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Many More Happy Returns of the Day Robert...

Welcome to the red Northie. And congratulations on your first story. It was very fun read and I loved the new world you build here in this story. Wonderfully done. ~Emi.

Happy Birthday Aditus!

Thanks for this clear explanation...

We don't know what's 'Thanksgiving', so I'll wish you all guys along with Renee. Happy Thanksgiving guys. Enjoy and be happy...

:wizard: Many More Happy Returns of the Day My Dear Northern Friend :wizard: I wish for the best of the best and happiest of the happiest day for you...

Happy Birthday Al...

Wow. Very sweet. I liked the ending very much. The self-respect Terry showed was outstanding. As I myself sometimes consider as a bi, I myself have lot of mixed emotions. You have shown it very clear and well. You surprised me about Brook as I was strongly believing that she is what she is not. I am not saying in bad way. But I very much liked the ending. So cleverly done. Thanks for this wonderful story. And sorry for this late review... ~Emi.

Oh Puppi I really loved this unexpected guest and how it turned out as an adventurous love story. Gosh, you pull all my strings and made shivers by your character and your writing. Such a wonderful story. Well done my friend... ~Emi.

Ugh. Sorry for this late review Gary... You crafted this delicate situation into a beautiful story and you once again proved that you are awesome. I have to agree with Tim; eyes might deceive you with what they are showing. And trust is the base for any relationship. You showed these very well in this story. I felt it. I loved it. And love to see more of it, if you planned to continue. Get the hint... Wonderfully done Gary... ~Emi.

Finally. I just loved the new concerns of angel about their relationship. I loved how you showed the mental struggle ze felt before coming into terms with; ze finally fall for the arrogant imp. That was so cleverly done. And I might agree for the concept of what we are wishing for. And I am eagerly waiting to know more about these guys... And coming to the length of the writing, I am sorry I felt kind of bored and some content felt like you are repeating. Even though it's common in general world, thinking continuously same, but kinda felt bored. It's not like that I haven't liked this lengthy chapter, but just felt it could be better more of as short story. And that too my feeling only. But I can bare with it as I get so read how the story going in all sorts. Lovely story Tim. I am awaiting for more. And sorry for this late review. ~Emi.

Here is my attempt to 503 prompt, which I was attempting late. And I clearly don't know 503 got featured before or not. http://www.gayauthors.org/story/emi-gs/firstlove_emi/5 And here is my story based upon all the prompts that has been gone awhile back. http://www.gayauthors.org/story/emi-gs/firstlove_emi

Wait... Um... Okay... I can't say its a happy ending or just sad. Four live, four hearts wretched in the realm of fate. No one is right and no one is wrong. It's those incidents that lead them to do something that was very lawful than right. They simply don't have make either good or bad out of it. A really complicated story, expressed in a better way. I felt rushing when it comes to the end. Like you really wanted Jake and Ben to get together fast. Wonderful concept of life and fate. Well done Val... ~Emi.

Thanks...

I am trying Gary...

We Indians never think out of family. I had never been alone and knowing that your family might hare you for what you are, never gonna let me think straight. I don't know what I'll do, but hope is what I always stand with. Thanks you for the supporting words my friend.

Hello guys. As you all know, I am not out of closet and still think staying there will be better for a while. But sometimes somethings are just occurs as it's God's will. Yesterday I possibly... accidentally... outed myself to my brother. I was checking on anthology stories and one is on my phone's display. He just took the phone and as unlocked, he looked at the page and almost two are three seconds been there as he has the mobile. But immediately I just pressed the home button and let him use the phone as I have never seen him looking at the Web page. He hadn't said anything, or behaved different. But as I know him, his silence is more dangerous than his anger. I might end up in a family drama and a big war might result between me and my family. Or, it might results in different way as me and my brother are going have best relationship we ever had. I don't know what to do or what to say. My mind felt numb. Either way I just hope this will end soon...

I can't tell anything more than these folks here. It was a very interesting story and I liked how those two felt about losing everyone they know and caring for each other as their own. I loved it. And I don't mind to visit again if you planned to continue the story. Nice story Cia. ~Emi.

I have had never suffered any break-in, but seen people who gone through all that. You had built a great intense along with the story as we, the readers, just experienced the character's fear and all. You almost made me believe that Mal had faked the robbery. Sorry to hear, it's came out of your personal experience. I hope and wish you are fine now. Wonderfully done... ~Emi.

Wow!!! My two favourite stories linked here. I am amazed when you brought the Zaidu character here. I always liked those two stories. And now this one too. You had written the story very well. I liked the vivid explanation of the fighting scene and choices Oliver had to made in necessary times. You showed a fine character in him; a lover, a friend and a great soldier. Wonderful story Adi. Loved it. ~Emi.

Whoa!!! That was not I am really expecting at all. I have to agree with Gary, you really blindsided the readers. No story will be equally suits to the theme with this level. Bravo... You did great on this. I am really proud to be called as your nephew. Love you Aunt Def... ~Emi.

I haven't read anything like this before. For me it is a wonderful story. I felt rushing when I started to read, but I was just got mesmerised how interesting the story is getting phrase after phrase. I loved it. I don't have right words to say how much I liked to read this. You have done a wonderful job. I loved simplicity of your writing. And how you used the greater concept of WW2. Fantastic job. ~Emi.

I just loved the story, no matter what. The intense was very great in the last scene. I haven't read about Ryan and Brady before, but now I'll definitely gonna be sometime soon. I can say Brady really loved Ryan, more than Ryan himself love Brady. Wonderful story for me... ~Emi.

Such a great pain literally poured into this poem. The vivid explanation melted my heart. As Ben said, a very touching poem. Wonderfully written Aunt Def... ~Emi.