I think it's beautiful. I like the buildup from beginning to end, how it starts out innocent at first when you're describing the boy's qualities and then by the time you get to the desire to kiss him, it becomes intense, almost like a hunger.
It feels very surreal and if I hadn't known it was a memory, I'd have though it was a dream. Either way, I think what everyone can relate to in this poem is the fact that all good things come to an end. In the second last stanza, the boy becomes a "blur" and whether it's a memory or a dream, we get the feeling that this moment of bliss is temporary (which we all experience since nothing in life stays the same). But somehow (from the change of tone in the end), everything's going to be alright because just knowing that it happened and being able to relive that memory, can be comforting too.