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  1. Butcher56

    Chapter 15

    The thing I liked about this chapter is that everyone is showing the boys that they are loved and they are standing up with them in the fight for equality in school. Just because they’re gay doesn’t mean that they’re out to infect everyone around them, especially the other football team or their families. Since Davey’s mom has decided that she’s going to divorce his father she has requested that she become his guardian again so that social services can stop being pressured to do what the church says they need to do about the situation. I’m glad that Mrs. Flores and the foster parents she placed Davey with are under investigation and they will not be able to do anything like they did to him ever again.
  2. Butcher56

    Intersections

    We can only hope that it happens. She has a lot to be held accountable for since she has been the director of the Social Services and has been putting kids in the private jails she has contact with.
  3. Butcher56

    Chapter 6

    The fact that Davey called Brian is a step in the right direction and at least he’ll have a support team to back him up. I agree with weinerdog that I didn’t think it would happen for another chapter or two for Davey to call Brian for help. I hope that Brian’s parents can talk to him about the conversation they heard between the guys and offer him a place to stay when he needs help. Who knows they might even be able to do more than just let him stay with them when he works late at night so he’s not rushing to get home before his grandparents lock him out. This just might be the way that changes his life for the better.
  4. This chapter is definitely not like your other stories, I intend to keep reading it and see where it goes from here. This poor guy is just starting a new job in which he is told at the beginning of each mission what he’s going to do. For this mission he has to kill a man and possibly even his bodyguard the only problem is that he just had sex with the bodyguard. I can only imagine what it’s going to be like trying to explain why he is at the same place as them.
  5. This was a great story to read, I didn’t think I’d like it at first but it grew on me. I’ve read other stories about magic before and I think this is the best one I’ve come across. I’m glad that James is home now and he’s safe, I think his mom is going to be a problem with Hideyoshi and his wife as far as training James. A few questions have been answered about the powers that James has especially since his mom might’ve been born here but she’s not from earth. I’m looking forward to reading the next story about James his family and friends.
  6. Butcher56

    Chapter 36

    There’s quite a lot happening right now for Essell with losing his hand and then having Timok make repairs to his system in order to get him to regrow his hand. Only because of changes in his DNA things have become very weird for him, he now has 4 arms, strength equal to Garjah as well as being able to handle the gravity on the ship, his eyes are becoming accustomed to the low level of light and they’re changing their shape, his hearing is better as well.
  7. Butcher56

    Chapter 1

    As this chapter stated it is Brian who goes back this time around. This is going to be fun to read everything from Brian’s point of view because it appears already that things aren’t going the way that he’d been told that they had from Davey and Sean’s points of view.
  8. Congratulations on being fully vaccinated, l received both of my injections in March and I’m happy for it. I just have to get my son his second one and then he’ll be all set. 😃
  9. If this had happened the way it’s saying now the whole time line would be so screwed up. After I read weinerdog’s post I figured out that this was just an April fools joke chapter. For some reason I didn’t see the title of the chapter.
  10. Butcher56

    Epilogue

    I can truly say that this story was a very interesting one as it’s focus was mainly on Ritch as he went through his training at the United States Air Force Academy. It has been a great story to read as well as the others involving the family. I’m going to miss Friday posts for this story but I think the ending was a great way to bring it to an end with his graduation and becoming a Second Lieutenant, his next step is to get into his training as a fighter pilot then who knows where he’ll go from there. Thank you Carlos for the great opportunity to read the story that you wrote so well.
  11. Butcher56

    Chapter 17

    I think it’s sad that once again Davey is being separated from Brian and their sons, just so he can be in the service of the United States again. Even though he had a feeling that he would be called upon to do his duty again as he has so many times before. I don’t know what will happen with this new chapter in his life now that he’s just as much of a normal person as anyone else in the world because he doesn’t have the knowledge of future events, but I hope that it goes well for him and his family.
  12. Butcher56

