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    Chapter 19

    Outstanding Chapter! Wow I feel like I just ran a marathon. The intensity, action and drama have really been amped up. The complexities and dynamics of this story and it’s characters are mind boggling. I am unsure if the Archangels are trustworthy, their plans within plans while being completely blind to what the enemy is actually doing is suspicious. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  2. Outstanding chapter! Yuri the self appointed Tsar of Russia is delusional, self absorbed and homicidal. He’s apparently planning to ensure that he becomes king of the world by administering the freedom from disease benefits to all of the people. It’s a nice thought but he’s a monster and his rule would make Stalin look like a saint. The team is up against a madman who has extensive military training and unlimited resources. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  3. Outstanding chapter! More birthdays, more haunted house preparations and a small wrinkle of tonsillitis affecting Wyatt. The fact that there’s a pediatrician in the house certainly helps. The twins visit with Julie was nice when they were telling her about their birthday party and their gift of laptops for each for doing their homework and research. Julie is more assured of the rightness of her decision with each week that passes. Her children are all doing well and are well adjusted to their new family better than she ever hoped for. The trip to see Noah at Penn State should be nice. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Ghouls and Wizards

    Excellent chapter! Lots of haunted house discussions and a serious disagreement over who got to wear the new masks. More birthdays and parties, the Harry Potter party was a major hit with the younger boys and their friends. The adults put together a really imaginative set of props, gifts and a very well thought out game that tied everyone into every part of the party. Hayden and Hunter were really enthusiastic about the books that their new fathers are reading to them nightly. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    September Birthdays

    Outstanding chapter! Schools are back in session, most of the birthdays have happened and now it’s time to get the haunted house updated and ready for tours. Another moment of normalcy in a unique and very special family. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 18

    Outstanding chapter! The battle between the enemy and the order has escalated in Australia and Canada. Trenton Ashmore the leader in Australia was extremely powerful with an amulet that was given to him by the master gathering power from music which was provided by a Nephilim. Luke is actively interfering on earth and the Archangels seem unable to see what he’s doing. The war is growing fiercer with more casualties. The death toll in the battle of Australia was overwhelming and the team is suffering from the cost of killing so many. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️
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    Protocols

    Outstanding chapter! Yonatan and Matan were remarkably calm during their morning ablutions. The showed courage and maturity beyond their years when speaking to Herbert and Judy. The discussion at dinner about Max during the nazi occupation were very sad at the loss of his beloved Hans. After dinner Yonatan showed his diplomacy skills when he discussed the foundations and there ongoing purposes. He fitted all of their friends and associates into different jobs within the foundations. His pointed conversation with Ayal led to Yonatan offering Ayal the position of executive of family holdings. Yonatan is growing more confident and sure of his choices. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Below Ground

    Excellent chapter! They’re in the thick of it now. A vampire tzar certainly would be a horrible idea for the entire world. Devon’s bad feeling turned out to be the trap that John led them into. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️
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    Chapter 17

    Excellent chapter! major Harrison aka asshat and his boss general Forsythe are in for a rude awakening when asshat gets back to Kelvedon Hatch. Finn has jumped right in and is willing to be fourth in command. The funeral for George was sad but touching when Alex spoke at the gravesite. Noah answering Alex’s direct question about being boyfriends with a yes, you’re the man of my dreams was long overdue. They didn’t have time to react to the statement when they were called back to the quarantine ward finding Nate becoming conscious and Toby being hugged by Mac. I sincerely hope that Toby has come out of his coma along with Nate, not that he’s passed away. I really don’t like cliffhangers, but I know that you live for them. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️
  10. A truly amazing story with dynamic characters and plenty of twists and turns which will have the readers living through the emotional turmoil of the characters. I sincerely recommend this story! 😃❤️
  11. Amazing chapter! Simply Amazing, Nate recorded Matty’s promposal on his phone and it went viral. He’s definitely not the twerp any longer. This family is definitely in for a wild ride now that Good Morning America wants to interview them live in New York. There’s going to be an amazing amount of support from the public and unfortunately a severe backlash from the self righteous right wing evangelical churches and their fanatical supporters. This could turn very ugly very fast in today’s polarized world. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 17

    Outstanding chapter! The team got a welcome break from the stress and war. They were able to strengthen their bodies and bonds to prepare themselves for the next battle to come. When they released their grandparents from the lockets they were able to determine through Bill’s avatar who was behind their betrayal and the Nephilim executed the traitor and began the hunt for his fellow conspirators. The war is going on around the team and they’ve now met the evil one who still believes that he can use them for his evil plans. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 16

    Excellent chapter! The master’s been identified. The war has included the first innocent death amongst the friends, family and associates related to the team. Greg was a good guy that didn’t deserve to be killed, and now Tony the owner of the gym where Brad used to work out is the victim of the master’s plan to make everyone the team knows or knew suffer painfully. My guess is that the evil one will take out the master prior to his defeat to prevent the curse being broken. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
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    Chapter 15

