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I’m glad that JJ is settling in and will hopefully be getting a job soon so he can start making his own way. I’m glad he was able to help Henry with his math homework even though he already knew what he was doing and like JJ he’s not being challenged enough by it even though advanced algebra is the highest math they offer in the middle school.
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I’m glad that Adam met Larry and Greg because of him running over the broken glass and messing up his tires, tubes and rims for his bike. Of course he had to pay for new rims, tires and tubes and thought he was going to have to pay for them to be installed on his bike but he lucked out on that. By staying with Larry and Greg for the weekend and then going back to the bike shop on Monday to help fix his bike with Larry, Adam was able to do most of the work himself so he didn’t have to pay for the labor, he actually only paid for the new parts and not the shipping for the rims due to a mistake that Larry made.
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I just started reading the story and I’m surprised that he has already had to get his bike repaired and replace the rack and saddle bags he just bought along with his clothes, toiletries, and sleeping bag. He’s going through money like water and he better start conserving it before he runs out of it, I don’t think he could have made a lot of money from tutoring although it would depend on how many students he had and how much he was paid for each course he tutored them in.
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I think the suspect is playing some kind of game with the police now that they’ve figured out some of her methods and the fact that she’s female. The only way to really stop this is to arrest her and put her in jail. I like the story and the way it is written, although drsawzall said it best in that life isn’t as tidy.
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I believe that Charlie maybe under some kind of control from his new friend, either that or he really doesn’t want to leave it behind and return home. Even though James has all of his powers he has something else that is stronger than his powers, and that’s his compassion for his friends and family. A great example of that is the package that he gave to Lewis to give to Charlie to remind him of what home is. I hope that he decides to come home and stay home with his mom and work on repairing his friendship with James, although I don’t think that will take much time at all.
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I agree there are too many things to consider to say for sure that the suspect is a woman who speaks German or comes from a country that does. It just seems to much like a disguise like drsawzall said. The Nerf darts are a distraction that the suspect is using trying to throw the police off the trail of trying to find out who it is that’s darting and tattooing these students.
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I’m glad that the Gentlemen's Club is growing and is now not just a sexual club but one of friendships as well. I think it’s newest members are going to be great to have as friends instead of being afraid of them.
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It seems like they keep coming up with more questions than answers as to where the drugs are coming from that the shooter is using to knock out his victims before tattooing them. Although they might be on to something in this chapter that they hadn’t thought of before and that’s that drugs have to be destroyed by a licensed company and the shooter could have gotten them from there if he was doing an internship or something to do with his degree in pharmacy.
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It seems like every female who sees Deme falls head over heels in love with him, at least the teenage ones. Shane’s got nothing to worry about with Deme and the other students at the school because he only has one love and that’s Shane. I think I understand how Shane feels like he almost needs to put an invisible barrier around Deme to keep the vultures away but I don’t think it’ll be needed. I’m interested to see how Deme does once he starts to attend the school since it’s so much different than he’s used to especially since he told Shane that his school back home was smaller.
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I think it’s great that Ethan and Drew are talking to each other and telling how they feel about their relationship. It’s going to be difficult for them but I think it’ll work out for them as they move through it. The more people they have behind them rooting for them to succeed the better they’ll be in the long run.
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A Pohogwe Dinner in Denmark
Butcher56 commented on R. Eric's story chapter in A Pohogwe Dinner in Denmark
It seems that the dinner was a great success to David’s credit. His guests seemed to be very impressed by the meal, the waiter was very good at his job as well by describing each dish as he brought it out to be served. David paid him the best compliment by telling him that he was a natural showman, to which Dan replied that it would be boring if he just brought out the food and said here’s the food go ahead and eat it. I think I have an idea who Mads is talking about when he said that a young woman was asking questions about David. -
Interesting beginning to the story, I can’t wait to see where it goes from here.
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Will has a wicked side to him yet, he’s not only fixing the problem with Patrick, he’s also fixing Johnny’s housing problem as well as putting one over on the Falco family. By using Stef and JP as judges there should be no more animosity between Patrick and Johnny after they go through with the mock trial. Being related to Stef has rubbed off on Will because he definitely has the right stuff for business deals.