    Chapter 16

    True Davey did what he did because it was the right thing to do along with the fact that he has credibility. David Sr will not pardon him if he’s arrested because he’s not above the law. The president thinks he is and he can do anything he wants because he’s the president. I hope that David Sr is elected to be the next president of the country. I hope that Davey will be treated with the respect he deserves to get even though he’s probably going to be arrested any time for violating the laws regarding treason (I don’t know if that’s the law he’ll be arrested for or not, I’m just guessing). I also hope that Brian can help their sons understand that he did the right thing and he knew that he would have to be the one who did it.
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    CoF Ch 1

    This seems like it’s going to be a great story to read. It’s too bad that Mitch has had a lot of death in his family recently, but he is moving forward with his life. He has been running his farm that he inherited from his grandfather. He recently found out that his brother was killed in an armed robbery of a liquor store.
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    Chapter 13

    I think it’s very wrong to try to use something like this picture of Davey and Brian to try and bring your opponent down in a political way. To me it’s just like the preacher who tried to use Jeremy against David Sr which got Davey upset enough that he turned it around and used Jeremy as a great part of the family and even though he had only been with them for a short time I think he gained a lot of respect for Davey after that because he went out in front of the school and spoke to the reporter who was interviewing the pastor. He didn’t waver in the information he was saying because it was the truth not a bunch of lies. At the time of this interview with Barbara Walters Jeremy had already passed away but it was said that he was able to enjoy the things he wanted to do before the final time of his life. I truly respect the family for what they accomplished with Jeremy and the love they show for their family as well as their faith.
  15. Butcher56

    Chapter 14

    It appears that Davey and Brian have accomplished a great deal with their now being lawyers after completing law school together. Their in the reserve JAG and are fulfilling their obligations after agreeing to it in order for Mr Jones to move from the Republican party to the democratic side in order to get the bill allowing gays in the military passed. Now that he’s fighting for the individual states to decide whether to allow gays to marry and have the same rights as any heterosexual couple has.
  16. Butcher56

    Chapter 27

    The confrontation between Davey and his mom was uncalled for, she may blame him for her parents being killed even though he had nothing to do with that at all. Then while he’s back talking to the principal she told Brian that Davey wanted him and the others to move to Nevada so he could get into his pants. That caused a actual punch being thrown by Brian and then as they were talking to each other his mom came out of the school and tried to start on him again. Davey basically told her in no uncertain terms to stay out of his life and he would leave her to her own miserable life, then he got in the car and headed to the base.
  17. Butcher56

    Chapter 15

    It never seems to me like Will finds a guy he’s into and then something happens when he finds the guy who said he was going to be out of town only he’s dancing with other guys and not really interested in him. I’m glad that Will didn’t do what he had originally planned on doing, what he did was sneaky and it worked out for the best. What he found out was that Connie had fallen in love with him and he felt it would be too hard if he saw him because he knew that they couldn’t be together.
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    Chapter 12

    I think it’s great that Davey was able to stay in one place as he grew up instead of moving around all the time. This time he stayed in Modesto with both of his parents and Jenny, then they take in Jeremy as a foster child and eventually adopt him as well as Sean after his parents tried to have him sent to a conversion center. I’m glad that all of their friends were able to graduate from high school together except for Jeremy although I believe he was there in spirit. I don’t think I’ve ever heard of a more celebrity filled graduation since this one had a lot of political members as guests of honor as well as the president and First Lady. The trip that Davey and Brian have planned sounds like it’ll be a great time for them before they head home to finish getting ready to start college at Stanford which is something that they never did before in any other timelines.
  19. Butcher56

