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Bonus Chapter: Small Worlds.
Butcher56 commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Bonus Chapter: Small Worlds.
This makes sense to me now. I wondered who they were and what they had to do with the story. Great chapter by the way, this is a great story to read. -
Interesting start to the story. I think it’s nice of Rosalind to tell Addy the stories she does especially since she’s 4 years older, it’s understandable that she would know more things.
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So Davey is finally becoming friends with Brian, Brandon and Trevor and he’s going to be playing football with them while Sean is going to be the equipment manager for the coach. The only other thing happening is that they have a secret service detail with them now because of the raid that the FBI did on Saturday where they found maps of the Modesto area along with their address circled on them. Then we find out that Brian’s uncle Rich has broken up with his former boyfriend who refused to become committed to just him instead of sleeping around all the time. There’s a lot of things changing in this timeline that never happened before. We’ll see how it goes with the secret service and Davey’s mom.
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This was a great story to read. I can’t believe what Dalen went through as he grew up being a part of the Royal family and being a mage himself. Once he came of age he was sent to another Vale as he was requested to do by the order of the king. After awhile he found out that the king was dead and that the mages were being blamed for the supposed bomb attack that killed him and wounded the prince who was next in line to the throne.
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Interlude 5: Casper Sullivan
Butcher56 commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Interlude 5: Casper Sullivan
I hope that Hideyoshi makes it especially since Casper called in a favor from “father”. Tsuru tried to stop father from getting any information as to where Hideyoshi was. Casper finally told him where he was and that the surgery was still going on. -
Great chapter.
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I have to wonder if the memories of his adult life are gone or just repressed and not coming to the surface as much causing his headaches. He seems to be able to have friends who are not aware that he’s had memories of his adult life as well as his previous life or time lines as Davey likes to call them. With his dad at the lead of the epidemic of the HIV and AIDS virus things might get hard for him at times but he’s still playing baseball and he might be able to play football as well and he definitely has a spring in his step after meeting Brian on the first day of school for his seventh grade.
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I hope that Davey will be alright after this headache puts him out again, I hope he doesn’t wind up in another coma. I think the meeting between his dad and the new president Regan went well until the president offered him a job as a “special assi” and as he was reading the folder contents President Regan asked Davey about his plans for little league and whether he was planning to go to the other team that was sure to go to the Little League World Series and he said he was planning on staying with his friends. It was at this point Davey gave the president the letter about time travel and the fact that he was the traveler. This brought up a lot of questions and answering them caused him to black out again.
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They have found the man responsible for Thor to be out in the cold where they found him while walking home. Now they have done a test with the Queen to see if she was allergic to Thor or not, she isn’t at all. I can’t wait to see what Annabelle does to the breeder who tossed Thor out.
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Papa’s not a stupid man by any means. Of course he was going to open the letters and figure out that his grandson isn’t the same person as before January 1976. He has now been told some of the other things he had written about in his letters. Davey has to make a choice before he loses all of the memories of the other time lines. Once he tells President Regan when he goes with his dad to meet with him after the inauguration he’ll tell him about the other two people who come back to this time line so they could be eliminated before they start changing things for their own benefit. I understand now what caused the coma after a bad headache that knocked him out at a fundraiser at their house.
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So Gene lost this case as well I think the jury didn’t deliberate enough, they only seemed to focus on the last question of Amanda’s. I didn’t see where they took anything that Ben said at all into their deliberations. Now the question is do they go to the next highest court in order to make sure this kind of thing doesn’t happen to anyone else.
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The family is getting moved into the new house and now Davey and Sean are going to be friends in this timeline. Sean is officially his first friend in the new area of Modesto. I hope it all goes well and Mr Jones is actually going to be a state representative for California.
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What a mess that Tsuru has to clean up, and she just found out that Hideyoshi has been injured. Now she’s trying to figure out who to kill so she can put a stop to this slavery thing that’s going on by taking children that have power in order to help them with their plans. I hope she gets twenty three, Caleb and Charlie away from them.
