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  1. Emi GS
    I am glad and happy that you took the challenge and given this beautiful and heart melting poem. I loved it then and I loved it reading again and again. It gives some vibes every time I read it. And the second one, as everyone said funny and I can see all of you in it. So as I said before you just didn't see the muse. Or now you have seen it. They both are lovely poems tim... ~Emi.
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    It was already on my reading list, but now I am going to read it all day tomorrow. This small excerpt made my curiosity grew and I can't stop myself reading it....
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    As a science student, I'd say I liked both. But I am a math person more than the chem. So my vote goes to Geometry too. And I loved the chemistry you showed in math, that's another reason for me to like Geometry. Nice poems Parker... And I can smell the burnt shirt and slippers of my friend all over again. ~Emi.
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    Morning After

    Emi GS commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Morning After

    Haiku proved that someone can create greater things with little words. And with these Haiku you proved how true it is. Such a wonderful Haiku. I loved them. And the descriptions of heart-mind -soul, was just amazing. ~Emi.
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    As Ben said we all have to agree with Gary. and I too have a list of pleas I wanted and asked a number of times. Coming to the second poem, you channeled your talent. I love the way how you make a boring subject into an interesting approach. Are you practicing hypnotizing with poems??? Just kidding... ~Emi.
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    I don't have any words to describe my feelings after I read this. Or my feelings have no describing words after reading this. Or after reading this I don't have description for any feelings. I don't know. Don't I know!? Do I don't know? I just started to read what everyone said. Yeah what ever they said, I read. Does that make any sense at all? Is there any sense that doesn't sense at all? Just the sense! Bravo. Just Bravo. You have shown how a great writer can written a write. A great write can be written by a writer. I am bowing to the work of a great artist. Thats such an awful story, created goose bumps from the first sentence to till the end. Wonderful story SkinnyD. Wonderful... ~Emi.
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    My youth, my youth is just for you. Only for you— Just you. Capture the blueness of these eyes, and hold those brown frizzles. Absorb the redness from these cheeks, and kiss those rosy lips. Touch every inch of white skin. and engulf each black mole. My looks, glamour and handsomeness are all for you— Just you. My youth, my youth is just for you Only for you— Just you. Fasten my breath— Make it shallow, and increase my heart beat. Create goose-bumps all over me, and make me swe
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    I have to agree with Ben. Its so song alike and felt such a love story. I don't have words to say more than the others. They all covered everything I wanted to say. Its lovely and very heart touching, in a good way, and I loved it a lot. Wonderful love story Parker... ~Emi.
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    Many More Happy Returns of the Day Daddy Dave... And as per the ritual the is yours all day Today. So Enjoy Well
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    I haven't read it yet, but will do soon. I hope I'll complete by Wednesday, so that I know for sure about what Cole was exchanging info on...
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    I’m certain of the way I am and with that thought, almost everything I do or screw up, is just my influence on MY surroundings. Because that’s the only thing I can experience, my surrounding. The world around me IS exactly how I see it, how I want to experience it, because the only observation I can make of the world, is my own. This is, some what, exactly what I said almost five or six years back. It may be a coincident, but felt special to me. Wow!!! Thanks for reminding me these words. I kind of missed myself these days. And about your story, it is interesting and I am still reading. And will read, indeed. I hope, this time you won't put us wait after this kind of sudden twist. Waiting for more... ~Emi.
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    Yes, you are true and I will write more. Thanks for the encouraging words Tim... ~Emi.
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    Thanks Gary. Thank you so much for the compliments. I am glad you liked it... ~Emi.
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    I glad you liked it and thanks for those encouraging review Parker.
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    First True Friend

    Emi GS commented on Emi GS's story chapter in First True Friend

    Thank you for sticking with the story and sorry for this late reply. Tyler, finally is going out of his boundaries and its not just Ryan, he is gonna get a lot in return. Both the good ones and the bad ones too. I hope you will be with him to find out. Elli...? Still...??? I think you have to wait to know more about him too. Thanks for the review... ~Emi.
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    Congratulations tim. I know its not an easy task to write a poem each day, as myself participated for it. Sometimes its on the last minutes and have to write it without sleep until the last sec. I know you worked hard, and you deserve this got featuring. I'd read some already and will recheck if I had missed to give a review or a like. Congratulations once again... Nice review Adi...
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    Hope Still To feel being loved by someone; I can run the whole world. Instead what I found in result; deceit and perfidy. Dragging myself from misery; never an easy task. Still hoping the best will happen; high and inspirited.
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    And You all forgot the Real Eminent One here... Happy retirement Northie and congratulations dear Val...
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    Unfortunately I am not writing this week. So, it may appear in my story 'First Love', which is fully based on prompts...
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    I am always a flatter for the First line prompts...
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    Brownie Points

    Emi GS commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Brownie Points

    That stuffy, that was grumpy and that was funny. I mad me laugh rather than as you expected. That's definitely gonna earn some Brownie points to you though... ~Emi.
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    Acceptance

    Emi GS commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Acceptance

    Auh!!! Such a lovely poem. I can see the maturity of David, whom I haven't met yet(sorry for that ), through your poem. Yeah, Acceptance is such cure itself. Lovely Poem SkinnyD... ~Emi.
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    Fearless

    Emi GS commented on Cynus's story in Fiction

    I've always read completed stories or mostly written stories, but this is the story I get the chance to read and follow from very first. As it was special for me, for the main character Clint, I has been a great admirer from his very first attempt. And his twin sister is a miracle too. From the very first movement the story shown all the family love, friendship and personal life too. Every character has his/her specialty and Cy explained it perfectly. The Drama, the romance, the care between every relationship were all just neatly presented here. Congratulations on your successful story, again, Cy. Love you... ~Emi.
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    Chapter 11

    Emi GS commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 11

    I was expecting lot of things you had told us today. But I'd never expected the end this soon, like everybody else. Gosh! The drama was great and finally everything turned out to be a happy ending(I haven't added Shiela here). And Zane was a surprise too. I really really liked the end of the story. And 'Hurray!!!' for Travis. Wonderful story Cy... ~Emi.
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    Oops! Fixed it!
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