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At least James’ grandfather is training him and teaching him how to do more with his powers without hurting himself. Now James shows his grandfather the spell that Caleb wants to use to take James power so that he can escape the people who are making him a slave.
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Cadet First Class • II
Butcher56 commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet First Class • II
I like the way that Ritch put the new cadet in order when they got off the bus and formed up. I remember the first day of my basic training and the way the DI’s were. If anyone was doing something wrong they were on them like flies on manure. He wasn’t going to let the new cadet get away with not following orders from the very beginning because that would set him up for failure and the possibility of being removed from the academy. As far as your question about what Ritch is planning, I think it’s something to do with the opening of the Colorado Springs branch of the Heroes Haven for homeless vets. I think it’s great that Ritch is helping to establish a branch of the organization for veterans who are homeless. -
I see that James’ grandparents found his attacker and proceeded to take care of him. I hope Lee realized that he had done the wrong thing to the wrong person before he lost his life. I hope that when and if James learns that his attacker is dead it’ll take a great deal of stress from him worrying if he’ll be attacked again.
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At last James told his parents about his powers, he and his dad had a nice talk about it. Peter asked him why he didn’t tell them sooner. James said that he couldn’t just walk into their bedroom and say that he had a dream about the rape and then he was flying, Peter said that was true that it would have been hard to do it. James’ grandparents are using the tracker to find the man who raped him. I hope he can find the man so that he pays for what he did to James.
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I wonder what the situation is that they have to get Davey out of school and into safety. The way it sounds is that the school is on lockdown because of the threat against Davey or whatever it is. I can’t wait to read the next chapter to see what is going on and how they found out where Davey is.
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I like the way that Davey put Mr Bitner in his place by pushing the security button on his panic alarm, Major Kowalski comes in and tells Mr Bitner that he keeps his backpack with him at all times. If he’s not able to do that then the Air Force will go to the superintendent and make arrangements for him to get removed from his position as principal of the high school. To me it seems like the power went to Mr Bitner’s head because he seems to think he’s got all the power over anything that goes on in his school with the students.
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The covering on his face came off when he changed into the wind blob. That’s what Caleb and Tasha were staring at in the warehouse. I hope Hideyoshi is able to help James tell his parents about the power’s.
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I was under the same impression that it was David Sr that had died, but now that I think about it Davey’s whole attitude about it was so passé that it couldn’t have been his dad’s funeral. The way that they were getting along with each other it didn’t make sense to me that it was his dad. I’m surprised that his mom is saying the things she is after learning about the time travel experiment and that’s the need for the security and everything else. For her to blame Davey for his dad being where he was able to get shot was out of his control, he didn’t tell his dad to go confront the protester and get shot. I think the meeting with Margaret Thatcher went well. I hope that at some point Davey and Brian can get together again and get to where they were before.
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I have to say I have really enjoyed reading this story about the first time Davey went back in time to begin his life from the age of 12 onward. The way that he and Brian meet and then become friends and then best friends and finally to boyfriends. The way that they face the trials that they become involved in and yet they stay together. I think it’s great that they decide to abstain from anal sex until they’re older which is great as well as the fact that they remain faithful to one another instead of being like most teenagers and going from partner to partner. They both do a lot of growing up in this story as well along with their other friends. I intend to come back and reading this story again and try to find things I might’ve missed the first time reading it.
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James had to put a stop to the fighting between Tasha and Caleb so he could ask them about the reason he asked them to meet him in the first place. He wants to tell his parents about his powers, Caleb said don’t tell them Tasha says maybe he should. Then she tells him that she can call this guy she’s staying with to give him the advice he’s looking for. I think when she handed him the phone he recognized his grandfather’s voice.
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As if Davey hasn’t been through enough for a few lifetimes he has to see his own dad shot twice. I hope that he’ll be ok after this, I know that he and Davey didn’t get along in the first life nor his do over, although they’ve been doing a lot better this time I just hate to see that cut short by the senseless act of a man who thinks he is better than God.
