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Ok--they have to follow a black stone road to a special city. Beckett has a vision. At least it is not a yellow brick road. Will they be prisoners when they reach the city?
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Wonderful--Ritchie is going to have a new home and David has been remade and grown into a happy, health youth. He wants to be adopted by Armand and Colin. Things are looking up.
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Chapter 20 - Found Family
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Found Family
OK-- so Olona was told about the new friends Tisa had met and had eventually become willing to meet them. She was reluctant at first which upset Tisa. Now the whole group will open up new opportunities for felllowship and powerful abilities for defense and offense. -
Moral here--do not cross Devin. He has unexpected ways to punish others without revealing his abilities. He had to step in since the dorm/school system failed them. The RA should have enforced quiet times. My dorm at college had them. I also could go to one of three libraries that had quiet rooms and study rooms for groups when I needed peace.
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Chapter 19 - Lahari, S’Kay, Gawa, & Ijeron
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 19 - Lahari, S’Kay, Gawa, & Ijeron
The battle with Messiah's at the peninsular lighthouse was delayed. Tualu did not show up to transport them and gave no explanation when they met later at a bar. Tualu might have been mad since the group did not pick Tisa for membership. S'Kay opposes him because he looked like a human and he was prejudiced to not like/trust her by her appearance. But, they have not seen her shadow powers in action to realize she could add needed significant killing power as they attacked shifts. -
Chapter 18 - Confrontation
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Confrontation
So they all met --but Olona-at the mystics home and exchanged stories. Harakin was sacred but calmed down. He had misidentified someone and his attacked was nullified. I like this group and their various skills make them a formidable force. Time will tell what they do, -
Well, Trevor cleared the air and now is looking forward happily to a great year at Harvard. He met Shannon and said forcefully goodbye. She is pregnant and he said he was the not the father when she accused him. She played around and there are multiple candidates. Her explanation of the dustup in San Diego was lame and stupid. Her partner was her sister. She still held to her cruel views of gays and his short--midget-friend. Boy, she still is one bitch. Trevor does not like labels, but seems to want to play with girls and to the further explore his gay side. Just in a brief period of time on campus he found willing playmates, He has not yet found his mate, buy has two good friends back in Burney and may find more here. He is keeping his mind open. I loved this interesting story and liked most of the main characters, Thank you. I will gladly read your next exploration of these themes and individuals.
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Track 11) Feels Alright - The Nude Party
scrubber6620 commented on coriander's story chapter in Track 11) Feels Alright - The Nude Party
Sebastian and Naveen needed a break from their problems. They had to delicately move and talk on safe subjects not to hurt the other. They took a trip. Venice and the shore gave them the respite and diversion they sought . They ate and drank at a historic bar the Sebastian visited with his dad years ago. Interestingy, Sebastian fancied the bar tender who suggested he and Naveen attend a concert nearby in a few days. At lease, Sebastian knows what in immediate three problems are. He has to face them Right now, he needs a job and replacement for Miles. Can he take charge of his life and act ? Others are going to force him --his boss and his father and perhaps, Miles -
What a great Thanksgiving dinner! Armand made a momentous decision based on what he learned. Marcel was fabulous and a wonderful chef for all who assembled at the Home. Armand was the subject of so much attention that he had difficulty eating. Care was taken to see that David could eat, His teeth will not be available till Christmas. Armand decided to move his studio to the fourth floor of the home. He wants to be surrounded and inspired by the kids and never leave Colin. He will give Carl his old studio to use. He is not going to move to NY and carry out his nightmare. He wants to be her surrounded by those he loves. His art and craft can best be nurtured by them.
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Track 10) Casualty - Lawrence
scrubber6620 commented on coriander's story chapter in Track 10) Casualty - Lawrence
Sebastian pushes Miles away. He likes him too much. I hope Miles comes back him after a few days and confronts him. Sebastain has not opened up to him, yet. Can he? They need each other. At least, Sebastian needs him to keep his job, I bet. For now, Sebastian can practice his avoidance behavior by advising Naveen who seems to have his own personal problems. -
Chapter 17 - The First Organic Mechanic of Teshon City
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 17 - The First Organic Mechanic of Teshon City
Tisa and Olona just learned they did what few else had done. They escaped from Xin and reached Teshon City. Now, they have comfortably settled in with good friends. Olona is serving people needing medical help and doing things they request. She offers a choice. They are so happy---“We are pretty impressive,” she added with a smile. “I wonder what else we are going to achieve.”★ -
A HEA ending--hooray! Ludwig was not left stranded. Caden came back and guilt the resort. His father backed him. “I'm really glad you came back.” “Of course I did. How could I have just left the man of my dreams behind like that? I fucking love you, dude.” “I love you, too.”
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The boys had a great fishing adventure and enjoyed eating part of the fish that night. But Armand had a terrible nightmare saying he moved to New York and separated from Colin and the Home. He awoke and told Colin. GG had given Armand a view of his future. A move to NY would cause other problems With the dream as evidence, Armand can decide not to move away and to stay close to Colin and the Home. He wants them to be parts of his life,
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Zoey, Rusty and Matty working separately stopped the Implacables from ruining the campus drinking parties on Saturday.. Matty showed up as Cat Boy and gained the crowds interest hanging out in the tree. When it looked like the crowd would capture Matty, Rusty wearing a Phantom mask and costume with cape helped Matty to escape after kissing him. Rusty captivated the crowd by singing popular high class songs and left, He broke the momentum of the crowd's protest. Zoey working undercover as part of Connor's crew and had worked to keep people from capturing Matty The good guys succeeded, But they do not know about everyone. Rusty's role is hiddem. Matty was perplexed by him. Rusty still did not know who Cat Boy is, Time for them all to fess up to each other. Rusty should open up first to Matty. Meanwhile, Xpress is on seriously looking out for the real masked singer.
