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I’m glad that Ralph has finally stood his ground and told his father exactly how he feels about the way things are going to be from now on. He tried for years to be the way they wanted him to be but he just couldn’t do it anymore. No matter what he did they weren’t happy about his choices always having something to say about it, he finally told his father that he was going to live his life the way he wants to and not the way they want it to be. He has a successful business they’re not happy about it but he said too bad they don’t like that he has a boyfriend either but he’s not going to do anything about it because they don’t like it. Way to go Ralph!

Such a sad story but so well written. I think it covered the fact that the war that started on October 7, 2023 changed so many lives in so many ways it’s left a lot of death and suffering for many people who may never recover from it.

I hope Devin is going to be alright after getting hit in the head by the branch. I’m glad that Mac was there with him so he got to him quickly and called for an ambulance because he was unconscious and he was bleeding from his head wound.

I’m glad that things turned out well for the Nelson family after the adoption ceremony for the kids that made them true Nelson’s, then 2 years later the wedding ceremony between their newdad as they call him and Skylar ‘Lewis who they call newpop. They are all very happy and very proud of their new family now that they don’t have to worry about their old parents anymore.

I guess that’s one way of getting the duct tape off of your dick, piss it off. Why any guy would want to duct tape his dick to make it bigger is beyond me for one thing it’s not going to make it any bigger than it already is.

This was a powerful chapter with a lot of danger to a lot of people. With the rockets being fired at so many locations at once and the fact that there were so many casualties and hostages taken. The friends of those who were in Israel are now all back in New York to offer their support for each other as they wait for news of their friends in Israel, they know that one was kidnapped by Hamas fighters.

It seems to me that the Governor General needs to be more careful about what she says around the ambassador from Amixorp. Since the change of ambassadors has been made no one in the Australian government knew about it until now, so when the Governor General said take me to your leader ambassador Henderson replied as you wish, she tapped her watch and away they went. Brett is away from earth now for two years so he can get additional training in diplomacy and such things as well as taking advantage of additional training in space craft. Thanks for the great story so far and I’m looking forward to the next part of this story when it comes out. I always enjoy reading the stories that you write.

I don’t think this is going to stop Kaylec from going after Q or Jacob just because the council of nine said that he is not allowed to go near them because of the things he’s already done without permission from anyone above him, plus the fact that he brought the prince of the Nave into their property thinking that he was going to be the way to eliminate Q in order for him to be put back in charge of the Nave which he claims he is rightfully entitled to. After the meeting with Zenial, Jacob knew he had made the right decision to not link with Sunny, who knows what would have happened if he had.

Jacob has been through a lot lately and he still hasn’t recovered all of his powers yet after finding out that he’s a Skai. He’s learned a lot from his new brothers who have told him why Kaylec is so mad at Q and him, it seems like Q killed his lover is a battle that Kaylec was the one who planned the whole battle to kill Kyrios and then the Nave showed up and killed his lover due to the fact that he went after Q even though he was told not to take him on himself. Jacob has decided to go back to school and he has found all his belongings are now back in his dorm room.

This story has taken a lot of different paths and has been a great read so far. I hope Jacob can find the answer to his past life before he showed up in the body of a 10 year old boy alone in the woods. He pledges to The Brother Hood and then finds out all kinds of weird things start happening around him that he can’t explain and then he starts to figure things out himself by accident . Then he becomes the little to the head of the house and he starts to figure out more things although he is still confused by it all. Now he’s finding out exactly what Q is after he was attacked in the mall.

This was a very good story about how a boy wound up on a porch one day and he turned out to be the nephew of the man who lived there. He had been thrown out of his home by his parents for having accidents that caused things to either get broken or burned and he was abused by them for it although it didn’t show because there weren’t any marks on his body. He was the lucky one his older brother and sister had gotten the worst of the abuse from their parents because they had been subjected to sexual abuse. Their uncle was smart enough to get ahold of his brother and make arrangements with him to help him get a house big enough for him and the three kids to live together after the parents were taken to jail and it was found out about the sexual abuse. He was able to adopt the kids and they all became very successful in their careers that they chose with two of them getting married and having families of their own and the other one staying single due to the fact that any girl he dated started reminding him of his mother and he couldn’t take that. I’m glad that I read the story it made me think about the fact that the uncle did what he did because of the way he was treated by the kids mom when he was a teenager and they had lost their parents, the kids mom was his sister and after she kicked him out of her house he lost all respect for her and her husband. Neither parent survived very long the dad died nearly 8 years after being sentenced to life imprisonment with the possibility of parole after 35 years, all the beatings he took before he was sentenced were too much for his body and he died from apparent natural causes. The mom after she suffered her beating and was hospitalized she lived for 7 years not really knowing anything about anything before she died from complications. The aunt who was the sister of the dad was killed in prison after the other prisoners found out what she was in prison for. The uncle married a man who made him happy and the kids liked him as well. I think the story turned out great.

This was a great story, it’s sad that Connor was kicked out of his home because he was suspected of being a werewolf without any evidence of proof. He’s with Soren now and I think between the two of them they’ll make it.

