I quite agree with your reaction to Nate, Thorn. He’s actually feeling. Guilt about Kent, delight and anticipation over Tad... One wonders how much he notices that change, and what he makes of it.
For what it’s worth, here are a few of my favorites... but only a few, as I have too many to bore everyone with.
I could double or triple the length of this post...
I enjoyed this chapter. High school party introductions can be incredibly embarrassing. You’ve certainly made that happen here. And the embarrassment is going to linger, isn’t it?
I want to offer you a hug as you write about the heart we hide and try to protect. These are two strong currents of the heart, desire and self-defense.
Oh, boy. The deceits spread out like roots of weeds in the garden. And as they grow, they get harder and harder to dislodge. Ian had better make his connection with the dream boy soon before he skips all of his classes.
This is a hard story to read, but a really good one. I enjoyed it, because love endured. Eli chose forgiveness, but that must have been immensely difficult.
That’s a great take on the unwelcome guest theme. Your completely oblivious guest needs to feel the threat to move along. Wonder if he’ll be speaking to the sister again?
I appreciated how well you introduced us to these characters. We have a pretty good idea about Nate, and are growing into knowing about Christopher, Tad and Kent.