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To me Jackie is a bit delusional but I also believe that the hair that was left in the sink can be tested to verify it is Charlie’s. If it is they have solid evidence that he is alive and they can start trying to find him so they can bring him home for good this time. The relationship between James and Casper is getting better again. James is a bit of an attention whore in the fact that he likes to be noticed by people. Where Casper is more of a behind the scenes type of person in that he’s not really good with all the attention like James. At least that’s how I see it.
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I think Tommy is having trouble understanding what’s happening to him right now, he doesn’t quite understand that Sang is trying to save his life. I hope that it happens soon before Tommy dies from blood loss. I can’t wait to read more of the story as you post future chapters.
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Yes welcome back it’s been a while since we’ve had a chapter from you. I understand that research takes time and this chapter shows that you took it seriously as always. Thor seems to have Vincent and David over a barrel because every time he doesn’t get the attention he thinks he’s needing he lets them know and then they play with him and he’s happy again. I’m looking forward to reading about the dishes that David helps the lady’s prepare using the Pohogwe methods of cooking and their recipes that he has brought from home.
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It doesn’t take long for some moms to figure things out like that. From the sounds of it she’ll probably be alright with Shane and Deme dating not that everyone else would be especially since Shane’s sister has a crush on Deme. Shane’s got a bad case of the love bug and it shows when he goes back to his room to change clothes before he meets Deme so they can ride to school together.
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I agree that the signal would have already been sent out before Garjah found Essell on Ardra. The Kardoval are playing nice but yet they’re being very deceptive at the same time, almost like they think Essell is leading the humans to their planet. I think that’s a ridiculous idea especially since he hasn’t even asked to contact anyone from his government or his parents. Essell is trying to learn everything he can about his new life and people especially since he’s now a part of Garjah.
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Chapter 152 The Perfect Pitch
Butcher56 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 152 The Perfect Pitch
I’m wondering what the good reverend is up to, with his being so nice to Robbie and saying that he could convince Stephanie’s parents to put the baby up for adoption as it would be for the best interest of the baby. I hope that Alex will follow up and stay in school and do what he needs to do in order to graduate. I can only imagine what it will happen when Don finds out that Robbie is going to Nathan’s and not to Connor’s like he said he was. Two weeks more of seeing Jo and then Robbie is done with that we’ll see how he does afterwards. -
I have to say that I didn’t expect this to end up this way. I’m glad that Brandon and Dane are going to make it work for them as Dane goes through his transformation from female to male. I think Brandon talking to Orson and Patrick about his feelings about the situation helped him wrap his head around it all and remember that he truly loves Dane with all his heart and he showed that when they came to turn in the key to the cabin when they were leaving and he told Greg that Dane was his husband not his wife.
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I think it’s going to be a great weekend for everyone especially the kids.
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I will say that for a child Chet is a very smart young man and he’s been through a lot in his life and developed a thick skin. It’s sad that any child should have to have a thick skin just to get away from the hurtful things people say about them or their parents such as Chet having two dads. What business is it of anyone’s whether or not he has two dads or not, or anything thing else for that matter? The way I see it is if you don’t live there and they’re not being hurt then it’s not your business to say anything about their living situation.
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I’m glad that Harry and Gus are now going to be boyfriends. Their parents aren’t against them being together because they both seem to be happier now that they’re friends after they met the first time they were at the campground.
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Chapter 151 Plain Sailing
Butcher56 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 151 Plain Sailing
I’m wondering what Don’s ulterior motives are with buying the boat and wanting Daniel and Robbie to learn to sail it as well. He seems to be acting very nice around Robbie all of a sudden and he’s not like that at all, I guess I’m waiting for the proverbial shoe to drop when Don finally finds out that Robbie is going with Nathan again and not Connor. -
It’s about time that Sturgis got taken off her perch and a complete investigation into Security Concepts LLC. The judge didn’t do anything like Emily Sturgis thought he would which would have made her a lot of money just for sending eight boys to Georgia when it was requested for them to go to foster care. I hope that when it’s all done these boys will have a better life ahead of them instead of what they had before this happened.
