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Great chapter. It seems like there’s a lot of people who know about him and Vincent and have no problem with the fact that they’re together as a couple even though they show it to the public. I’m glad that Angelica accepted the fact that he and Vincent are together even though she and Vincent are married and expecting a child. She has her own love in her life and she’s in the same position as Vincent meaning she can’t say anything about Harald and her being a couple either.

Excellent chapter, I enjoyed reading it. I was a bit surprised to find out that Maddie is a strong wolf and has been the whole time. I’m glad that they all survived the fight with the pack, and they’re better off on their own. Now Sawyer asked for Jimmy to claim him as his mate and mark him as such.

Fantastic chapter in the continuing story of Gap Year. I’m glad that Will and Connie are safe and weren’t at the condo when Randy showed up with the snake. Now they’re on an island and waiting for Grand and Stef to get there.

This was a great chapter and beginning to the story. The offer to trade the trimaran and some land seemed to good to be true, like Simon said, I’m glad that Anton didn’t make the deal as Mr Gregson had put the offer. I’ll be watching for more chapters of this story so I can see what the family has going on as well as the friends of the family.

Fantastic chapter Carlos. I’d hate to be a new cadet under Ritch he’d scare the hell out of me. I’ve had a couple of Drill Sergeants that were almost as mean as Ritch was being. Then on leave he goes to Wyoming to help his aunt on a dig for fossils and possibly even bones of the dinosaurs that roamed the area millions of years ago. He was definitely surprised by the news that he was being promoted again so soon after his last one and then he finds out that he’s going to be leading a group of new cadets during the BCT next year. Then he gets a new roommate who is a friend already since he was on the spring break trip to Cancun, which is where he found out that another cadet who is a year ahead of him came out to him and then spent a lot of time avoiding him until after the new class of cadets arrived at the academy.

This was a great chapter. I’m like everyone else in that the fighting and it’s aftermath took a lot of wide eyed attention as well as fear for Jimmy, Sawyer, Jada and Maddie. Although I doubt that Maddie needs much in the way of protecting since she herself is a wolf. I hope to learn more about her in future chapters. Jimmy’s going to need a lot of rest after what he went through not only from the fight with Fergus but being shot by Granger. I’m glad that Maddie told him to shift so that he could start the healing process.

All I can say is that this chapter really has all of the right words to make it a very fantastic chapter to read. The action was intense but it was just the right amount for the reader to feel like they were there witnessing it firsthand.

Even though this one was short it was a very good one. I like Ritch as he looks at the challenges that he has to go through as another learning experience and goes for it. As far as Miranda goes I hope he’ll get a chance to talk to her about what she said in Mexico, so he can assure her that nothing she said would be repeated by him. It did seem like they enjoyed their spring break and they spent some time getting tans only to come back to snow, but that might be alright because it gives them more time for skiing and snow boarding. Thanks for the bonus chapter, Carlos.

Fantastic chapter. I think the banter between CJ, Owen and the cadets who are with Ritch is great as it’s got the whole group at ease around each other. It was great for CJ and Owen to offer the cadets to the spring equinox celebration at a Mayan pyramid so they could all be able to experience the equinox while they were in Mexico for spring break. I hope that next Friday comes soon so I don’t have to wait until then to read the next chapter, although I may have to wait to read it until after my son goes into surgery.

Another great chapter and story. I think James made the right decision as far as bail for the three men accused of cultivating marijuana and in the possession of the ecstasy tablets. The tablets are what made his decision to deny them bail. For his first case as a JP in Dundee as he had already spent a bit of time in juvenile court in Darwin when the magistrate was removed from the bench. Even the attorney representing the accused men told him after the hearing that he made the right decision she’d worked with him on the case against the development company that didn’t agree with the town council’s decision to say no to the plan they had for their property. It’s great that the boys are back together again as they are now both attending the boarding school together instead of it just being Reid since there wasn’t any openings for Toby until after the beginning of the year.

What a great chapter and story. I’m glad that Lee was able to get to the point where he wanted to see if he could make it on his own away from the drugs and that old life. With the help of Harlan he went to Colorado Springs and got a job as a cook at a place called Mamma G’s, he did go back to the campground after awhile to pick up his apron that he had Greg hold onto for him. Awhile later a trucker came to the place and after having a great breakfast he asked to meet the cook and he asked him if wanted to come see a movie with him. Lee asked if it would be a scary movie Avery said it would be and Lee said that he would as long as he held his hand, and Avery said he would.

Awesome chapter. The way that James handled the TRS was great especially after the day that he had sitting on the bench in the youth courtroom in Darwin. It was nice that Reid was able to come home for the school holidays and for James to be able to spend time with him and Toby away from home and at home. The Commander of the TRS called the AG to complain about the fact that James wouldn’t sign a search warrant for them on a suspected drug dealer, when he called James he was told everything that they had done from the call to him at 3:45 am. The AG agreed with James that they needed actual proof of drugs being brought in or on the property before a search warrant would be issued, he also said that he was going over the Commander’s head to put a stop to his bullying tactics.

Another fantastic chapter. Justin seems to be lost again even though he’s back at the lot with Taryn and the others.

