrong with the prototypical American tourists with plenty of money and absolutely no understanding of the local experiences and traditions. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Touring Corfu, doing a little shopping and dining in a cafe the guys are definitely enjoying their honeymoon. There’s a little concern that they’re becoming a little bit lazy. It will be interesting to see how nightlife is different from their other visits. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Finishing High School is Mostly Woke
flesco commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Finishing High School is Mostly Woke
Excellent chapter! An outstanding ending to this amazing story. I really enjoyed the depth and emotions that your characters contained. I’m definitely looking forward to the next book in this series. Thank you for a truly excellent adventure, living the lives you’ve created. 👏😃❤️ -
Excellent chapter! The interaction between Henri and our honeymooning Prince’s is very amusing and torturous for those of us who are watching what we eat. I personally don’t care about fonts, spelling, formatting or internet browsers. What I do care about is the story, characters and the ability to create emotional reactions and depth. Please keep doing what you love to do and don’t worry about the criticism given in these forums. Most of us couldn’t create what you have. We are grateful for the opportunity to share the vision that you have with each and every word that you create. Thank you! 👏 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! The visit to Montenegro was hostile from a mayor of Podorica who only quoted from the Bible, and a reporter whose questions were also based on the Bible. The mayor listened to the answers that the Prince’s gave in response. The people of Montenegro are split based on religious traditions and teachings, but may begin the slow process of realization that prejudice and intolerance are contrary to all religious traditions. Change is a tortuously slow process to start, but eventually takes tremendous leaps forward. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Alex being the commander of the Fort should not have waited for a month to search the rooms of the new arrivals. He’s given Bastion plenty of time to plan for when he was caught. In addition to being a murderer he’s a traitor to the entire human race. Kelly is also a part of the conspiracy and I wouldn’t be at all surprised that the general is also. Bastion and Kelly should be summarily executed for their heinous crimes. There’s simply not enough resources nor personnel to ensure that they both will remain secured. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 🤬❤️
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Excellent chapter! The cruise to Montenegro is going very well, the stop in Podgorica should prove interesting as the Prince’s shine a light on human rights and tolerance for the LGBTQ+ community. What could possibly go wrong? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! They toured parts of Venice, rode in a gondola and got to see the damage from the constant flooding. Such a beautiful and historic place that is virtually doomed due to its poor location and political inaction. The flooding grows worse each decade. The projects being constructed may be too little too late. Yuri and Boris will miss their charges. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! The Grandduchessa yacht will be quite the experience for the newlyweds. Touring Venice and sailing to Greece will be heavenly for the guys, I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! The wedding, coronation and reception are completed. Now the honeymoon begins for the newlyweds in Italy. Helga is suffering morning sickness and could be pregnant. Olek is really happy and Helga Is worried about being an unwed mother. I’m certain that the people of Makarovia will be so excited about the pregnancy and wedding that the order won’t be an issue. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! The reception is being enjoyed by everyone. Its very sad that the hardliner terrorist group launched a missle at Makarovia but missed hitting a town in Turkey. The honeymoon is being altered as a result of a leak. I’m very certain that wherever the newlyweds go for their honeymoon They will only have eyes for each other. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Hooray! They are finally married! Let the celebrations begin and let the people show how happy they are about this marriage and coronation. I’m certain that the traditions for the reception are not quite as formal as the wedding ceremonies. Thankfully the attack didn’t occur during the wedding and coronation ceremonies, hopefully they can get through the reception safely and without incidents. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Matty and Eddie’s discussion about Matty’s inheritance was remarkably mature and well thought out. Their meeting with Eddie’s dad was even more enlightened than he was expecting. The tour of the Appalachian State campus led Matty to file a letter of intent to attend the school. Eddie’s meeting with Dr. Hodges of the Sociology Department was the biggest surprise when he told him that he should attend seminary and wrote down several suggestions for him to check out. Eddie was definitely surprised by the pastor recommendation especially after Matty made It also. Eddie on his way back to meet Matty, thought about the recommendations and began to see that this was the correct path for him to follow. Most people get a degree in social sciences before transferring to a seminary. I think that they both could be happy together at this university. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Each new chapter is a small step closer to the ceremonies and celebrations. Eric, I’m sorry to read that you were injured. I sincerely hope that you are well on your way to a full recovery. Please take care of yourself. No one wants to see one of our favorite writers laid up and unable to write. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! After you’ve gotten yourself healthy. 😃❤️
