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  1. This was a great chapter to bad it had to end. I really like the last sentence where Ritch asked the upper classman if they sit around twiddling their thumbs since they have so much free time. The ski trip was a great break for the guys, I hope Wendy doesn’t get any ideas about catching a cadet.
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    TWB Ch 7

    Fantastic chapter. It seems like Hunter and Ari are going to have problems since he found out that Hunter has already skippered the yacht before he could. He didn’t even give Hunter a chance to tell him about the surprise he was going to get before he slammed him into the lockers. Then afterwards he swore at the point where Hunter had said that he was thinking about giving him the opportunity to be a temporary bosun and he told him he could shove it up his arse and a teacher overheard it. So now I think he’s going to be in deeper trouble with his dad than he would have been for just shoving Hunter into the lockers.
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    TWB Ch 5

    Fantastic chapter. The trip was a success for the family, and now they’re on the last leg of the trip to the Cook Islands which is to be their new home. I liked the way that Hunter sang the train song to Fraser while they were on the train and then he gets notified by his friends that he’s on You Tube singing to Fraser. After watching the video once himself he replayed it for his mom and she had tears in her eyes when it finished. Hunter has been told that he has a great voice and he should be in a choir.
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    TWB Ch 4

    Another great chapter for the family as they move to New Zealand. They’ll be able to get to see some of the sights before making the final leg of the trip of the move.
  5. Fantastic chapter. I hope that Eric knows what he’s doing and is able to stop the men from going any further than the village where they are now. At least he’s giving the Chief a fairly good window in which he’s able to get his village evacuated before the men arrive there.
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    Chapter 33

    Great chapter. I think Fergus is going to be in for a rude awakening when he goes up against Jimmy and Sawyer. He hasn’t followed through on his promise to make Jimmy part of the pack like he said he would when Jimmy took care of the rouge that was attacking people. I hope Sawyer survived his third night of his becoming a werewolf.
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    TWB Ch 3

    Great chapter, although I thought the brothers name is Fraser not Hunter. I hope the whole trip is going to be safe and that nothing happens to the trimaran during the trip to the Cook Islands.
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    Outsider

    I’m glad that Avery is doing his best to crack through Lee’s wall. Although Lee failed the test set up by Greg, Avery decided to put the money back to keep Lee from getting into trouble and getting thrown out of the camp ground. Joseph proposed to Orson who said yes so there’s going to be a wedding soon. As someone said there was a lot packed into the chapter and I would have to say it was a very good chapter overall. I can’t wait to read what Jeremy asked Clay.
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    TWB Ch 1

    I like Hunter has a great knack for learning languages such as Japanese in school and Maori from his mom. The loss of his father was tough on him more so after learning that the family was going to move back to the Cook Islands where his mom is from. This was a fantastic start to the story and I hope the next chapter comes soon.
  10. Great chapter. Ritch seems to be settling in for the next 4 years as an Airforce cadet having made it through the basic training part of his training. Now it’s all about learning about being an officer and other things they need to know about. Can’t wait to read the next chapter.
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    Bound

    Another great story to start the new year with. Lee is in a bad way with his life and if he figures out that he’s in the best place possible for him then he’ll be able to get some experience with cooking and camping out. I think he’ll also learn that sex isn’t the only thing people want him for, like he was told by Greg that he’s not there because he is wanted for sex acts. Lee might even learn how to survive without Eddie. Happy New Year and thanks for the great new story.
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    Western Skies

    What a great way to start the new year with a great new story. The continuing story line is great and with this one about Ritchie (Ritch) and his entry into the Air Force Academy as a new cadet. The work that he has put into getting into shape and the exercise routine he’s adapted to fit with what he’ll be doing once he gets to the academy. He’ll have a period of adjustment since he’s moving from Washington D.C. to Colorado Springs even though he’s spending the 2 weeks prior to entering his training in Vail. Happy New Year to everyone, here’s to a better year for us all!
  13. The New Year will be better than this last year in that the vaccine is being distributed so that we could get rid of the COVID 19 pandemic all together. I’m very hopeful that this will be a better year.
  14. Good story. Merry Christmas and Happy New Years to everyone.
  15. Great chapter even with the delay. I certainly understand how life gets in the way of things we’d rather be doing. I’m taking care of my son now since he’s finally home. This is going to be a different kind of Christmas for us do to him being in a wheelchair and not being able to get into my vehicle to be able to get to my sister’s house for dinner. Any way Robbie is doing a great thing helping Nathan the way he is, due to Nathan’s current situation with both hands and arms in casts he isn’t able to do certain things for himself. This just shows that there’s a lot of love and compassion for Nathan, it seems like Robbie will do whatever he needs to do to help him. I hope that he doesn’t get into trouble when he gets home from Nathan’s especially after Don flat out saying that no one is allowed to go over there because he’s a drug addict and Don doesn’t want them to get started on drugs. Although with Don and the church that he goes to there’s been a lot of things that he’s done all for the church. I certainly hope that you’ll do it sequel to this story even if it’s not right away after finishing this one, with work you never know how much time you’re going to have to work on it. Thanks for the great story so far and I will be watching for more chapters as you post them.
  16. Great story about a 13 year old boy who loves pleasuring himself and one day he’s caught by his 16 year old neighbor. Jody then decides that he would wait for his neighbor to come to his room and then he would put on a show for him first by stripping then jacking off all while Jacob is watching him from his bedroom next door. Jody hopes that they’ll get together one day and then they’ll have sex together. I enjoyed reading this story.
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    Chapter 29

