RainbowPhoenixWI

Well that was a twist I wasn't expecting. I was expecting hunters not vampires, dang you, now I'm gonna have to reread chapters again. Beautiful art as always, viva wisconsin

I better not be the only one crying here.

I can already hear the gossip train. I bet at least one person starts talking about pregnant nekos.

But what next? Gorgeous moment for sure 😁

If it makes you feel any better, I've seen that kind of relationship happen and be for the good. That kind of relationship doesn't usually last long, but if done well Karl could actually heal George that way. If you pay attention to how Karl's reactions are worded, Karl is telling himself that he's not attracted ... trying to force himself to believe it. It's worded vague enough it could just be teenager hormone reaction, or that Karl might actually be gay or bi. Either way, it comes off to me that Karl is already struggling with his sexuality. Makes me glad that we had our fight for equality. I remember fighting my sexuality because being gay was more evil then killing a person. The first time I kissed another boy I ran in terror. Our world has changed fast.

Lmfao, so had a total giggle fit with the husband this morning. I realize this might hit TMI, but I promise it makes it funnier. After reading this chapter I had to give him a full run down of the story. We are both furries. I was raised with constant trips to the kettle. Viva wisconsin. My husband was raised in the mountains in Tennessee, needles to say we had a total geek out this morning. Still great writing, and you're still a true artist.

Well that's going to make for some interesting fall out at school.

Holy wow can I relate to Cyn right now. Being from an abusive home, I can definitely say you hit the nail on the head with the mental reaction. I reacted pretty much the same way when I met my in-laws for the first time. The first experience of what a parent should be was uncomfortable and exotic at best. I almost ran away then, I had no idea how to handle "normal". 5 years later there is still moments my mother-in-law breaks my heart with happiness....... and I still wanna run from her like a frightened hare some days.

Elias and Cyn, hell yeah *stands there like a little child staring at a Christmas tree and wishing*

Beautiful chapter. I love how it reminded me of how much I miss running the deer trails at Camp Tesomas up here in the northwoods. Viva boy scouts. Even the trails down in the kettle don't feel as beautiful and homey as the ones there.

Reading through tears again oh the heart strings.

Beautiful. I couldn't stop crying at the end of the chapter. You are a horribly evil writer for pulling my heart strings. *hugs* I can't get over how beautifully done this chapter was.

Well, nice to see Margaret hasn't changed. *insert sarcasm warning here* I'm just wondering what clues I missed to figure what she's doing behind the scenes. I've reread the whole story 4 times now, trying to piece together her motives and actions. At this point I'm half expecting to find she's behind some of the terrorist actions.

Adorable ..... I had to read it twice to process the cuteness overload. It's like watching my kids when they started dating.

Glad things turned out well with the guards. I hope Margaret let's something happen so that she permanently loses the ability to have sway over anything involving the boys. Maybe Jason will do good enough that him and Devyn are moved to the palace.

Well that just adds another layer of WTF, totally worried about the kids psyche now. Then again, it could cause another situation that will get them both away from the insane tyrant.

I'm glad things settled for you guys. I feel your pain. I am hyperglycemic, and it's the cause of most of the spats between me and my husband. I know you're not asking for help or advice here, but the mother hen in me wants to point out a couple tips that will help you or anyone that ends up with their sugars dropping. Always have orange juice or simple syrup on hand, those two are the healthiest way to get your sugars to spike. Sugar water lasts a long time with out expiring, we keep a soda bottle of it in our fridge. Another thing is making sure you are eating enough carbs and protiens, that's the reasons snickers bars work so well when people are "hangry", they have quick sugars, carbs, and proteins. The last thing eating on time, set an alarm if ya have too, but make sure you eat something every 3-4 hours, it doesn't have to be a meal. Just a hand full of nuts, or a few slices of apples. Random sugar drops can happen to anyone, whether you have a condition or not. I am sorry for the long and unsolicited response, but living with sugar problems for 30 years now I figured a couple tips would be beneficial to you and anyone who reads this.

True enough from the doctor. I'm guessing the foster kid thing just sticks in my head because one of my friends is about to lose his 2 year old to the system (no sympathy needed, it's actually gonna be better for his child). I honestly wonder what I would do if I adopted a kid and him and my son ended up falling for each other. That really is a tough one to think about. I definitely wouldn't fully discourage it. That same situation has been in more documentaries then I can count, so I don't consider it an unnatural behavior. I've seen quite a few times where step-siblings have fallen for each other. So I would consider it normal but uncommon in both the animal and human world. But society doesn't always see things that way.

I've always wondered why a lot of foster kids see foster families as actual relatives and siblings. I admit I'm rather ignorant on the emotional side of that situation. I've never been through the system myself, but I've known a few people that have. About half of the ones I know view the foster families as if they are their birth families. Sometimes while I've been reading this I wonder why I can't comprehend that aspect of it.

I recommend The Neko series, and Brother. Those are a couple of my favs so far Also, I didn't mean to sidetrack the thread, but you two and mannramblings are my favs on this site.

This night come off pretentious, and that is not my intent. I just wanted to comment that I've noticed a good chunk of similarities between yours and Yeoldebard's style and work. Due to that, I honestly think it would be awesome to some day see a collaboration/crossover piece from you two. You're both great writers, easily top 10 from everything I've read over the past 40 years.

This was a great adventure you took us on. I can't wait for the next one.

Ahhhhhhhh, flippen cliff hanger from hell. Well done, but *** **** ************ ***** *** *****. Beautiful as always, I can't wait to read what happens next

So beautiful. You always amaze me with the way you tie things together. I'm honestly torn on if I want to cry for a sequel, a story of what happens to the twins. Or if I want to be content with how this is wrapping up. You never fail in your delivery of perfect art.

I don't know about the pack leaders, but I'm ready for the shit to hit the fan. I try very hard to be the fan that never says this, but my breath is held and I'm leaning far enough forward to fall on my arse. I'm two seconds from begging for the next chapter