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Anton is really having a time of things right now. Hopefully the threat will get put out of commission once and for all. I think his father and the biker gang he’s associated with needs to be arrested and put away for a very long time. I’m glad that Vic and Rita are going to be okay after the fire on the island. I’m also glad that Anton’s crews are all safe and he’ll be joining them very soon.
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It seems like Anton can’t catch a break. He tries to get his crew out for a while to rest and he winds up doing a charter for friends of Edwin’s when they finished it they go to a restaurant for a meal and more of Edwin’s friends show up and want a charter. When Anton turned them down saying that they were going to be on holiday and weren’t going to be doing any charters for a while. Edwin called him and got upset that he wouldn’t do the charter and he was giving him a bad name. Then he gets a call from Anita saying that the yachts and his employees as well as him have a bounty on them. I hope that they can get a better opportunity to get some where safe and survive this latest threat against him and his family.
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Well Davey was ordered to go back again and complete the mission that was given to Jeb Bush by his father. After the crash and before he was found by the Russian soldier he was talking to Brian by thought. Although he doesn’t really want to go back and do another “Do Over” Davey knows that this will be the only way to stop this war from starting and killing so many people.
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Sounds like Edwin is mad at Anton because he refused to do another charter. The trip was to be a crew trip only without charters and then they wind up doing a 7 day charter for friends of Edwin and then he sends more people to him for a charter and he refuses to take them. Now that they’re going home something breaks and they wind up on engine power and have to get to a yacht club or some place that has a jetty so they can make repairs to the yacht. I hope that they can make it to a place where they can make the repairs.
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I think he’s been expecting this for several years by the way he put everything into notebooks and files and then in the bankers boxes.
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Davey is going to be a very tired young man by the time this battle is over and they’re able to relax for a little bit. He’s doing an officer’s job by taking 6 hour shifts as the duty officer in CIC although he tried to say he wasn’t qualified for it the captain gave him a look that made him stop his words. His plan is working for now, let’s see how it goes from here.
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This has to be very hard for Davey to deal with, now he has to plan two funerals for his mom and sister. I know what it was like when my mom passed away so I can sympathize with him in some ways. He just has to remember that this is the time line he’s in not the previous one. Hopefully with Brian by his side he’ll get through it.
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At least they’re getting a little more information about the people who are holding Caleb as a slave. The way that James grandmother was able to get the information from him as well as test him on his strength and abilities. He was enjoying the streak with James, his grandparents, Tasha and Tuva that Hideyoshi prepared for them all to enjoy.
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Great chapter, I’m glad that James apologized to Casper for yelling at him the way he did and Casper apologized for pushing him the way he did. I think it’s safe to say that their friendship is still in good standing.
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As the attorney pointed out this was only the first battle of the war. There are more battles to be fought in the war of equality for everyone not just the black ones or the gay people. I’m not prejudice in any way at all. I think it’s time for everyone to have the rights to live the way they feel that they want. I believe that the fact that Dr Grayson was at the meeting and he brought enough information on the AIDS issue so that he was able to make the point that Davey nor Brian are at risk of getting infected due to the fact that they visit the patients in the hospital who are dying of the disease even though they are holding their hands or hugging them. With Davey’s mom getting custody of him again he is no longer under social services care which makes things a little better for him.
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I think this was all planned for quite a while, because once Farmer found out that he was going to be raided he took steps to be sure he could escape easily without being seen. I love the song that Farmer selected for the beginning of the count down for the bomb, “Crazy” is a very good song and Patsy Cline was a great artist of her time.
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I’m glad that Will and Connie are having a great time together and now it’s coming to an end due to Connie having to get back home to start practicing with the team. Will knew this day was coming and although he was upset that he had to go back, he also knew that this wasn’t goodbye as they would be in each other’s lives going forward.
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