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  1. northie

    Duncan's Story

    You'd offer me a corner? Wow, I'm honoured.
  2. northie

    Duncan's Story

    Thanks, Gary. I'm very pleased it got to you. As soon as I wrote the original prompt, I had a good feeling about it. You know me: pile on the emotion.
  3. northie

    Duncan's Story

    Thanks, CG.
  4. northie

    Duncan's Story

    Thanks, dugh.
  5. northie

    Duncan's Story

    It is Duncan and Brad, only Brad isn't there; he's in memories. Though I imagine they'll still have conversations. We'll meet Brad through Duncan, and through others. Yes, there'll be additional characters; probably one or two quite important ones, but Brad will still be around. I'm speculating here... if it's in a 3 volume format, 1 would be mostly those two (with others obviously); 2 - Duncan widens his circle more - different characters, things happening in his life; 3 - who knows? Maybe Duncan finds someone else special?
  6. northie

    Duncan's Story

    No. Don't forget this is a standalone prompt. The scenario of Duncan being recently bereaved is likely to be the starting point, but the driver will be him taking control of his life. So mostly looking forward; still it is inevitable there will be looking back as well.
  7. northie

    Duncan's Story

    Thanks, CG. I'm pleased it left you wishing for more. As I said in the story note - which you may well have skipped past - these characters are likely to be the ones I choose to write about once my two current stories are complete. So it will be a while.
  8. northie

    Duncan's Story

    You're very kind. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
  9. northie

    Duncan's Story

    Thanks, dugh. It'll be quite a while before anything else appears. The main arc of the story will be Duncan taking control of his life, so there's plenty of room for positive things to happen.
  10. northie

    Duncan's Story

    As I say in the story notes... But as I've got both Eric and Soul Music to finish, it'll be quite some time before I get going. I have vague plans which will solidify over time.
  11. northie

    Duncan's Story

    Sitting at the kitchen table with the light on, Duncan gazed blankly at his bowl of cereal. He lifted the spoon, let it hang in mid-air for a moment before slowly dropping it back into the bowl. The contents were soggy and cold. Why had he made it in the first place? Habit, most likely. Something to try and make the day seem normal. The sight of the food didn't tempt him in the slightest. The clock’s tick echoed in the silence. He looked at the hands, moving inexorably forward, without any t
  12. northie

    Morning

    On the day of his husband's memorial service, one man recalls episodes from their life together.
  13. northie

    Fear the Dark

    Yes, indeed. That's the way I like my horror / weird tales. Hope you slept OK.
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    Fear the Dark

    🐔 I prefer my horror to be psychological - hints, distortions, delusions. I have no stomach for the slash and gore school of overkill.
  15. northie

    Fear the Dark

    Shiver is good. 😱 Thanks, Gary.
  16. northie

    Fear the Dark

    How long have I got? It lurks close by: a shape, waiting, panting, in the pitch black. The lantern splutters; dims, exhausted. “Set me free, you bastards!” It scents my fear: growling, inching ever closer. “Help me!” One last flicker… then utter darkness descends. Have mercy, O Lord!
  17. Excellent replies, and it's great to know the GA welcome works for them. If there are more replies out there, I look forward to another AAA on the same topic. Thanks, Carlos.
  18. northie

    The Story

    Thank you for reading. It's sad to think that this time together is probably the longest Max and Saul have had in each other's company.
  19. I'm sorry for your struggles. Both these are vintage you though. 'Yet make me clean with kisses in the dew' is beautiful and a perfect example of you bringing all things round to love. 'will never see our dyes bound hard and fast' is another perfect phrase, and one I agree with wholeheartedly. You may feel these trickled; to me, they flowed.
  20. Thanks, @Cia for the feature. *wonders what questions she has up her sleeve* @Headstall and @Carlos Hazday, I'm glad you recall the story with such fondness. I remember being very proud of my work, and reading it now, that feeling stays. If you do fancy giving it a read, as @Daddydavek says, you may wish to have a tissue handy.
  21. northie

    Sailing By

    You're not the only one. It's sometimes difficult to tell with a piece this short. Whatever, it is, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
  22. northie

    Rainbow Colours

    Thank you! I welcome every single expression of satisfaction. Eric has, though he's only now realising how much. Most of his life has been spent just getting on with things as they are.
  23. northie

    Sailing By

    Thanks, Geron. It didn't get a very good technical response when I first posted it on my external blog. Good that @droughtquake considers us both 'his favorite authors'.
  24. northie

    Sailing By

    Who could you possibly mean...?
  25. northie

    Sailing By

    Don't try reading any 'stream of consciousness' novel then, like James Joyce or similar. Not that I have read Joyce but I've certainly ploughed my way through books with no chapters. I suppose, why should a writer be concerned by how easy or otherwise a reader finds their masterpiece?
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