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With everything in place and the plan set up, Sturgis is going to be getting her just rewards inside a 6 ft x 9 ft cell. I hope she doesn’t go to a cushy federal prison she needs to suffer from everything she has done. Then the next victim will be the juvenile court judge who will be srrested and charged with several crimes committed by him and Sturgis by the sentencing of juvenile offenders and putting them in private prison or treatment centers and getting kick backs from the companies who run these places. All the while it’s costing the state more money than they have to pay for these programs that the kids are sent to.
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I’m sorry that Brian had to have such a father who only cared about what the community thought about him. I don’t think the community would have cared if Brian would have lived with his friend and lover and if they held hands while walking down the street or not. I’m sorry that he only saw one way to stop the fights with his father and carried it out, if his father had actually been a better man he would have been supportive of him and not putting him down all the time.
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Leave it to Will to get back at the copilot who tried to play a joke on the guest pilot. I think he’ll have a lot of groveling to do if he intends to keep his job because Stef doesn’t like games like he pulled when the safety of his family is at stake, in fact no one in the family appreciate practical jokes like that. As Canuk said it was pretty juvenile. I hope that Will goes back to Sydney soon and hooks up with Connie again.
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Carson has a long trip ahead of him as he is going from Canada to Southern Australia. I’m looking forward to reading about his trip to Australia and then back to Canada to continue with his university studies. Great start to the new story.
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The Wisdom of Scotty Cross
Butcher56 commented on JamesSavik's story chapter in The Wisdom of Scotty Cross
It’s a very sad situation for these boys who the victims in this mess. It’s going to be hard at first but I think time will help to heal the boys and their moms. I’m glad that Phillip said that when they have to go see a therapist that he would go with them because he was in a situation like theirs when he was their age. -
One thing I can never understand is why does everyone in a small town get involved in everyone else’s business. I’ve heard rumors about these things when I was staying with a friend who had a small farm and I was helping him with the hay bailing. Someone had done something stupid and they wound up moving away to stop everyone else from telling him that he had done something that he shouldn’t have done, he knew he had done something wrong and he tried to explain that he was facing the consequences of his actions and he didn’t need everyone else in the area to keep telling him that he had done wrong. I later heard that he had taken his own life because he couldn’t escape the whole town getting involved with his business dealing with the problems he had done, I know he did it because he and I were friends and I knew him and his family including his parents and siblings. I saw his mom a few months after he had moved away and she told me that he had committed suicide after he kept getting threatening letters and hateful phone calls from the people in the town. It’s sad that people can’t mind their own business.
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I couldn’t say anything different than chris191070 did. I hope that Stacy Scott gets the story out very quickly and then the state government will see that Sturgis has her own agenda and doesn’t really care about the kids that go through her department.
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All in all I hope that they can keep their promise to not try to make the world a better place. No more time travel at all this was it, they got help from the Australians who helped them rescue Brian from a Russian work camp where he was about dead from pneumonia because he wasn’t important enough to get the antibiotics he needed to get well. I think they had him confused with Trevor when his interrogators told him he was the son of Soviet dissidents raised in the United States and sent to spy on them. I’m glad that they all got away and returned to the past in order to save Brian, now there’s going to be a lot of explaining to do and some serious battles ahead when Davey’s parents find out about him and Brian being gay and in a relationship that has gone on for many years and over several timelines as well. I wish them a lot of luck with their new lives and hopefully they will get to have their sons and then grandchildren again.
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This was a great story to read. I’m glad that Myles is out of the hospital and is doing better, I think the trip they went on helped both of them to forget about the troubles they had been through. The report and photos from the trip is quite large at 3,728 pages. The trip also confirmed for Myles that farming is what he wants to do.
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Either someone doesn’t like Mitchell or his new employee Myles the reason I say this is because the problems didn’t start until Mitchell hired Myles and he moved into the cottage. First Myles is assaulted and his scooter was damaged then while he’s in the hospital recovering from his injuries the cottage was set on fire along with a brush fire. Mitchell finds some livestock had been shot as well as the fence between his farm and the vineyard part of the property had been cut and sloppily put back together, he found shell casings as well as tire tracks leading to the fence from the vineyard. He also found that the lady who was hired to be his housekeeper had attempted to get access to his laptop computer. All that was sent to the police.
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Phillip and the boys have done something very special for the eight boys who are in jail. Even though it was arranged through the trust that they get these items it is still special because they included an item that wasn’t on the list as well as a card that said “Hang in There” with a picture of a kitten holding onto the end of a rope. I’m sure that they all appreciate the gifts that they got in the form of clothing and the cards signed by all of the boys.
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It seems like everything is going well for Brian, Davey, Brandon, Sean, Trevor and Todd. They’re all attending ASU and doing what they hope will be the best opportunity for them due to the fact that Brian came back in time and made a few changes for the better, it could have been a lot worse for Davey and Brian if he hadn’t come back and made the changes he had. I think his best decision was when he realized that he was dating Marcie and he was being walked all over by her and then he took it upon himself to get to be friends with Davey and see where it went from there.
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I’m glad that Davey has made friends with Brian again even though they weren’t really friends when they were freshman. Davey needs all the friends he can get right now with him having to work as well as go to school, Brian is thinking of what their lives were like in the timeline he just came from. They had built a great life together and they had two boys and they married and had their own children as well. Dave Sr did something very stupid but he came back to California and turned himself into the police and has been paying the price for his actions. It makes it tough for Davey who’s having to try to support the family by working and paying for his sisters therapy sessions. I’m glad that Brian’s parents are as kind as they are and are willing to help Davey any way they can.
