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I hope Cowboy does testify , to set the record straight and show the defendants he wasn’t too cowered the first time round.
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Fasha being immortal , short of being immaterialised by a Fedain, ties in with the demon physiology , yet he appears to have patience and control over their innate rapacious nature. Perhaps once human and a colleague of Grimm, Veil , Neredos and Prism who actively managed to become more demonic in nature . If Salidar is concerned of the compromise of his safehole, and bearing in mind that he must anticipate that Maxthane may try to stop him , wouldn’t he simply go for the other pillars? I fear that just focusing on the pillars of the original plan is shortsighted ! I hope Maxthane finds some allies , possibly Styx and co?
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Paul is a poisonous little git , I hope that if anything traumatic happens to him , he is afforded the same courtesy he so obligingly shows in this chapter. Devin’s reaction and anger are a cause for concern, I hope his alleged love for his brother stays any rash action he may contemplate . Seems the Lynch family , brother and sister are going to be a force to rely on in the near future.
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Communication , communication and then communication , but then again the communication like the trust and ultimately the dynamic of the relationship takes time . Sometimes it’s a little like tiptoeing in quicksand .
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Don’t tell! Just started the new chapter . Thank you for an extremely engaging story.
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Oh I’m aware, and before the context later became clear ( was revealed) , there was an impression that Chris was keeping Greg in line by keeping him deprived of his cooked meals and personal interaction. Truth be told both parties started out captive and victim to the terms of the will , with Chris further being subjected to Greg’s threats of ruin.
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It’s good to see the tensions disappear and for Chris and Greg to stop co-existing in one another’s space , and start living together .
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Greg’s about face in attitude is surprising , sort of Stockholm Syndrome(ish) .
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Gregory is getting over confident ... never a good thing.
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Damn , just when Chris had justified his worth ... well a glass ceiling has been breached and it’s generally a short trip to the next one . Gregory appears to regret his violence towards Chris, albeit silently that is !
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Well now Gregory knows precisely where he orbits in Christopher’s universe ! Going to be tough reconciling this knowledge with , what I think is , a deeply repressed attraction to Christopher. Can’t wait to meet the mysterious Kathleen and the children , she seems to have quite the sway over the men!
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Oh Gregory , poor Gregory ! There’s still a Will to read! Christopher and The Montgomery’s have a long and interesting road ahead , I fear .
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Mr Montgomery is often right , it seems. It’s becoming clearer and clearer why Basil couldn’t possibly be a good fit, Mr Montgomery doesn’t fit into a box .
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Although Christopher has landed in the pound seats ... can’t shake the feeling that Mr Montgomery’s horizons are looking a little brighter too!
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Gregory didn’t react to his brothers being told first... did he miss it ? Christopher seems to have made friends of all the important persons in Mr Montgomery’s retinue.
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Christopher seems to have met his match ... precious little fazes Mr Montgomery ! Is Basil aware of his immanent departure??
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Sometimes ones just in the right place , at the right time ... looking like someone else!
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Four very different characters , looks like this may be quite a riotous assembly.
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A sad , but promising beginning!
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Not only Ollie is maturing , Ryder is too , turning down the party invite , apologizing to Brandon and confiding his Messiah plans to Ollie. It almost seems it too good to be true !
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Serendipitous, Carleson May just have his witness. It so often boils down to who you know!
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A great future for Billy and Frank. Econmerce suits them .
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Mr C bringing in his attorney is just right , perhaps they need to drop a hint that a short press conference is going to be held about the negligent handling of sensitive evidence by the police . Press and Police are two ‘p’s ‘ usually not comfortable in the same pod.
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Kohen didn’t hear that the Captain doesn’t believe he’s attracted to the Captain , he assumed it was just because of his past. An in depth sit down conversation is required. Proper communication !
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A Push in the Right Direction
deville commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in A Push in the Right Direction
The holiday is healing the Haners and Ryder and Oliver had picked up on this , he’s aware , maybe consciously for the first time , that his family was quite brocken before. Not telling him about the final Messiah album , is probably not a good idea , he takes things quite literally.
