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Outstanding chapter! The onset of illnesses inside the secure complex after the rescue is suspect and casts those who were rescued under suspicion. The arrival of the next group of refugees and the General demanding that they relinquish their weapons is also dangerous. The conversation between Fort Walker and General Forsythe leads us to believe that the leadership group is losing control and could be overrun at any time. Alex should re-evaluate giving away their weaponry and be suspicious of the leadership’s motivations. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
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Excellent chapter! The levels of security surrounding Matan and Yonatan are what you would expect for celebrities or the super rich. The unexpected meeting with Yonatan’s parents added another piece to the puzzle that is their lives. The anger of Herbert over not being informed about the meeting with the Chief Rabbi. The extensive meeting and his request for a second meeting and three pieces of Matan’s birthday cake just added even more intrigue and will most likely lead to the trip to Vienna that Yonatan’s mother was warning them about. I really have absolutely no idea where this story is going, however, I am enjoying the mysterious journey you’ve sent us on. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! The new country house with an amazing garden for them all together for peace,safety and security to allow them all to process their issues and hopefully be able to let the past drift safely to where it belongs with the help of their therapists. Aria cooking, Amara creating a new album, Paris fashion week, and new talks of future children bode well for them in their future. Rhidian looks like a good match for Jay. Drew will definitely read Juliana’s letter to best decide whether the twins should read it’s contents or burn it. Hopefully this will allow the boys to place their insane childhood behind them, secure in the knowledge that she can’t bother them again. , I really sad,that this story is coming to an end, you’ve created wonderful characters and an inspiring story with twists and turns and drama. I’m hoping that you’ll continue their saga into a second book. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! The closeness between Amara and Drew is beneficial to them both since they each suffer from PTSD. I’m sure that Aria is also suffering from the same. Their Doctor’s will hopefully be able to treat them separately and together since the new triple relationship will add additional stresses and difficulties. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
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Excellent chapter! Jimbo is starting to become the negotiator that he is expected to become, the trouble with Toby was unexpected and was quickly stopped. Black may not have been able to stop Toby even when slightly distracted by Tim. The Paris trip will certainly add more stress, but may prove to be an inspiration to Yonatan on how the future could unfold and give hints into their shared destiny. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Holly’s birthday celebration was amazing, she was so very happy and grateful for all of the gifts that she received. The competition between Ryan and Noah for Holly’s attention is very obvious and could turn really ugly. The adults are going to have to be ready to intercede at any moment to prevent a serious fight between brothers. Unfortunately reason and rational behavior are lacking when testosterone and competition for romance is involved. The stories that they’re reading to the younger boys is a terrific way to encourage reading for the rest of their lives. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! The newest members of the extended family all enjoyed the over the top family celebration of Independence Day. I fondly remember family gatherings around holidays with good food and comfortable surroundings. Thank you for reminding me of a simpler and more profoundly caring period in my life. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Welcome back! I’ve missed these characters! I sincerely hope that you’re feeling better! This was a great chapter and I love that the children have given George a nickname of Red. Lucian is going to have to prove that he’s serious about helping find George. The rescue team will need to watch him closely. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Amazing chapter! The discussion between Leon and his closest friends was tense, angry, hurt and sadness all rolled into one overwhelming emotional outburst which placed all of the blame onto Logan’s shoulders. Leon went to great lengths to protect his future husband from more difficult reactions especially from Petr. Riku got right up into Petr’s face in defense of the decisions made by Logan to protect Leon from the assassination attempts. Logan and Dax hovering outside the door eavesdropping was quite funny and Logan realized how protective Leon was being to take most of the blame for those decisions. He finally became aware of how deeply Leon’s love for him went. Petr settled for Logan’s word that he’d never keep them out of the loop again. It’ll take some time but he will definitely forgive the deception Logan played on him. Anselm said the most amazing statement “That’s really cool, i did it to protect Leon, and I’d do it again. You’re making me want one.” I’m sad that this amazing journey is coming to an end, however, I will hold onto hope that you will revisit these simply amazing characters again. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Awesome chapter! Logan declared that he’s in love with Leon. We discovered a secret passageway between Castle Arguro and the Royal Palace with a pair of red rail-carts. I think that would be really cool to have, so you can move secretly between both locations securely. Leon is becoming Crown Prince, and there’s a Royal Wedding in the near future. Constantin and Isaak are arrested for their crimes. Gia and hopefully Grace are recovering from being shot. The conversations between Leon and his closest friends will be difficult, but after the initial shock of being lied to wears off, I believe that they will be understanding and forgiving. Petr will likely hold this over poor Logan’s head until the wedding. Queen Amathea’s decision to tell Isaak that Kleopas would be Crown Prince was a mistake that she will live with forever. Leon took her confession with grace. You’ve wrapped up most of the intrigue and I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! The drama has begun a little later than normal, I really don’t like the Asshat! I’m fairly certain that Dad will be unhappy that Eddie didn’t feel comfortable telling him about being Boyfriends with Matty. However, I know that Dad will be supportive and let both boys know that they are loved. The girls and their other friends will circle the wagons, so to speak, and offer their support and backup against the bigots and homophobes. Mom will be ready to castrate the Asshat! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
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The Weekend Before the Storm
flesco commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Weekend Before the Storm
Excellent chapter! You never forget the first weekend together. The nervousness, the fumbling and most importantly the unbridled ecstasy of discovering love, sex and joy with your lover. Those experiences and discoveries are priceless. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! ❤️😃 -