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James might be getting through to the spirit by being nice and trying to communicate with it. He was able to find out that it’s not of the earth and couldn’t get back. James started showing it images of animals of earth after giving it some hot cocoa which it likes. Cody points out that the rain stopped after James had started talking to it about where it was from and then showing it the animal images.
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It’s great that we can get more of the Camp Refuge and it’s characters. I think Harry found himself while at the campground, I think his parents made the right decision to go to the campground. It seems that once he started hanging out with Gus he figured out that he is really gay, and when he and his family leave at the end of the week to go home he finally breaks down and tells them that he’s gay. I’m guessing that he was in denial about his orientation and thought his parents would not like him for being gay. His parents have been trying to tell him that they are going to love him no matter who he decides to bring home with him as his significant other. Thank you for the new story.
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Poor Robbie, he’s finally getting on Don’s good side and he doesn’t like it. I’d say Robbie has a lot of thinking to do about the situation with Stephanie and her family after finding out that he’s possibly the father of her unborn child. Don doesn’t like Robbie being with Nathan because of who he is and how he is. He was fine being Daniel’s friend until Robbie came to live with them and they started dating.
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I think it’s great that everyone is trying to get Sandy to open her eyes and ears and see and hear what they say about Sean. I agree with drpaladin that Sean’s parents are not being the best parents for him, I think they’re just driving a bigger wedge between them by having him committed to these so called treatment centers. I hope that Sandy will stop and listen to everything she’s been told about Sean because he needs to have friends who won’t judge him for being gay. I’m glad that the guys apologized to him about the trash can incident their freshman year of school, and the way they have been hanging around him and doing the things they do for fun is helping him out quite a bit. I hope that child services gets called in for Sean and they send Ms Hacker out instead of Mrs Flores because Mary Lou would listen to Sean and do whats best for him not the other way around.
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Poor Davey has to go straighten out his dad after his mom gets served with papers saying that his dad was suing her for half the money from the lottery winnings. If Brian wasn’t there I don’t think it would have been an easy time of dealing with his dad but he stopped him long enough to get him to think about what he was going to say. It’s not Sandy’s fault that David’s legal bills are the way they are and Bev’s medical bills causing his mom to take out a second mortgage in order to pay these bills. If Bev was hit by the cement truck and severely disabled because she wasn’t wearing her seatbelt shouldn’t the company be paying her bills instead of the family? David Sr screwed up big time and now he’s going and doing a lot of things to appease his mom and not thinking about what it’s going to do to his wife and children especially with Sandy just getting out of the hospital herself very recently after having surgery on her spine to fix the hump so she could breathe again and not struggle for her each breath. I hope that Davey will take the opportunity to stay in school and be a kid again without having to be the sole supporter for the family even if he thinks he has to be. David Sr doesn’t understand that Davey has been paying for Jenny to go to counseling after being molested by her father.
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I can relate to Addy wanting to know what cancer is, the first time I heard about it was when I was told that my dad was going to die from it. I then saw it first hand when my mother in law found out that she had a form of cancer only she went into remission for five years and then when it came back it was too late to get her any type of treatment, chemotherapy just made her sicker. Cancer is one of the most difficult to treat people for as was the case for the aunt in the story.
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With the money that Sandy just won in the lotto Davey may not have to work as they’ll probably get the house in Modesto now instead of the one in Ceres. I’m sure that Brian had remembered the numbers for the drawing and had his mom buy the ticket for Sandy. I hope this doesn’t come back and cause problems with him and Davey. Especially since he may not have to work now after all, because the only person in his family that was thinking about Davey was Pete because he didn’t think it was right for Sandy and Monta to be putting him in the situation of having to work to support them.
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James is causing himself a lot of trouble, I think Cody just wants a friend and James isn’t making it easy. Sure James caught the monster in the lake and saved Cody in the process but it seems like he’s trying to be more than he is.
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Great chapter in the continuing story of Mitch and Tony. I’m glad that Alik is doing well with his studies and learning American English, possibly Italian as well. I’m glad that Tony is doing well right now.
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I think this is a desperate try to get Brian back going out with her, after all that she’s been doing there’s no reason for him to go out with her again. They don’t have DNA testing at this time but they do have paternity testing available, if Marcie is so desperate to try to say that she’s pregnant and it’s Brian’s then they should insist on having a paternity test done right away. It’s highly unlikely that it’s Brian’s especially since she’s been going out with Mark Spencer since she and Brian broke up. I also think this is her way of trying to get out of the charges that she’s facing for the damage to Davey and Brian’s cars.
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I hope that the fire doesn’t turn back again and come at Mitchell’s farm or the leased land that he owns. I think his idea of helping Myles is good as it gives him a bit of help as well as Myles getting away from his current situation with his family. I think the men who are leasing the land from Mitchell should be the ones that protect the property they’re using and not expect him to do it for them. It’s great that he has friends like Loretta and Malcolm as they have a lot of friends in town and they have introduced him to them so he has access to some of the same resources that they have.
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It’s great that Brian and Davey are becoming closer as friends. The friends Brian had in Brandon and Trevor is now strained by the fact that their girlfriends are making it hard to be around him due to their friendship with Marcie who is still pissed off at Brian after he broke up with her, so now he’s becoming closer friends with Davey she had her current boyfriend slash his tires to get him to not want to be Brian’s friend. I can only hope that they continue to be friends even if it isn’t what Marcie wants. I hope that Brandon will come around and apologize for not being the friend he should have been all along. As far as Davey and Brian we’ll have to wait to see how the relationship goes for them. I think I understand more about Davey’s life now because he and Brian talked about it, and he told him about his life as well and I think it’s made them closer to each other now that it’s been explained by each other about the good and bad things in their lives. It gives me a deeper understanding of how screwed up Davey is in this timeline since it’s been in the papers and everything is out there about Davey’s dad molesting Jenny.