    Great chapter filled with emotion as Jimmy told Sawyer about how his family was killed. Sawyer was able to get Jimmy to the point where he had to think about what happened wasn’t his fault, what Mitchell did was a very horrible result of fear. He rounded up a bunch of his friends and went to rid the town of the infestation that he feared.
  18. This was another great story about the Currie family. Even though they couldn’t attend the weddings in person they were able to attend via zoom and they all extended their best wishes to the newlyweds. This was a very upside down year thanks to the virus, hopefully with the vaccine being rolled out now things will start to get better as more people get the vaccine. The holidays this year are very special to me because my son is home now after being released from the hospital on December 4th. I wish everyone a very happy holidays.
  19. These are very troubling times because there are so many unknowns with the virus. This poem says a lot about the way most people are feeling right now. I hope you’re doing well and staying safe. I have no choice but to be safe because I’m now taking care of my son after he had a bad stroke while he was in the ICU for kidney failure and a severe infection in his abdomen.
  20. Great chapter. Andy has it bad for Devon only he doesn’t feel the same way. Mike just happened to be home when Andy brought Devon back to the house so they could have sex. Only it was a one way street, Devon was only using Andy for his gratification. I hope that Mike can help Andy get over Devon before he goes back to college.
  21. Great chapter. Valentines Day was very different this year and it will continue to be that way until we get rid of the virus. I think it’s great that Joshie and Benny said that they would watch the younger boys while the adults went out to celebrate Valentine’s Day with their spouses.
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    Ford Ch 17

    After reading this chapter for a second time I really like the way that Edwin approached the elders of the area and said that he would like to help them build up the communities so that they are better prepared for cyclones. He has some great ideas for the communities that he told the elders who decided that they would need some time to discuss his ideas and come up with what they would need. I’m glad that he doesn’t have to pay anymore for the new yacht after speaking to the people who hired the crew to sail it from Singapore to Australia and telling them about the shape of the yacht when it arrived and then being told that they had done the same thing to his old yacht. He was also told that they would be charged for the damages to both yachts and he wouldn’t be bothered by it again.
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    Chapter 12

    Interesting chapter. Rory and Kevin are so good together they both have been thinking about the other so when Kevin called Rory and he finds out that he talked himself out of calling, Kevin told him that he didn’t need to do that. As they’re talking Kevin finds out that it’s Rory’s birthday and that he wasn’t told about it, Kevin told him that he was going to take him to get a piece of cake with a candle on it and have all the waitstaff to come and sing happy birthday to him before he blows out the candle. Rory gets around to asking him if they found a time that they could be alone for awhile if they could start doing other sexual things even if they went slow in the beginning, then Kevin caught onto what he was saying, he realized that Rory was telling him that he wanted to start fucking. I can’t wait to read the next chapter to see how it goes with the cake and the other things as well.
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    XD Ch 9

    What an ending to the story. I’m glad that Xander is doing well after being shot by a terrorist who was working with Hellenes brother. The airport is now back to normal with all of the damage repaired and operating at normal capacity.
  25. Great chapter. The trial is now in the deliberations stage as the prosecution and defense attorneys have stated their case with the prosecution having the video of the attack on Tamara so there wasn’t any real defense for the boys who did the assault on her. The defense tried to play it down saying that the boys were just joking around they meant no real harm to Tamara. I hope that the jury will be able to come to a full agreement for the case finding the boys all guilty of the charges and the judge can give them their sentences, which will probably be very harsh.
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