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Poor David.....even his subconscious is working against him (Danny telling him the next they see each other it will be forever)....David has to realize that he needs help....what makes him think that his friends are no longer his friends??? Tommy didn't seem to give a flip that his brother is gay so the one member of his family he cares about isn't ashamed of him....I think it's intervention time and one of his friends needs to wake the eff up and realize that

I'm kinda wondering if the ending is really a dream or did his friends come over to check on him and he really threw a punch at Sam. If anyone besides Twoey could understand what David is going through it would be Sam.....he did kiss David after all....David might just be too far gone at this point....I came back from being that far gone...after I was arrested and spent 3 nights in county jail

Gary....Tobyn needs a butt-kicking lol...I feel like a broken record...but I love this story,...Keep up the good work

OMG David needs to get his head out of his a** (oh wait...it was up Donny's sorry lol)..grrrr i don't even know what to say...And Ginny being all blazé about David being left alone with only Tommy....she's a psychiatrist who knows that David is not in a good place right now and she thinks nothing is wrong with the fact he is being left alone for a week with just his LITTLE BROTHER???? where did she get her degree??? A Cracker Jack Box??? David was so effing smart when I started reading this story...somewhere along the way he went left....I don't even know...the only one that seems to be somewhat connected to reality of the potential situation is Twoey....and if Twoey tries to spend too much time watching David....David will probably think that he's just trying to get him to kiss him more or something and give into those thoughts and then get pissed at Twoey......grrr....great chapter...looking forward to more

His father is proof that people that aren't really able to get along with the other people in their family/lives can still be good people....my parents told me 20 years ago when I told them I was gay that they would never accept it whatsoever, and due to circumstances that were beyond my control, I still live with them...The fact that I am gay is NEVER talked about, not even hinted at....but my parents are 2 of the best people in the world...if someone were in a situation and needed help, as long as the situation wasn't brought on by themselves, my parents would help them out....they are nice people (yes they judge, but let's be honest...who doesn't)....I see some of myself in Dorian and I think that if he were take himself out of the equation and take an unbiased look at his father, he just might find a person that does good...he might not agree with every aspect of his father's character, but there is always good to find in others...that's why we judge them to begin with hehehe sorry I shared so much, but this chapter really spoke to me and I remember hating my parents for not accepting me, and then about 5-6 years later I learned that if I didn't force the issue on them, that they still loved me (just didn't particularly like 1 or 2 aspects of me) now, thanks to their love and support (in most things) I just graduated from college and have a Bachelors degree Thank you for this chapter....looking forward to more

Gary!!!! do you know what these two are doing to me??? I swear I'm feeling just as flustered as they are! lol Great chapter once again! Looking forward to many many many more.

OMG Hunter you have no idea how the message boards in Texas are....there are message boards for high school football that have thousands of members.....it's insanity lol.....I didn't particularly care for Cory's dad....it gave me some idea of why maybe Cory is MIA right now....if he reacted how I imagine he did from just that cat comment, Cory is going to need Efrain, Preston, and Indie to get over this....I'm anxious for more

I had a feeling Tilly knew...I hope she wasn't too hard on Tobyn...I have a feeling she would rather him be happy than force him to be with her (at least I'm hoping for that)

How long do I have to wait??? Please don't make it long.....I love this story and want more more more. And if you ever need help again, feel free to ask!!!

I don't think I've ever cried from reading part of a story as I did during this chapter. I was bawling...I'm tearing up a week later just thinking about it again...I'm going to miss Dylan so much....he was probably my favorite character

I just finished reading the whole series....and I'm loving it....I'm loving the similarities to the X-Men Dark Phoenix Saga...not sure if it's intentional or not....but it's fracking great....keep up the brilliant work....

GRRRRRRR how can two people that are in sync with each other not be on the same page??? heck part of me is wondering if they're even on the same chapter or the same book for that matter lol.....I know....there's more to come and I promise you i'm going to keep reading!!!!!

NOOOOOOO say it ain't so please.....I want to see Ethan confront his sperm donor, see their pups, see where Corey, Cody, and Darius go in their relationship...

For how many years has Diarmad had things going exactly the way he wants??? And now he has this young 18-year-old running around him and he probably still views Noel as a child. Noel is far from a child, however I know I wasn't an adult at the age of 18 and I know many 18-year-olds that are not truly an adult. Compromise is the name of the game....Noel needs to realize that his running around "acting his age" as Landyn said might be irksome to Diarmad's disposition...Diarmad needs to realize that Noel already has one father and doesn't need another.

Is this before or after they visit Mikey's cousin??? Because in that Mikey I thought Mikey mentioned that his parents did not know about him.

part of the problem is when Noël asks Kristof do you want me to play something for you...on the piano Diarmad bought for Noël for his (Diarmad's) enjoyment

I'm so happy that Toph is out of his dark funk and allowing himself to love and be loved by Gary.

Great job!!! I kinda want to tell Tobyn to get his out of a**, but it's in his character to do what he is supposed to do...but I really cannot imagine him rejecting Kellar if he does finally figure out what both Sybil and Kellar already know...

Great follow up to the wedding...Please make them Daddies (but not too soon) they'll both be great....i can just picture Aiden being a push over to his kids and trying to make Ethan do all the disciplining lol

just reread the entire story...still one of my favorites...what happened to Tyler and the rest of his gang???

Wow....I think Tilly realizes that there is something more than friendship going on between Kellar and Tobyn...I also think she'll be okay with whatever happens...I wonder if Kellar needed Tobyn specifically to finish the job or would anyone have sufficed at that moment???

Uh oh, spaghetti-o's!!! Never a good sign when there is a frowning face looking at you...

WOW....Patrick better be calling because of the guilt he feels from his past actions and telling Ezra not to make the same mistakes.

If Tobyn is not careful, he is going to slip up and accidentally tell Kellar how he really feels...I will be so happy if he does hehehe

After this chapter....I think I've fallen in love with Indie...I wanted to not like him soooo bad...but after he said he had to have the Iceman shirt...that was it!