I want to offer you a hug as you write about the heart we hide and try to protect. These are two strong currents of the heart, desire and self-defense.
Oh, boy. The deceits spread out like roots of weeds in the garden. And as they grow, they get harder and harder to dislodge. Ian had better make his connection with the dream boy soon before he skips all of his classes.
This is a hard story to read, but a really good one. I enjoyed it, because love endured. Eli chose forgiveness, but that must have been immensely difficult.
That’s a great take on the unwelcome guest theme. Your completely oblivious guest needs to feel the threat to move along. Wonder if he’ll be speaking to the sister again?
I appreciated how well you introduced us to these characters. We have a pretty good idea about Nate, and are growing into knowing about Christopher, Tad and Kent.
This story is thought provoking and challenging. It’s something I’ll read over and again, as it provides another perspective on how god and creation interact.
I hurt for you, and weep for the pain you endured. I might have been cheered by a happy ending, but you did right to show us something more real and true. I can hope for Chris now, and that’s enough.