I think James has just been roped into something that he wasn’t expecting. The work done by Tim on the new courtroom next door to his medical office isn’t quite finished yet as there’s no witnesses stand or court clerks desk. Great chapter and story.

This was an awesome chapter. Ritch just can’t turn off the charm when it comes to pretty women. He and Ed had a nice thanksgiving dinner with Wendy and her son Clay since they were in Vail skiing and boarding, he told Clay that after the weather warms up if his mom would drive him to Colorado Springs he would take him up in a plane for a ride. To bad for the Defiant was totaled but it was a good thing that the guys weren’t in it when the semi slid on the same patch of ice that a car hit before it ended up in the median. The guys had stopped to offer assistance to the driver who turned out to be a teenage boy. All three were taken to the hospital and released a short time after due to them not being injured in the accident. It looks like Ritch is going to be getting a new vehicle out of the mess, as usual his dad and Brett made a few restrictions on the deal and let Ritch decide where he was going to buy it.

Interesting chapter to say the least. I’m glad that Robbie was safe at Nathan’s house after seeing the weird guy outside their house. I think he should have told Sue where he was even though Symmonds said he would tell her. It’s definitely too late for her to say anything about the way Connor behaved and him pushing himself on Robbie when it comes to sex.

This was a great chapter even with the cliffhanger at the end.. I hope they get Lee to the hospital in time, I think Avery would be very upset if something happens to him. I’m glad that Avery told Anna and Bill that he was the one who got the oxy and he took it of his own and that Lee wasn’t responsible for his being the reaction he had.

Ritch is a great role model for the new doolies and is a strong supporter of the no bullying or hazing policy of the academy. Ritch found out that Donovan screwed up big time by taking the pain pills that Brett had in the medicine cabinet from when he was involved in a crash before Ritch ever moved to Washington DC to live with them. Then he tried to say that Ritch had given him the pills which was a lie because he didn’t even know they were there. Donovan never attended any other classes at the academy again as far as Ritch knew. I thought Ritch had the greatest attitude about the jump they were required to do, even though they were jumping out of a perfectly good airplane and they had to rely on a rectangular piece of fabric and some string to get them safely to the ground, he even managed to stay on his feet when he landed.

Interesting story about Simba. I’m glad that Jacob is doing better after being held captive for almost two months before he was found by his uncle Nathan with help from Jabali and the local police. After nearly 3 weeks of being in a coma and waking up to find his mum at his bedside and wondering where he is, he finds out that he’s back home in Australia and in a hospital. I always love the stories about Jacob because of the way you write them, I hope we get to see more of him in the future. Thanks for the great opportunity to read this fantastic story.

I think Will can pretty much handle any situation that arises from a social setting to a guy who thinks he’s got to be the top dog whenever he’s around. Strider didn’t like the fact that Will could pay for everyone’s dinner and then buying a round of beers for the four guys so he sucker punched him to make his point. Will gets these big guys at the bar to take Strider out side and beat him up then piss on him the next morning Connie gets a call from the assistant coach who says that he and Will have to come in for a meeting with the coach because they think he and the other two guys knew that Will was going to have him beaten up. Will called Stef and told him that he was supposed to go to the meeting and what he had done and what made him do it, Stef said he knows the owner of the team and he would call him and explain what happened and he told Will to go to the meeting and to be nice. I hope this doesn’t get Connie or the other two guys in trouble or get him kicked off the team.

There was a lot that happened in this chapter but I think it said a lot about the people in the story. It’s true that they’re going their own way and moving away from friends and family in order to make their own way in life instead of being left behind. I thought it was great that Brad was invited to the Academy to be the speaker after the showing of the documentary that he was in while at the Heroes Haven. The phone call at the end didn’t surprise me other than why Brett and Caesar got the call from the police after the guest that Ritch had at the house for the 4th of July got arrested, I guess we’ll have to wait for the next chapter to see what he was arrested for. I love the way this story is unfolding and the way that Ritch is making his own road through the Air Force Academy, by making his voice heard through his actions and the way he shows his up bringing after his parents died and going to live with his brother in Washington DC.

Great chapter, Jada may survive or she may not one thing that will happen is that Jimmy will tear Fergus up into little pieces. Jada is loved by Sawyer and as such he’s going to be pissed off about the attack which will make Jimmy mad enough to go after Fergus and the other wolf who attacked her. I have to wait for a week to find out what happens next once Sawyer and Jimmy find out what happened to Jada.

Great start to the new story of Simba. I hope that someone figures out that Simba is missing and starts investigating in order to find him.

Fantastic chapter and story. Hunter has really stepped up with his new assignment taking everyone back and forth to school each day on the yacht. I think he and Ari became closer after the little scuffle at school when Hunter received word that he was to take the yacht and everyone home after school with Ari as his bosun over time Ari was taught all about skippering the yacht as they picked up more responsibilities when they started taking visitors out on the yacht for a 3 hour cruise on the weekends. Hunter was in shock for a minute or two when he got told at breakfast that his mum was expecting another baby in about four months, she said that this coincided with the last time his father was home for his two week break from work. I think it’s great that you have already said that there’s going to be a 2nd book out soon, I hope it’s a bit longer than this one, but if not that’s okay too as you’re the author.

Excellent chapter, Wayne.