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I like the way Deke put out the question “What did Kohen do to save the day now?” That is a powerful question especially when it’s concerning Kohen. The Elite must think there’s no way that they can be caught and brought down because they’re so rich. I think with Kohen and now Danie they’ll be able to bring the whole consortium down to the ground. It seems like Kohen has already figured out that some of the stars they see aren’t stars at all, it’s possible that the stars that are blinking are possible locations where humans are kept in order to make them like Kohen & Danie and send them out to blow these places up to prevent them from being searched and people can’t be rescued. Great chapter and story, thanks for writing the story Cia.

It seems like a lot going on with the train arriving and now the purchase of the house that was used as a bed and breakfast. Then Mr Ashburton informed Vern that they were expecting twins as they were going into the house to tour it. Then he informed Vern that he was also in the process of purchasing other properties one being right next door and the other one by there back carpark. When Vern asked why he was purchasing the other properties he was told that one was for the housekeeper and two of her children one of whom has severe epilepsy and they had to sell their own house to pay for the care her son needs, the other house is in such a state of disrepair that he plans on just carefully tearing it down and then talking to the groundskeeper about putting a formal garden in it’s place. This is becoming a great story, I look forward to seeing the next chapter coming out so I can read it.

It’s true that Justin was able to find Dash’s sanctuary especially when it was so close to the dawn. I think Justin has some time to think about the way that Michael got into his head and then make him think he was the one doing the things to Taryn that Michael was doing before Justin figured it out. Once Justin figured out what Michael was doing his anger got the best of him and he went out and attacked Michael, before he was pulled away from him by Max & Dion. Once Justin was let go he took off running and found himself outside the sanctuary. I feel bad for Xairen as his injuries are so severe he might not even make it through the night. Great chapter and story.

Another great chapter. I can see why Worthington is the way he is especially when his uncle keeps coming after him so that he can be killed. I’m glad that the Dwarf King brought some of his knights along as well and was able to help Worthington defeat the mages he was fighting with. I find it hard to believe that Worthington’s uncle is still trying to kill him. I’m glad that Worthington was able to come to an agreement with the dwarf king and that they would both benefit from the agreement that they will make each other better at fighting and motorcycle riding respectively. I have a feeling that they’ll both come away better than before.

Great start to the story. I find it really interesting that a teenage boy is able to walk in to a business meeting with his father and meet with the Minister for Transport his assistant and the Ministral Policy Advisor and basically handle the whole meeting. I think it’s great that Vern has the languages that he speaks down pat, the way that his father spoke up during the meeting saying that he and his son both speak Italian, German and seven others. I thought it was great that the Minister made it a point to thank Vern for the presentation and for being the first teenager to ever lead a presentation about a possible opportunity for the state that he and his father were involved with. Vern’s father is a railroad designer and he was able to get the test train that he designed as a high speed train and at the time of the meeting the train was about a week and a half away as it is coming via ship. I can’t wait to read more of the story to see if they can come to an agreement with the Minister of Transport.

I agree that now they have a possible idea of what Cheryl is doing with the seer’s she captures. Fran knew that they wanted her to help them to try to learn what Cheryl was doing with the seer’s that she had put under her spell. With the help of O’Connor Fran was able to get a picture of Cheryl in her mind and she could have reached out to touch her. I hope that they can rescue the seer’s that Cheryl has under her spell and she’s captured as well. Great chapter and story.

What a great chapter. I really enjoyed this chapter as it tells of the way things could be like with Mitch being a former police officer and his training kicking in as the man held the knife to Alik’s neck. Mitch used techniques that if you’re properly trained can be very useful in situations like this, he knew exactly where to grab the man so he dropped the knife and then he broke the mans nose and his leg by using his training as a police officer. I think they all enjoyed the meal at the restaurant because Tony paid double the total of the bill aling with an additional $50.00 on top of that. Then they went to show Alik the Christmas display at the Omni hotel where they all had a drink of either tea or hot chocolate while they walked around and looked at the displays while teaching Alik about the different Christmas beliefs. After that they went to the Christmas tree lot to look for right 🌲 to put in their apartment. I can’t wait to read more about Mitch, Tony and the others.

