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  1. flesco

    Brothers

    Outstanding chapter! Tension rules the Price household. Artie knows that he’s hurting the very family that he’s always wanted. He’s arguing with Adam and Dizzy without clearly being aware of why this relationship with Ezra is so very important to him. He’s very aware that he’s causing them pain and stress. The baseball practice with Ezra was more boot camp than practice with more than a few comments about a lack of faith and morality in the Bay Area. He’s trying to get Artie to come back to Texas where Baseball is still practiced in the correct ways, so he’s offered to have Artie attend a baseball camp without speaking with Adam about this plan. Artie is slowly becoming aware of who and what Ezra is. Dizzy’s very frustrated with Artie’s inability to see the signs of evil in his father. The scale is starting to tip back toward Adam. I only hope that he realizes how much damage this relationship is causing everyone around him. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter 😡❤️
  2. Excellent chapter! The funeral, burial and reception went well for Matty being surrounded by the Hamilton family and friends who love and support him made the very difficult process more bearable. The closeness of Eddie’s love and compassion were the balm that he needed most. After the reading of the will Matty’s officially a member of the Hamilton family, plus his father left him a substantial financial portfolio. He shouldn’t have any concerns about financial issues. His father took the easiest path for him out of the overwhelming pain that he was suffering. This was certainly not the best decision he could have made with regard to his son’s emotional well-being, however, he wasn’t able to imagine a life without his wife. Suicide is a very short sighted decision. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
  3. Outstanding chapter! The family trip to New York was hugely successful. The reunion between Matty and his father was a positive first step forward. Their first day back to school was mostly positive. The unexpected sudden death of Matty’s father has opened the door to Matty permanently staying with the Hamilton family where he will receive the emotional support and comfort that he’s going to need to get through this latest loss of his only remaining family. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
  4. Outstanding chapter! Jake and Alex are finally getting to the point where they are comfortable enough with each other to go to the common showers in the school locker room and remove their clothing. Jake doesn’t want to leave the shelter without Alex and their other friends. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter. 😃❤️
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    The Wall

    I unfortunately fell behind in this captvatig tale and am working on catching up!
  6. Excellent chapter! Ezra has begun his campaign, he is definitely working with the grandparents. He’s gathering information and once he has enough then They’ll sue for custody stating that Artie’s living in an unsuitable home with a guardian who is corrupting the morals of a naive child. Once they bring suit back in Texas and win then Artie will be placed in a conversion therapy program to cure the evil. Artie and Adam need to be very careful with Ezra. Dizzy and Mason may be the ones best suited to seeing the plot unfolding. Hopefully Sarah’s phone call will help Artie to see all of the signs warning him. Adam isn’t aware of their conversations. He’s really got to pay very close attention. The emotional depth and complexities of these characters has created a profound bond with your readers. Thank you Ace for an amazing story that I sincerely hope will go on for a very long time. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 🤬❤️
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    The Wall

    Outstanding chapter! The emotional turmoil is having a profound affect on everyone, Artie’s torn between wanting to have a relationship with his biological father and causing Adam pain and anguish that he’s not enough; Dizzy’s afraid of how Ezra’s going to affect his relationship with Artie and he wants to protect him from rejection and pain; Mason’s concerned about the stress of the reappearance of Ezra and the relationship between Artie and Adam being damaging, he also is concerned about the potential problems for Artie if the father turns out to be on a mission to destroy Adam and Artie’s relationship to regain custody. Ezra’s turning up accidentally at the park on Artie’s way home screams STALKER! He’s clearly up to something. What that might be, I’m not sure. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  8. Excellent chapter! Alex finally confessed to Jeremy. Jeremy’s mother has apologized and asked him to forgive her for her treatment of him after coming out. Jeremy forgave Alex with the request of seeking counseling for his addiction, and he thanked Zara for apologizing but asked for time to heal from the pain she inflicted with her reaction to his announcement. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  9. Outstanding chapter! Brandon calling Jeremy to ask if he could help with the fire is suspicious based on the history. Zara showing up just as Alex had to leave for work is an unknown, and Liz saving Alex at the betting sports bar was well timed. She made it clear that he’s out of control and can’t win the money for Jeremy and the bakery by gambling. She also advised that he needs to tell Jeremy about his addiction and stop lying to him. Hopefully this will snap him back to reality. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️
  10. Excellent chapter! Poor Jeremy, he just can’t catch a break. Alex really needs to work on becoming more responsible and truthful. His gambling addiction is still hovering over him and he needs to let it go once and for all. The two of them need to work together to make their dreams come true. Alex should start working with Jeremy to help him with the bakery and their relationship. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
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    Chapter 37

    Outstanding chapter! The plot continues and the culprits are being questioned and identified by some of the best intelligence collectors on the planet. The next part of the conspiracy will take place quickly before those who have been captured are identified and the individuals, agencies or countries are exposed. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 🤭❤️
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    Chapter 36