    Outstanding chapter! Loy and Rick were the latest couple to face the master, the level of evil used to try and trap them was horrifying. All of those innocent animals sacrificed is appalling. The master lost again and I truly enjoyed Lane’s choice of song announcing that the team had arrived to stop the attack on Loy and Rick and that he’d lost again. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
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    Many Plans

    Excellent chapter! The twins were telling their mother that they and Holly had been offered adoption and she told them that she knew and was very happy for them. Ryan’s birthday request is something every teenage boy wants on his 16th birthday. The new and improved haunted house is well underway. Lots of birthdays in the next few weeks. Danny’s treatment of the twins having trouble with their homework and wanting someone else do it for them, was handled perfectly and then after the chapter was read, he advised them that they would need to complete their homework earlier especially if they were having problems or they would not get to have a chapter read to them that night. Brandon advised them all not to test them because the boys would lose. Danny & Brandon and Dion & Trey learned from the best on how to raise boys. Josh was and is a genius on dealing with boys and teenagers. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  16. Outstanding chapter! The visit to the lake house for spring break was beneficial for all four boys. They had the opportunity to explore and enjoy their new relationships and experiment with each other. Eddie’s conversation with his father, then the conversation with Donald was touching in that he’s thinking more about someone else rather than himself. Unfortunately most District Attorney officials don’t take the opinions of the victims into consideration about charges and sentencing. The only hope Donald has is Eddie’s victim impact statement to the court. Judges are the only ones who have the limited ability to decide on sentences that don’t have minimum sentencing guidelines. I’m not certain whether Eddie will be successful in trying to have the charges lessened.Donald does have mitigating circumstances which might be very helpful in getting his charges reduced. He’s living his life as a Christian and is taking forgiveness seriously. Yes, Donald needs to be punished, but does he deserve a life sentence for being an abused teenager driven to violence by his father? Clearly probation is not appropriate, there must be prison time to show that he committed a very serious crime, however he should be provided with counseling and rehabilitation services to hopefully change the course of his life. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Forcing Our Hands

    Outstanding chapter! The entire rescue team has finally arrived and as they are preparing the plan, John goes into the stronghold on his own because his patience ran out. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 14

    Outstanding chapter! The ordeal for Bryan and Lane ended successfully, Lane sacrificing himself to save Bryan was heartbreaking. Thankfully the Archangel Uriel was unable to take Lane’s soul to heaven due to the fact that his soul wasn’t complete. The Archangels admitted that they were their grandparents. The master is in trouble with the dark one. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 13

    Excellent chapter! The final awakening ceremony along with the confrontation between Michael and Ken was powerful and enlightening. The slip by Michael that they are family wasn’t picked up by anyone yet. The trees being seedlings of the tree of life are providing security and safety for the couples. Taliesin’s trap for Bryan and Lane will hopefully backfire and he’ll suffer the righteous wrath of Lane. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️
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    Chapter 12

    Amazing chapter! Simply Amazing the team has graduated to the next level and has begun to fight the difficult war against the evil enemy. The Nephilim were wary at first by the power that Brad and Ken wield, but were impressed when Brad offered to let them merge with them to see they were no threat. The rescue of Kevin and Bill, the chance encounter with Greg, the discovery of runes on various buildings that influence depression and sadness in people, and the battle between the enemy responding to the destruction of these runes, led to one of the enemies leadership being cleaned of every trace of evil has sent a very powerful message. You made me cry with the chance that Greg got to say goodbye to his beloved pet Ely. The character development and continuous twists and turns in the story line is amazing. Thank you for another chapter in an amazing story! 😃❤️
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    Vienna

    Amazing chapter! Yonatan and Matan were taken on a wild ride of familial history, financial seizures, property, artwork holdings, patents and foundations that have been dormant for more than 75 years. The amounts given were overwhelming to both. They went to the Synagogue in Vienna without announcing their plans in advance, but were met with gunfire in an assassination attempt outside and along the route back to the airport. The traitors are part of a very small group and they will be uncovered by Mr Green and suffer accordingly. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    A New Academic Year

    Excellent chapter! The trip to visit Holly allowed Danny and Brandon to meet and understand who Dawn is and to make certain that Holly’s safe and well cared for while attending college. The Johnstown Flood Museum and the Johnstown Inclined Plane sound like amazing places to visit full of historical and engineering educational technology. Ryan’s separation from Holly and Noah should allow the overwhelming crush to subside and he’ll find another to focus his attentions on. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter and your decision on CHNG Book 4. 😃❤️
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    We Are An Army

    Outstanding chapter! Welcome back! I’m hoping that Dorian misses you and yours and does minimal damage. The rescue has begun and the team is ready to proceed in Russia. John is taking George’s kidnapping hard and is frustrated by the pace the rescue is progressing. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    The Order

    A really interesting story with dynamic characters and many twists and turns. You’ll be entertained and intrigued at the same time!
  25. Outstanding chapter! The family is suffering the effects of empty nest syndrome, the fact that they still have young kids will make it easier. Danny and Brandon are feeling it the most, but I’m sure that Josh will be able to offer advice on how to deal with the loss. I have really enjoyed every chapter in every book to date and emphatically encourage you to continue with CHNG4. Thanks Bill! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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