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Everything posted by drpaladin
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Most cash in circulation does have those traces.
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Men are not machines regardless of the extensive training they receive and too often we demand the impossible from those serving in the military. This gives us a view into how service animals aid those suffering from PTSD. I found it fascinating how these subtle interactions mollified stress so effectively. Amidst this we have a burgeoning romance between two damaged men. Well crafted and told.
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Does this mean the supposed and ephemeral mystery person will be skulking about in a '55 Chevy?
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Polymaths have made lasting contributions to humanity. The ideas of Aristotle, Leonardo di Vinci, Thomas Jefferson, and Nikola Tesla still influence our lives today.
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Oh, it's there. You just can't see it.
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flounce - Word of the Day - Wed Oct 25, 2023
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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You're both the Daisy and Huckleberry for us, Gary.
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Oh, I'm not disputing it, just curious how two divergent narratives could still be around after over a hundred years.
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I was a bit surprised Sebastian was so willing to believe the poisoning was the sole cause of Caleb's actions. Now we know Caleb didn't get all of Asa's abilities, but can channel power to him. I hope this doesn't take too much of a toll on Asa. Healing all the hybrids will take a long time. This is a big step for Asa. He's kept his ability a secret for so long and now he's trusting it to virtual strangers.
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Captain Richard Roberts, the commander of Astor's yacht 'Noma', said that apart from some slight discolouration by water, Astor's features were mostly unharmed; Gerald Ross, an electrician on the Mackay-Bennett, reported that Astor's "face was swollen, one jaw was injured." Astor was buried in Trinity Church Cemetery in Manhattan, New York City. (His DNA was matched to that of his first son Vincent and second son John Jacob 'Jakey' born to his surviving widow Madeleine Astor, four months after Titanic sank. Trace DNA also matched to his grandson William Backhouse Aston III, (Jakey's son). It's odd the info I saw, more than one source, openly said he was never found.
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flounce - Word of the Day - Wed Oct 25, 2023
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
It can also be moving in a way to draw attention. An actor might try to upstage another by flouncing across the stage during the other's lines. -
Neither are such an unpleasant death comparatively speaking. His body was never recovered, but they found his jacket and pocket watch. He was likely wearing a beaver fur felt hat as well. The Titanic was a tragedy which struck many lives. Most of those who died were third class passengers. Is there anyone who doesn't believe he could have used his position to secure himself a place in a lifeboat as Bruce Ismay did?
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Quill and parchment?
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As long as you don’t use it to make a fire and then try to stomp it out.
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He told me after the fact and the bridge was owned by him.
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It's apt while we're reading a period piece. It reminds me of some of the odd sounding lines from Tombstone like "You're a daisy if you do" or "I'm your huckleberry." According to accounts, these phrases or a version of them were spoken by Doc Holliday.
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I joked in the last chapter the shaman's answer might be 'The Great Spirit works in mysterious ways' and lo and behold we have a version of it. I'm not being critical as it's as good an explanation as any. A friend of mine would have to blow up beaver dams on some of his land every year or so. One year he was telling the sheriff he needed to buy some dynamite for the dams. "No need to do that. I've got something better." He gave him some blocks of C4. Not having used it before, he used four blocks. It wrecked the heck out of the dam, but there was a bridge next to it which was no longer there when the smoke cleared. I was already chuckling before he finished because I guessed the ending. This was an interesting chapter. I wonder what comes next. How long has Mac been there?
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It does raise the question of where Jubal hid his money. He has learned his lesson about keeping it in his saddlebags.
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Adga and her group greatly impressed Sir Lenti, something I suspect is very hard to do. He must see great promise in Vyrex to gift him and insist on his return. His recounting of the legend the Earl was following ties in nicely with Prince Xavier and the Sands of Time.
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It wouldn't have been a major concern for most because there would be little to steal other than food. Most robberies were on travelers or banks because they knew money was there. I've had friends say they never locked doors when they were growing up, while I was taught to always lock them. At night my mother would lock herself in her suite of rooms and I'd do the same in mine across the hall.
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Even in town where he's known? In such a small place it would stretch credulity. Consider his actions. This isn't a feeling or speculation on his part. He KNEW Jubal still had the gold.
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There are still some unknowns here. How did Prescott know Jubal still had the gold and hadn't put it in the bank? It indicates he still has at least one accomplice in Bearpaw, and a well placed one at that. We only know they aren't related because he said the dead cousins were the last of his family.
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If Lucas doesn't lose too much blood, he was lucky where the shot hit and it was a clean exit. Lucas was about to make a confession, but this will surely put it on a long term hold. I don't recall them having a root cellar, maybe they need one. They sure need some locking doors and perhaps a good dog.
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So sorry about Sky, Gary. This chapter was a masterful rollercoaster.
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quartz - Word of the Day - Mon Oct 23, 2023
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Purple quartz is known by another name, amethyst.
