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Simon took a brave step, and landed amongst people who might be friends. That is a wonderful thing to see.
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This looks awesome. And the name wins with me...
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This is a beautiful chapter. You show each one finding a vacant spot on his heart, and while there is sadness in these absences, there is warmth and love radiating from the places they left behind.
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Family is made from beautiful traditions like these. Your story is lovely. Thank you for it.
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Temptation and Ignorance
Parker Owens commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Temptation and Ignorance
I’m very glad these interested you. You’re right, there’s a lot going on in these, and I can only hope that wasn’t too distracting. Thanks so much for reading, and for your responses. -
Temptation and Ignorance
Parker Owens commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Temptation and Ignorance
You are immensely kind in reading these, and in your response. Ignorance is not bliss, as you so artfully point out. Thank you for your words, too. -
Temptation and Ignorance
Parker Owens commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Temptation and Ignorance
And hugs back, squared. Thanks for reading these. -
A Morning at the Beach, In the Warm Sun
Parker Owens commented on Drew Payne's story chapter in A Morning at the Beach, In the Warm Sun
The tragedy of Hal’s shortened life strikes home in this tale. One wishes for hope, for healing, but these things ultimately elude Hal as he dies on the beach he loves. -
Temptation and Ignorance
Parker Owens commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Temptation and Ignorance
Thank you, my friend, for helping me turn these into readable sonnets. I struggled much more with Ignorance than with Temptation. Perhaps that still shows - that, or how easily I can be tempted. I’m very, very grateful for your help with these. -
Temptation and Ignorance
Parker Owens commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Temptation and Ignorance
I’m okay; and very sorry to have caused you any worry. I’ve been reflecting on what’s past, and on difficulties grappled with - and on dear friends like you who held out hands in support. Thank you - xxoo -
Temptation Sad poison did I take, though it looked sweet, a serpent’s rod the eye and heart beguiled; and fool enough was I to heed the cheat for when I bit the apple, oh, it smiled. Its evil on my soul and body worked dispersing through each organ, bone and limb, so absence of its flavor ever irked, yet no amount would fill me to the brim. And though its rancid taste appalls the tongue, no toxic pleasure soothing to my
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I feel so much for Jeremy. At the same time, I’m glad he told Mason, who seems to have made a decision Jeremy didn’t expect. Jeremy hints at the isolation he’s experienced, which clearly hurts in your telling. He’s not alone.
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Well, I’m still in the dark. I shall have to think more on it...
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Great chapter; I live to see Chipper planning to help out Aslan in New York. That’s how he makes friends for life. And then to see Bryce and Zion again, that’s an additional treat! Thank you.
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The interplay with Jeremy and Mason is fascinating. You let us observe their mutual attraction, and the rising tension between them. Clearly there is more to be learned about Jeremy, and I hope he doesn’t break Mason’s heart. In the meantime, Clay and Greg are making one another’s hearts glad indeed.
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Simon ought to have unburdened himself to his mum and Niki. Silence was not golden, I fear. This was a good chapter, but it fills me with foreboding.
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Thank you for the privilege of traveling your way with you. I feel cold wind and rain without shelter as we wait, and sense the path shifting beneath my feet as we walk. And I also sense your hope with you, especially in recalling the pink pony. Thanks again.
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I delighted in Keyer’s return, and in his release of the souls trapped in the walks. I delighted still more in his reunion with Stravor, and in Stravor’s constant belief in their lives together. You crafted a marvelous final chapter!
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Wonderful chapter. My only regret is that we didn’t get to know Aslan well enough before he exited the stage.Chipper’s song selection was gutsy, given its iconic nature.
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This a difficult chapter. How can people who say they love their children do the kinds of things you describe? Yet we know it happens, and far too often. It’s enough to make me weep.
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I loved this Silverwolf tale, and am very glad this isn’t the last one. I’ll be waiting when the next one comes along. Thank you for this one.
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So the Squad in the form of Ethan came to the rescue for Christina. And that moves easily into quality legal representation for Chipper. Good thinking. You contrast that forethought with his liaison with Bliss - which seemed to need no thought at all - very well.
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Dirty Laundry and Weather
Parker Owens commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Dirty Laundry and Weather
Thank you for your comment on Facing Morning. That’s the best face anyone put on those lines. As for Dirty Laundry, it’s indeed a state of being. I’m glad Im not the only one who can be tracked by the trail of odd socks left behind. I’m very grateful for your comments, and especially that you read these. -
This chapter is immense, a marvel. It was such a wonder to read first thing this morning, and then again during a break at work. I know I will read it again later today. You have wrought as great a triumph as Stravor and Keter, as Dayson and Stravor the Elder have themselves. Thank you.
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Not sure if this treasure from the garden counts...