This was a great story, I loved the way you wrote it. The Baxter boys were in a bad spot in the beginning and then they were going past a construction site and they were taunted by some of the crew there. As they were trying to pass the gate the way was blocked by 3 big men who wouldn’t let them pass by. Max being the biggest one of the 3 took it upon himself to make sure that the boys were safe and that Michael would be locked at to determine what was making him sick, it was determined that he had pneumonia and needed to be taken to the hospital for treatment, Charlie wound up staying with Max and his family while Michael was in the hospital. Through the time he was in the hospital he had befriended a man who had no one visiting him so he started sharing some of the food that Stacy brought him. Harry was the man, one night he had a heart attack and was transferred to the ICU for treatment. When he was released from the hospital Michael and Charlie moved in with him to care for him and they became a family and made it a permanent thing. Michael has gone back to college and is performing in clubs to help with his expenses, Charlie is a automotive technician at a shop owned by Stacy’s brother which is where he did the work to restore the mini cooper s that Harry had bought for his son although he never got to use it because he had died.

This was a great story, I have enjoyed reading it and am looking forward to reading book 2 when you start posting it. Michael has to stop calling Devin a hero when he does something to make sure that someone doesn’t get hurt by an animal or someone else who is looking to cause problems. He should realize by now that he doesn’t do these things for acknowledgment or credit, he does it because he can and has the ability to do it without being hurt for the most part. Michael has the ability to do things as well but he hasn’t figured out how to move quickly enough to do things like Devin does.

Twice now Michael has gone out to see what it was like to be an animal in that form and the group was attacked by an evil skin walker the first time and then a mountain lion the second time. Thankfully he had Issac and Jacob with him as well as Devin so he wasn’t alone at all and that helped. He heard the noise from the mountain lion and then caught its scent and moved away from the scent to protect himself and when the mountain lion made its attack it was knocked away by either Jacob or Issac who had taken the shape of a bear and was able to keep the mountain lion from being able to get ahold of Michael as it was trying to. He still has a bit more training ahead of him before the Shaman is finished with his part of the training before Devin takes over to teach him how to transition into larger people and have the ability to defend himself. This has been a very interesting story so far I have learned a bit about the whole story of the skin walker and how they came to be.

I think it’s a great idea to have a different genre each week to look at so that you can see what the stories are like in each one.

That was a great story about Zac and the opportunity he had to join a crew of a tall ship for the voyage which he really loved. During that journey he met Joel and they became very close friends who shared their love of sailing. The next year instead of being just crew members they were watch leaders who were in charge of a certain number of crew members each. The last voyage was interesting because Zac was in charge of 3 of his class mates from his school who became interested after the presentation he made on what he did during his summer break, although his presentation was supposed to include Jordan’s yacht sailing by then coming back to the area for the students to see what it looked like inside before it was hijacked. Jordan informed Zac on their latest sailing trip that he had booked them as crew members on two tall ships in Canada. Then during Zac’s summer break they were going to be crew members on a luxury yacht based in the U.K.. I hope we get to see Zac Joel and the rest of the group in the future, I would like to know what they think of the trip to Canada and the UK.

Another CJ story done, I enjoyed reading it. It seems like there’s a lot of things going on for CJ and Oz in the rest of the summer. I’m looking forward to the next CJ story. Thanks for the great story Carlos.

Fantastic chapter, it’s great to see that Olek and Helga are finally together as king and queen of Makarovia after the people said that they wouldn’t accept her as queen by waiting a year as the ritual stated. They had set it up for her to be crowned at the engagement ceremony after all that she had already done to make things better for the people by improving the power supply of the capital and other parts of the country. I think the trip to the grotto was a great way to celebrate the coronation.

At least going to the media got the attention of the hijacker's and they’re going to let Jordan go but not the skipper. They must not know how to sail the yacht or the skipper is part of the gang. I hope they find Jordan unharmed or else when they’re caught they’ll face even more charges if Jordan decides to press charges against them again.

Very nice little story about a young man who has been troubled by magic for a long time and now has a great opportunity to become what he’s always wanted to be, whatever that is. He has found his way to Winters Haven where he is to become his true self.

Another CJ story to start a new year is just what I needed. CJ sure knows how to handle the drunken fool who thought he was better than he was because he was a Trump fan. I feel bad for Molly because it was her dad and it happened at the end of her rehearsal dinner for her wedding. Mr Fanning is not only going to have a hospital bill to pay after falling down and passing out< he’s also going to need an attorney to deal with his divorce after the stunt he pulled. It seems like he has a problem with alcohol and he does stupid things when he drinks a lot.

Merry Christmas to all, it took me awhile to get a chance to read this chapter because I’ve been back and forth between home and the hospital for my son who went to the emergency room this morning early and then about 1pm he was transferred to another hospital and he was in the emergency room there until about twenty minutes ago. He’s having some major issues with his bowels and also his kidney, we knew that he was losing his kidney for some time and the doctor was doing everything he could to keep it going for him for as long as possible, but I guess the kidney decided that 17 years and 3 months was long enough for him to have it after receiving it in 2005. The one thing I can say is that the holidays are not dull around here. Hope you all had a wonderful day with family and friends and I hope you have a wonderful New Year’s Day as well.

Merry Christmas to all, best wishes for the New Year as well. My Christmas is going to be spent on recuperating from surgery and trying to get my son to feeling better as he’s been under the weather for about a week now.

Nice short chapter with CJ and Ozzie dropping the kids off in Australia to spend time with Ozzie’s family. Looking forward to further adventures with CJ, Ozzie and everyone else. Have a great holiday season.