    Excellent chapter! Four imposters dressed as U.S. Air Force personnel caught upstairs in Peter and Eric’s suite is frightening to imagine what they were doing and how many others were involved. Another step closer to the ceremonies. Security is clearly being tightened even more than it has been. I’m worried that there’s more going on than anyone is aware of yet. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 🤭❤️
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    Chapter 35

    Outstanding chapter! Extremely tight security at the Palace, reporter’s everywhere trying to get the interview breaking many rules and laws in the process, and the guy’s are going a little stir crazy without any type of control or say in the process. These types of Royal ceremonies are extremely structured and rooted in ancient traditions with little to no wiggle room. They are very close to the end of the ordeal and they should begin to return to normalcy. The zealots that want to stop the wedding and coronation are almost certainly going to stage some sort of attack just before or during the ceremonies. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 34

    Outstanding chapter! The wedding is getting closer and I cannot wait much longer! I know that patience is a virtue that unfortunately is in short supply where these characters are concerned. I will wait, but it’s getting harder. Thank you Eric for another great chapter. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 33

    Terrific chapter! Touring the joint military base in Eric’s red mustang was a nice surprise and they got to see the green houses were built and producing showing the viability of Eric’s idea. Eric’s nervousness over the approval of the Makarovian people is causing amusement to the Royal family. He’s stressing himself out for no reason. Everyone knows how popular he’s become with the people of Makarovia. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 32

    Excellent chapter! Peter, Eric, Yuri and Boris enjoyed their tour of the Stryian underground and were amazed at how many changes had been made. The renovations around the palace are moving at a very fast pace, as well as adding a hotel is a brilliant plan. It’s nice that Eric’s grandmother will be giving him to Peter and Makarovia during the wedding and Coronation. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️
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    Chapter 31

    Outstanding chapter! There’s an informant operating inside the inner circle passing information. The attack in London was a very close call. Who ever is behind the attacks isn’t likely to give up. With finals ending Peter and Eric will be returning to the Palace. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  18. Outstanding chapter! Christmas and New Year’s celebrations were very traditional and included Julie and Alice. I’m certain that the extra time that Holly, Hayden and Hunter got to spend with their mother will help them all deal with their grief and loss. I know that they will look back at those happy family traditions and will be happy. This has been a truly amazing book by an Author of impeccable talent. I have enjoyed every book in the series and have lost myself sometimes in such a happy and caring place that many of us got to experience. Unconditional love and support in a family is extraordinarily rare. Thank you Bill for helping with an escape from reality. I’m definitely looking forward to the next Book! 😢❤️
  19. Excellent chapter! A very moving adoption ceremony and celebration followed immediately by another family Thanksgiving celebration. The surprise of Julie being at dinner was very well received by her children and everyone present. This family has consistently maintained their traditions through two generations of honor, honesty, compassion and caring. Their moral compass has been inspirational for many. I sincerely hope that they will continue their journeys into the future, I would be devastated if they were gone from so many lives. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  20. Outstanding chapter! Julie’s recovery is progressing to include Thanksgiving dinner with her children and the Currie family. The mall shopping trip was exactly what the children needed to help them make up their minds on what to put onto their Christmas wish list. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    A Lot Going On

    Excellent chapter! The haunted house was a major success as always. It’s a little sad that Noah’s in college for his birthday but he’ll be home for Thanksgiving soon and can celebrate then. Julie’s pneumonia diagnoses thanks to Danny’s being observant led to hospitalization might be very difficult for her to recover from. Hopefully she will recover quickly for her children’s sake. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
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    Spooktacular Fun

    Outstanding chapter! The haunted house is a very long standing tradition for the Currie family. The entire town comes to go through and experience the fright. Thanks for another wonderful opportunity to live in the life experiences of this family! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 30

    Amazing! Simply Amazing story! The book was really incredible, with a unique premise, an amazing cast of characters with a depth normally not found in online sites. The emotions throughout the book had me feeling what the characters were: happy, sad, angry, elated and devastated. The story takes the reader on an emotional roller coaster while hooking them into reading each and every chapter one after the other. I’m truly impressed with the artistry of your ability to tell an inspiring story and to create such a cast of characters with real personalities and emotions. This should be considered a novel. The author should be proud of themselves for their creative genius. Thank you for taking me along with you into this amazing universe you’ve created! I would sincerely hope that you will publish sequels to keep these characters I’m definitely going to miss alive. 😃❤️
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    Chapter 13

    Outstanding chapter! Hyun is letting Raphael know that he’s wanting to stay and explore their new relationship. The photograph from the cave is about to open an uncomfortable conversation with Raphael’s father. Lucian has gone on the offensive and Raphael will need to figure out what his next move will be. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 13

    Outstanding chapter! Hyun is letting Raphael know that he’s wanting to stay and explore their new relationship. The photograph from the cave is about to open an uncomfortable conversation with Raphael’s father. Lucian has gone on the offensive and Raphael will need to figure out what his next move will be. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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