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I’m sorry but in my opinion I think this whole situation is getting out of hand and not because of Davey or Brian either. I hope Davey comes up with a great plan to get these protestors out of their lives once and for all, then they might be able to get back to being regular high school students.
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What’s normal for these two boys, things are always changing around them. Especially when Davey is a very special national secret, that only so many people know about.
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Davey’s mom surprised me as well and she is gaining favor with me for standing up for Davey. The new caseworker and the family he’s going to be with albeit temporarily should be removed from the system altogether because of their actions towards Davey. I hope Davey and Brian can make the school board meeting tomorrow night and then they can meet with the reporter and tell him their story. Davey’s dad is going to be getting a lot of stuff handed to him that he’s not even ready for.
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I feel bad for Davey because he’s just trying to live as normal a second childhood as he can and things just keep coming out and he has to say something about it because he’ll get to the point where he is going to be a very hard man to live with.
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I was going to reread the sequel to this story until I figured out that it was a sequel. I can’t wait to see how much things change for Davey in this “Do Over” since this is the first time he’s done the whole time travel experiment that’s only supposed to be for 20 minutes.
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Phillip is going to have to be on his guard while at the meeting with Karl and Carlos at Mystic Pizza. They won’t be the only ones there as Farmer is having someone else there to see who they are meeting with.
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This was quite a great story. The way that Jimmy is brought in to the area is to find a rabid wolf that’s killing people, he was promised by the alpha that once this problem was over he would become a member of the pack. That didn’t happen and then Jimmy meets Sawyer and they become mates which pissed Fergus off so he tried to have Sawyer killed when that didn’t work out he went after his ex wife and his mother that’s when he found out that he wasn’t as smart as he thought he was. I’m glad that they have all become a pack of their own along with Doris and Fergus’s twin boys since they’re the only survivors of the original pack. Now Jimmy is the Alpha wolf.
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I hope they get pinched before they can get away. I have a feeling that Doug is going to be getting put in the care of the state when he’s found because of his home situation with his mom being a drunk. I hope that when Phillip meets with Karl and Carlos at the pizza place that they don’t blame him for the supposed death of Chuck Farmer.
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The President’s plan to get the most at risk people in the country to voluntarily submit to testing to see if they carry the AIDS virus and if so they will be locked up some where. The testing itself is a violation of their Constitutional Rights as citizens of the country. How will Davey explain to his friends who have heard him say Mr President without violating a federal mandate on keeping him from harm?
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I’m glad that Casper, James and Tasha are safe for the most part. They’re going to have to get involved with the parents and grandparents to fight the elves and then try to fix things again. I also wonder if Bex has powers as well. James keeps trying to hide his powers from his family but I think he needs to be honest with them and tell them that he has powers and what they are. Great story by the way, it seems to get more interesting with each new chapter.
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At least Casper is going to be safe now because he’ll be at James house with his family. I hope they get to the Game Stop soon before the one called father gets there.
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Team Building, Detective Work and Fieldcraft
Butcher56 commented on JamesSavik's story chapter in Team Building, Detective Work and Fieldcraft
Tyrone broke his deal with the DA and the police by telling the coach that he was going to be raided tonight all because he felt something for him. I think it’s great that Phillip is getting a cell phone for each of the boys on the swim team and he’s getting them new suits to wear when they go to the regionals and then the nationals as well as swim jocks. -
Davey proved to the bully that he was one who wouldn’t take his bullying. Even after the altercation in the P.E. showers he and his buddies tried to get him only the coach put them in their place. Only after the coach paired them up to wrestle each other did Darnell think he was the king again after he won the match on points only because of not being able to pin Davey.
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So James father knows that Casper has ran away from home and is out there somewhere without a place to go that’s safe and has food fit to eat. I don’t know what he plans to do with his phone especially since he’s already said he was going to break his phone so he couldn’t be found.