Excellent chapter! The newest members of the family seem to be settling into their new lives with no difficulties. They are definitely completely integrated into this amazing family. The new puppies are a big hit with everyone. The younger boys are learning how to care for and train them as well as play with them. I am a little concerned about the relationship between Elliot and Ian. They’ve been apart for quite a while and there’s always temptation at any university. I really hope that I’m wrong since they are such a cute and caring couple. I’m definitely looking forward to their reunion in the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excruciating chapter! I’ve been binge reading this story for several days and really enjoyed the story and characters. There’s depth to each character, flaws and all. The story had many twists and turns to keep the readers interested. I understand why you have ended the story the way you did, and it’s probably the most realistic ending based on this worlds hatred of anyone who is truly different from everyone else. Intolerance and hatred are the tools used to keep control over the masses. GA usually tends more toward the HEA endings which provides escape and entertainment in a decidedly hostile world. Excellent story telling! Thank you!😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Drew is accepting of the security suggestions that Jeff has made and he’s realizing that he can’t be Aria’s bodyguard any longer because he’s too closely involved to be objective. New guards will take time to get used to, but they are absolutely necessary. The wake up together with both twins was amazing and heartfelt. They’ve begun to settle into their new relationship and are so much happier for it. Jays commentary about things rising were especially funny. The twins rules about giving Jay ammunition to use against them seems like they were learned from experience. Ceriann and Drew’s relationship has improved dramatically and looks like it will become much stronger in the future. Mam will be ecstatic when she’s able to visit the Villa. The erratic pace of the boys lives in the future will definitely be trying for Drew, but with their support he will come through perfectly. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Jimbo is making progress in dealing with the abuse of his childhood, he’s learning about accepting praise and being grateful for it without fear of being beaten. His difficulties with learning Hebrew are natural, all languages are overwhelming when you are first starting to learn them. The sudden changes in Mr. Jennings outlook on money and costs is a little bit concerning. The friendships that they are making are very much adding normalcy to an eccentric lifestyle. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! The puppies have arrived and the entire family is happy to have them. The comments about having to clean up after the puppies is classic child education and shock that they are responsible for playing with, feeding them both, making sure that they have plenty of clean and clear water, as well as taking them out for walks and letting them do their business and cleaning up after they are finished even in winter when it’s raining or snowing. Holly, Hayden and Hunter are becoming aware of how lucky they were that their mother made such amazing arrangements for them. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Trenton is clearly not used to being involved in a committed relationship, he’s seriously overreacting to the business card from an unannounced 16 year old who is seriously spoiled. Trenton hasn’t spoken to his husband since snapping at him rudely and sending him to pickup the luggage of the spoiled rich kid. Travis is definitely going to corner Trenton and let him know that his behavior has become rude and self centered. Trenton will need to learn how to be involved with another human being. He’s been alone and self supporting his whole life. There’s hope that Travis will have the patience to show him what loving,caring and being supportive of your spouse. Trenton’s father certainly seems incapable of discussing his plans with his only son, one surprise after another. The caretakers son seems to be completely taken with Xander. It will be interesting to see how all of these characters and issues play out. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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An Unexpected Consideration
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in An Unexpected Consideration
Excellent chapter! The family is finally getting a pair of puppies for the boys to have fun with and to teach them about responsibility. Pets have been long overdue in the Currie home. Ryan’s trip to see Owen and then returning home with him will be pleasant for both close friends. Ryan is truly bisexual since he’s currently pursuing Holly but is fine having sex with Owen as well. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
Outstanding chapter! Lady Jane finally comes through for the twins with a spectacular gift of the Villa Britannia. She’s just made it back onto my good list. The Villa is private and secure and will give them all a chance to recover and regain their happiness while being pampered. Drew was a little bit abrupt with Aria about security and obviously scared him deeply. He’s still holding onto the delusion that he can be their bodyguard as well as their husband. I’m afraid that Jeff will have to set him straight about how to handle security for the future. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Amazing chapter! The plot and its perpetrators is unraveling quickly and they are unaware that the authorities are closely monitoring their activities. Isaak will be imprisoned for the murder of his wife and Constantine will be tried for assassination and treason to the Crown. I’m sure that an executioner is going to carry out his sentence alongside the other conspirators. I’m fairly certain that Gia isn’t involved. The plan that will be revealed in the next chapter should prevent the assassination of the Queen while catching the balance of the conspirators in the act. Petr is shocked by the post that Leon made, but is tactically aware enough not to let anyone know. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! The ruse of Prince Leon’s assassination is going to be difficult for his friends to forgive, however, when the conspirators are all rounded up, and the truth of who in the Royal Family is behind the murders of Prince Kleopas and his wife as well as the assassination attempts on Prince Leon will show that their really was no other way to stop this horrific plot. The knowledge that the Queen herself approved the plan will help placate Leon’s friends over their lying to them all and when she announces that Leon is the Crown Prince. Petr will make Logan suffer for his deceit, but will relent when the Royal Wedding is announced. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Danny and Brandon’s birthday trip for Fathers Day was really special for them. We now know that Noah and Holly are attracted to each other. The conversation between Noah and his Dads was embarrassing for Noah but a trip down memory lane for all of us who’ve been with you on this incredible journey remembering Danny and Brandon’s first time with Josh helping them with the care only a loving parent can provide. Josh started them down the road to taking the Hotel forward into the future. It’s been quite a trip, but we’d not have missed a single moment. I’m hoping that you’ll continue this amazing story and cast of characters long into the future. I’m sorry for getting a bit maudlin, but you’re one of the best Authors I have ever read. Thanks for reminding us why we’ve followed this story for so long. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapters! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Holly and Noah’s visits to the clinic are giving them both a real look at their future careers. Noah’s new car will give him the ability to get to and from university. The new SUV that Dion and Trey purchased will simplify the transportation needs of the family. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! The Commodore and cadets were happy to get a tour of Aquaria and then an invitation for a 3 day cruise. The public tours went well despite the overwhelming crowds. Travis’ appearance can’t be a good omen. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