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If this is not too heretical, George Granger was portrayed as having somewhat the same problem of male sexual relationships --though on a smaller scale. George finally had to come to grips with what the few important male sexual partners in his life meant to him. He decided he was willing to love a select few others in different ways. When living on a ship or ashore, he was able to practice serial monogamy if his lover was with him--otherwise he was open to more bedmates, Ashore, he had that brand on his wrist they left him open to requests from his "brothers." Will and Travis should have a compressed , exiting time in Hawaii to work things out. They are at different stages, though Will is extra mature for his age and has a long period of having many sexual partners. Travis has had few partners--Vaugh, Zach and Will. Will is the only one who touches his soul and brings him joy and sexual fulfillment. At this point, he might never see a need for anyone else. Travis seems to more of a high school teenager with short term thinking. Let us see how they figure their roles out and how flexible they can be.
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Chapter 16 - Home
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 16 - Home
It seems Sumi and Harakin were able to meet the crew in Teshon City, They gated to Find the home of Dozi and [llya and went to see the mystic to get fully healed. Harakin'S neck wound needed salve after 5 stiches. Everyone got along and was so friendly. This was so very different from the harsh, unpleasant treatment at the military camp. They loved Dozi's meet pies. No one here knows about Xin or what they did or the castle. Hopefully, they can stay hidden. They found out they were shifts. Thus was a welcoming, accepting situation. They found so many new types of people and no one judged them or tried to use them. They were so surprised by Auntie Pag and her two friends and soon took them all in stride. These two newcomers need this place and these people to be healthy and happy. Luck finally has been on their side. -
Will has been given food for thought by Casey. It was needed and could cause a healthy shift. He is questioning the nature and importance of his relationships. He wants Will to think through his relationships and consider what they mean and how he should treat people, He wants Will to talk fully with Travis. Will is intrigued and wants to get a better grip on how relates emotionally and sexually to people he cares about. He needs also to talk to Stef for advice on how to lead his life and relationships. Stef had many partners and then later in life committed to Greg and JP after Greg died.
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Blake cried thinking about his sad life after his parents kicked him out for being gay. Seth was very touched and kissed him. What a can of worms,...They cannot be a couple without Seth being identified as being gay. How can Seth help Blake ? Trust Craig to be a bastard and get mad at Seth. He did not like Seth being around Blake. He must know he is gay from his time in the hospital. He might not want Seth to have a gay playmate which could cause suspicions if he is around Seth. I bet he is very possessive. He is going to make Seth's life hell, I bet,
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Chapter 15 - Tisa
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 15 - Tisa
Tisa is a dangerous enemy with fierce shadow powers. But she was not able to join a huge battle when she was hit in the head,.Olona saved her and took her away and bandaged her head. She was surprised when some mecanical/human device mysteriously appeared and took ger to a dark underground area. Tuala has taken her to join S'Kay and others to attack and kill messiahs. She can help them and they will be more powerful and feared attackers as a group. -
Chapter 14 - Ronging, Part Four
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 14 - Ronging, Part Four
Good--Ronging is fleeing the town that held him prisoner. He can cause them no more harm nor does he want to hurt them. He satiated. He has a very long trip and Tisa and Olona found out. I hope no monster come this way from the Gunge, unless they do not fear capture. -
Oh My--things seem to be changing too rapidly. They had just made love. Caden sees a plane and hopes it will return and notice his campfire. He is very excited. He thinks they can be found and both leave the island. Maybe, he is right or is too optimistic about being found. Ludwig objects and says he cannot leave the island. He is safe there and he is not part of the modern world. He cannot exist in the sunlight. He will not leave. Caden though is not tied to him and should do what he feels right. Caden realizing Ludwig's position says he will return and could build a resort business there for them both to enjoy. If Caden does leave, it is doubtful right now he will return. He is not known to be a serious person. Who would believe and support his idea of building a resort on a desert island?
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Great,,,,Beckett has enemies in this world who want what he wants and will go after him and want to possess Parallax's tail which is highly prized. So far, he has not been found. Val, the large dragon, is his bodyguard, not guide to the tail. He does not know where it is. He has to think and ask questions. Now where would or could a lost star be hidden? What does it look like? When Beckett finds it, what is he to do with it? Maybe. Val can take him to where the star was formerly located and they can find clues on who took it and the direction of its movement.
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Chapter 13 - Tisa & Olona, Part Two
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Tisa & Olona, Part Two
Tisa and Olona traveled a long distance over many days and months and finally ended up in Teshon City. These are resourceful and built their own home. By luck, Tisa found other shifts and the moved to an area other shifts lived in. It is dangerous. Shifts are being hunted and beheaded. Tisa and Olana will not be easy to kill. -
The shopping trip turned out to be really needed and a long project. So many children needed new clothes. Armand was a generous and kind buyer. David was pleased but still toothless. He seems to be taking his oral problem in stride. He will be getting a tutor to help him be at grade level asap. Carl has painted his best picture and found a girl from Italy he really admires.
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Au revoir, Grandmaman
scrubber6620 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Au revoir, Grandmaman
Damn--I join the others in loving Robbie's comment about the future Will who is going to test both his fathers to the max. Professor Arbour, you know how to build , complex, interesting and alive characters.