Poor Robbie, Don is so insensitive at times he thinks everything that’s wrong with Robbie is going to be solved by Mr Symmonds and or church. I don’t know what Don is thinking about when he comes up with these ideas to help Robbie get over being gay. Like church is going to make him not gay anymore, doesn’t Don know that there are churches that cater to the LBGT groups so even though they might go to church that’s not what Robbie needs. I think what Robbie needs is to have Don finally accept him for who he is not what he is. It seems like ever since the adoption was finalized Don has been trying to figure out how to turn Robbie straight like he supposedly was when he first came to stay with them. I hope that Sue is able to talk some sense into Don before he pushes Robbie to far and he does something stupid like try to get back to England 🏴󠁧󠁢󠁥󠁮󠁧󠁿 and Tom. I’ll have to wait and see what happens in the next few chapters.

Interesting bit of information about the who behind the brox and a mystery of why they want to make human cloned AI’s.. I hope that Fresca is able to get the information they need from Danie since they’re trying to communicate with him for some reason. The Elite must really be ancient since Everett doesn’t even know how old they are only that they’ve been around since the beginning. The Elite as they’re known are super rich and powerful, especially when they are in politics. Apparently they are also heavily involved in technology especially the artificial intelligence and by using the AI’s they can get around the issue of free will. Great chapter and story, I think I’m more inspired by Kohen as he was a prisoner of the Brox before being liberated by Everett and his crew.

I truly hope that Fran won’t be able to help get ahead of this Cheryl who is the person responsible for taking the seers in the first place. I agree with Simon and Kitryn that Carl be the one to speak to Fran in hopes that she will be able to say where Cheryl is and the best way to get rid of her. Fran has helped a little bit although with her young age I don’t expect much from her. She has a lot learn about her ability and I seriously dought anyone will fight him on the issue. Great chapter and story. 👍 👍 .

I couldn’t be more proud of Teddy for the way that he reacted to the nomination of him & Ryder as homecoming kings. I think 🤔 everyone is right saying that the actions and words by Teddy at the dance will have some strong reactions by the principle of the school. I hope that Ryder is going to do everything he can to get his grandmother 👵 in to a specialist so that she doesn’t completely spiral into further Alzheimer’s, he should say something to Teddy’s mom about his grandma so she can possibly get her to go to the doctor. I hope that Ryder’s grandma makes it to his & Teddy’s wedding like she said. Great chapter and story.

Great chapter and story about Tony & Mitch. I truly believe that Sasha, David & Alik are going to love ❤️ New York. I think they’ll have a great deal of fun when they all go to New York for Christmas 🎄 I think Tony & Mitch will have a good time showing the others around New York, by taking in the Rockettes Christmas show, then they’ll take them to a Broadway 🎭 production of the Lion King. First they need to go shopping for David, Sasha & Alik so they’ll have a suit to wear to the Lion King, they’ll also need heavy coats to help them deal with the cold weather. It’s going to be great to see the reactions to their first trip to New York.

I think the relationship between Teddy & Ryder is one of the best ones I’ve ever heard of. I understand that Teddy and Ryder both had separation anxiety during the two weeks he was gone for the Warped Tour. I hope 🤞 this tour schedule is going to be the best one yet & they’ll be able to spend the time that they plan to spend together with Teddy and Harry going to three concerts on the east coast. The plan is set for the next two months for the tour and home time for homecoming and then prom, I just hope that the tour doesn’t start taking off and their schedule doesn’t get screwed up. I know that there’s a chance that Ryder could wind up playing a bigger venue than the ones he’s scheduled for right now, especially since his album has taken off for sales and media as well. The way things are right now Ryder and Messiah are coheadliners but that could change as the album gets the airtime it’s getting right now. Great chapter and story.

I look at it this way, Mike is an insecure ass that thinks he is better than Ryder because he is captain of the baseball team and he has bullied Ryder for years and now that Ryder’s career is taking off Mike is on the outside looking in. Mike is so full of himself he can’t even see that he’s been destroying his friendship with not only Teddy but Blake, Liz and Ryder as well. Mike needs to realize that he doesn’t have a say in what happens to Ryder. Mike’s going to start feeling that he screwed up pretty bad this time and he lost three great friends he’s had since kindergarten. I’m really glad that Ryder is getting this opportunity to be coheadliners with another band, Messiah was supposed to be opening for a couple of other bands but because of his song getting lots of airtime with the pop music station and that’s what has made the opportunity to coheadline for another popular band. Great chapter and story.