    Chapter 11

    I think the bright side of this chapter is that Jeremy was able to enjoy the life he had left and the scene in the school auditorium shows that his life was full of adventure and fun for him. Davey did a great job with the memorial service and afterwards by the time they all left the restaurant he was feeling a lot better than he was before joining their friends and talking about him and and sharing their memories of the time they had together. I’m glad that Jeremy and Sean were both able to be adopted by the Jones family and they were treated like they had always been a part of the family. I think it helped Davey get some perspective on his future plans for his life as well as his life with Brian, the talk they had while at the park so Davey could practice his pitching. The one thing that stands out for me in the story is that the way that Davey carries himself is great even though he’s got the memories of his previous lives and he’s not being led to the government service like he was in his other lives. I’m glad that he stood up and told the pastor that Jeremy was no more a threat to the students and staff of the school than the students that have hepatitis or are disabled and in a wheelchair. I think the fact that the family was so involved with the AIDS crisis it helped them be better prepared for the next phase of the disease for Jeremy and then the end of his life, I also think he finally felt like he was a part of the family instead of feeling like he was a burden or a charity case.
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    Care: 6.8

    Something is about to go bad really quick, especially since James is asking for Charlie’s mom to be brought there right away. All this while he’s trying to become calm as his grandparents watch from the side of the room. I hope that he’s able to get calm soon so he can start learning about spells.
  21. Butcher56

    Chapter 10

    This whole situation is starting up again only this time it’s because idiots like the pastor don’t take the time to really know what they’re talking about as is this particular situation. I have a feeling that Davey doing what he did might change the way the pastor thinks (if he knows what’s good for him) and how much he doesn’t know about the issue or anything else he spews from his mouth. I’m glad that Davey stood up for Jeremy because that just shows that what he’s been telling him is the truth and he doesn’t care that he has this disease that will kill him. Jeremy didn’t ask for this disease but he got it through no fault of his after he was in an accident and required blood during the surgery to save his life. The only difference I see between the two time lines is that he and Brian aren’t the ones in the spotlight like they were in the previous one. I hope that this interview goes live soon and then they can deal with the school board and the president of the board with the truth instead of the lies from the church.
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    Chapter 9

    This is turning out to be a really big step for Sean, at least he knew that if he got over the fence he would be safe in the protection of the secret service. I think he made the right decision and he’s definitely going to be protected especially now that Mrs Flores has been over ruled by Mary Lou, who asked the SAIC to call the police to come pick up the two men who were hired by Sean’s parents to take him to a hospital for conversion. Mary Lou is going to be calling her boss as well as a judge to help her with this situation. I can just imagine how things are going to happen now especially when the director of social services gets called out because of one of his case workers has put a child at risk by agreeing with his parents to allow them to lock him up against his will. As much as I have read about this so called conversion therapy I sure wouldn’t subject my son to a facility that caters to that.
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    Chapter 8

    I’m glad that Brian, Brandon and Trevor came around from being mad at him for not telling them about the do over and that Sean had just come back himself. They weren’t upset about the fact that he had been in so many time lines except he didn’t tell them that the Sean they knew wouldn’t be coming home from Disneyland since he was the special person for that trip. Then Davey’s grandfather had called and wanted him to come help with putting some stuff in the motor home since they were going on a road trip and wouldn’t be home until sometime in May. Davey asked if Jeremy could come with him and he was told that he wasn’t welcome because he had AIDS and they didn’t want to get it. That was very hard for Davey to take especially since he and his papa had gotten along so well. I hope that he can help Jeremy come out of his shell and become friends with his friends and actually become a member of the family.
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    Chapter 5

    This chapter was an interesting one with the Jones family at Disneyland along with Sean. After the great day they had going on the rides all of that changed the moment Sean came back. It’ll be like the last seven years never happened to this Sean even though Davey will let him know about the changes he has made and how they’ll affect Sean who is his best friend.
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    Chapter 4

    Dave & Davey are a lot closer in this timeline than any of the other two. As far as Davey losing the memories of the other timelines he’s just been suppressing them. Now his dad gives him a file of three articles to read and he doesn’t think to read the translation on the back of the first one which was in Russian the other two were in Chinese so he had to read the translation on them. He just let his dad know that he hadn’t actually forgotten the memories of the other timelines then he had to talk to him about what he had seen when Brian left which almost didn’t go over to well. Luckily they came to an understanding that would allow Davey to keep seeing Brian.
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