Another great chapter in the story. I hope that Worthington has a plan to keep the other Mage’s from taking the training that he and the others with him and using them against the demons before they even show any interest in attacking them. I don’t think it’s a good idea for Housemaster Jones to be putting blocks on the younger children who are not attending school to learn how to control and use their abilities without harming themselves or others around them. I’m sure there are other ways to prevent them from using their abilities before they’re trained in how to use them.

I’m glad that Teddy is finally getting what Liz has been telling him for a few weeks now. As Teddy was standing there arguing with Mike, Blake took Ryder and drank some shots with him, after they had the shots Blake walked away and didn’t even realize that he left him vulnerable in the presence of the baseball team. When Liz finally got Teddy to go look for Ryder instead of arguing with Blake about Ryder not supposed to be drinking hard liquor because of his medication, Teddy found him outside in the backyard with some of the baseball team around Ryder and I think Teddy stopped them from actually doing anything to hurt Ryder. When Mike came to the door he asked what was going on and Teddy told him he needed to get Ryder home and he also had to rain in the baseball team. I don’t want to be either Blake or Mike after Liz gets through with them. I know that the lacrosse team didn’t have to stick up for Teddy and Ryder but they weren’t going to allow anyone to make fun of Ryder or do anything to Teddy because he was sticking for his boyfriend Ryder. The guys followed Teddy & Ryder to Teddy ‘s car and even made sure that Ryder was going to be alright, Teddy said he would be and then they started to rally to head to the football captains house so they could continue to party. After Liz said that he was having a party there. Great chapter and story.

I had hoped I was wrong about Ryder’s parents, his mom was taken away from him at the very young age of 4, his dad took his own life because he couldn’t get past the fact that his wife was taken from him. The worst part about this chapter is the fact that Ryder keeps saying that his grandmother is always saying that he’s just like his father, I don’t know if she’s talking about his music 🎶 or is she talking about the depression. I understand the depression side of it because my wife suffered from bipolar depression for years and she refused to believe that she had it. I found out later that she had been diagnosed with depression when she was young. Even though everyone tried to help her she wouldn’t accept the help from anyone. I feel bad for Ryder as he has a lot more guts to admit to Teddy that he suffers from depression and his grandmother even verified the fact that he suffered from depression. I hope that Teddy doesn’t decide to leave Ryder when he might need him the most, I understand how Ryder must be feeling by opening himself up to Teddy. It’s hard to first admit that you have a illness and second to get treatment for the illness and for both of those Ryder gets a higher marks from me by doing both of them to Teddy. Another thing is that I hope that Teddy is right when he says that fame may not go to Ryder’s head. Great chapter and story, can’t wait to continue reading 📖 this fantastic story.

I also think this was a great story, it shows that the homophobia is in all aspects of life no matter if you’re working a job on land or on a research submarine it’s going to be there. I think it’s great that Trenton has finally been put in a position that he will love ❤️ as the captain of the RSV OCEANIA. I’m sure he did the other jobs because he was given those to help him become more stable and involved with the family business. I hope that the story will continue with a new title but with the same characters without Wallace in it because I don’t think he’s going to change his way of thinking. Thank you for the great story, you’re a great writer, I love reading 📖 your stories.

Great chapter and story. The story is really very good and I love the way that Tony is able to tell you what types of investments will be good to have as well as which ones aren’t any good. You can really tell that Tony and Mitch are happy 😃 together, it shows how good it becomes once you’ve got the right person investing your money for you.

I loved the way that Teddy got Ryder to go out on stage and perform like his life depended on it. I’m glad that they are able to have a conversation now without having to worry that they will say something to piss the other person off. The depression that Ryder is experiencing seems like it’s related to his parents some how, especially after singing the song Wish you were here, he dedicated it to his parents. I think something happened to his parents and he was around them when it happened. I’m glad that he has a couple of good friends that can help him with his depression and his music. It’s great that Teddy’s father and uncle are going out for Ryder to help him get a recording contract as well as possibly a tour with his new band. Great chapter and story.

Really great chapter. I had a feeling that Trent was in for quite a surprise the way Hamysh was acting when he asked Hamysh if he could possibly rejoin the RSV Aquaria in order to assist in the research to be done. It came as quite a shock when Trent was informed that the the work to be done was to accommodate a new type of deep water 💦 vehicle, and he was informed that he was to be the captain of the new RSV Oceania which is about twice the speed and less than half of the size of the Aquaria. Trent told Jonah that he told Jonah you’ll have to keep up old man and Jonah acted like he took it hard and then he tells Trent he was a cheeky bastard. I think the four crew members he chose are all in his employment already and he would take the new crew and he would have the four members of the crew of the aquarius. The way he sees it is that he would be able to train the additional crew to his specifications. All four of the crew that Trent chose to be transferred to the Oceania are standing in front of the desk waiting to find out that they were going to be transferred from aquaria when he saw that they were very nervous.

So people are thinking that the Aquaria is a Chinese sub coming to invade them. I loved the part where the lieutenant who was monitoring comms and the cameras, when he spotted something swimming towards them. He reported that he had spotted a ufo or in this story it was an unidentified floating object, when Jonah got to the bridge he was informed that the object was no longer on the cameras and then Jonah looked at the porthole window saw Trenton there went to his station and flipped a switch and told Trent he was now a UFO Trent was laughing 😆 so much that he fell back into the water 💧. The captain told the lieutenant that Trent fell off laughing and to watch him until he is back on shore. Once Trent was back in his accommodation he radioed the Aquaria and when the lieutenant responded he asked him about the UFO, the lieutenant stated that he had reported it to the captain that way, Trent said he had a good laugh at that and all was good. I’m glad that Trent knew enough to have him picked up at a alternative location away from the people that had gathered at the shore to see the sub. Once Trent told the captain that he needed to send the dinghy to the alternative location he took off his shirt and shoes and put them in his backpack 🎒 along with the radio and dove into the water so he could swim out to meet the dinghy. I loved this chapter as it just goes to show that the officer on communications and watch should verify what he or she sees before alerting the captain that you see an unidentified floating object heading straight to the RSA. I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving and spend the time with friends and family. 😆👍👍

Eric, I’m glad to see that you’re writing ✍️ again, I hope that the problems you were experiencing are getting better. I hope that the treatment helps Tony at least in the beginning I know a little bit about chemo and radiation therapy for cancer. My mother in law had cancer and she went into remission for about 2 years and then the cancer came back with a vengeance and she wound up passing away after about three to four months she wasn’t a candidate for the treatment a second time around I hope that Tony is around for David & Sasha’s wedding, I really hate when a doctor will stand there or sit which ever they prefer why they would say that someone has six months to live. Again I’m glad to see that you are writing again you’ve been missed. Happy Thanksgiving I hope you have a great day.

I think this is one of the best chapters of the story so far. I’m glad that Artie is settling in real well with Adam, he seems to have been awakened since arriving in San Francisco to live with Adam as was spelled out in her will. I’m glad that Artie got the positive attitude that he would see in his mom, and he knows that she wouldn’t want him to be sitting around moping and crying 😢 all the time. Mary gave him the right tools to help him in life and he’s using those tools to make his own way in his life, since coming to live with Adam Artie has made new friends gained a boyfriend and he’s a starter for the school baseball team. Artie even set up a date night for Adam and the guy who waited on them when Adam took him to the first gay tavern in the Bay Area. Great chapter and story, can’t wait for more.

I’m glad that the date that Artie came up with worked out for the best even when Mason insisted on Artie and Dizzy join them instead of them giving them the space and the time to get to know one another better. I think it’s great that Mason wants to come to see Artie play baseball with the team from school, then he and Adam will have their date night while Dizzy and Artie have theirs. I’m glad to see that Mason likes the boys and even had a great meal with them and Adam even though it was only supposed to be the two men. During dinner they all learned a bit more about the others and it helps that they don’t have any real secrets from each other. I agree that the grandparents are going to try to get Artie back with them, which I think is a very bad idea because they have no idea what Artie has been doing since he arrived in San Francisco. I’m not sure about Ezra or if he even knows about Artie. I kinda think that maybe Adams parents are going to just show up and then get Artie to try to go with them. That wouldn’t be a good idea especially since he’s dating another male.