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Holy f-ck f-uk ... F-UK ... ( 300 more expletives deleted ) With Miss Sybil's revelations, Gary, you've torn out my heart and stamped on it with your foot ... Should I thank you ? If left to my own devices, I'd bring the three Reznicks back to life a thousand times and tear them apart limb by limb and then send them back to hell burning and then repeat the process ... So, Tobyn killed the uncle and Warren killed the son, then who killed the father (I've forgotten the details) ? Karma / payback really IS a bitch; what you reap is what you sow ... ALRIGHT, will someone just turn up the heat in hell for the hunters and let's be done with this ! Bloody f-uking hell ! Where are the tissues when you need them ?!!

I just wish we all have a handbook "Life and everything, the answers to all the questions", so that we'll be so sure if our standing in this world ... thank you for your heart felt work and for making us pause and reflect ... I'll join with all your friends to wish you a better following 7-days !

I thought only Italian families and Asian families (chinese / japanese / korean) have any serious family dramas ... only joking ... Families are microcosms of societies as a whole, so as an inevitable outcome of human nature, strife is bound to take place ... Peacekeeping is often exhausting and in a lot cases ineffectual; no wonder you're burnt out ... As with @dughlas, I'll offer you more of these

I understand all that anger with someone who've broken your heart. I even know that this kind of emotion would be toxic BUT I couldn't help myself cheering Corey on ... I'm over 50 years old and supposedly should be more mature in my reaction and in the way I should handle this kind of situation; however giving Brett the cold shoulder treatment feels so good ... To have a bit of your heart broken every time your best friend declare his intention of finding someone else to build a family with and then use your body for his sexual gratification ... so yeah, I feel that punch in the face has been SO justified ... They were just teenagers, so how mature would they be in dealing with a breakup ?

For all the years I lived in Canada, 6 years, on and off, I've never visited the east coast. Reading this chapter makes me regret the oversight bitterly. So an item on my bucket list, go to Nova Scotia, New Brunswick, P.E.I. and Newfoundland ... I also regret not keeping up with my friends from University, reading the scene of an almost reunion (albeit high school friends) ... so, regrets, I have many ... BUT, @droughtquake , honestly, that is not gonna happen ... Team Alek forever !! <tears streaming down face>

@Headstall - Gary you can now read @Defiance19 comment on Chapter 51 ... on her profile page ... well, I've read it anyway ! Yay ! Elinor is pregnant ! Yay, Connor and Hugh moving in together ! Yay, upcoming weddings ! Boo ! Would someone just get rid of Brian, puhlease ...

I've never put in an order !!

In my humble opinion, Corey's mother was one selfish individual, she had put her career and social standing and her church before her son's welfare. Reverend Baker was a hypocritical bastard, as you all, my fellow readers, would find out eventually ... I love reading this story again, and on GA, as well ... I could now share my thoughts and rants easier with this comments section ! Thank you Ron !

Dear Tim, Old age is catching up with me, as I'm losing my short term memory, I'll have to go back to the beginning and read the whole thing again. Just so I could enjoy this sweet snippet of their lives even more (you know, the context will make every sentiment more heart felt) ... Regards, hoho

Bullying and abuse should never be tolerated ... In fact I was called out, last night, for being too lenient in my views towards a group of university students who were "hazing" some freshman in a residential hall (student dorms) in Hong Kong. Apparently a group of male students held down a male freshman whilst one of them slapped the freshman's face with his dick. The whole episode was videotaped and posted on Facebook. Three students were expelled from the hall and several others were sent warning letters ... Some public opinion called for the 3 students to be expelled from the University, but I disagreed with that view ... So, would I be a hypocrite if I now demanded that Chris be expelled from the Academy ? Dear craftingm, you've still managed to rip out my heart by killing off Bailey's father and putting him in such a vulnerable place ... Why would his mother be so hard on him, to cope with the loss of her husband, really, so that gave her a free pass to verbally abuse her own son ? NO ... no, just no ...

Apologies, Tim, I've neglected / forgotten to read this little gem of a story ... it is very well written ! May I suggest that, by the way Frankie behaved, he would have Asperger's syndrome (a milder autism spectrum disorder). We could all see Frank loved his son dearly, but had condemned him, to a somewhat lonely life; would detective Kasumaki be able to set that straight (bad choice of wording)? Would he and Dan Evans be able to protect Frankie from Mr B ? Dear fellow readers, if someone could check out Tim's address in Copenhagen for me, I'd fly out there and personally tie him up in a chair at his desk, breathe down his neck until he either completes this story or write at least 5 chapters of Clueless Camping or write the same number of chapters for The Cardmaker and the Caretaker or complete all 3 tasks ...

Finally the lost verses have been found ! I love your poems of this first week, and my emotions echo yours, i.e. going up and down and up ... What is that neighbourhood ? Queen's Street ? King's Street ?

@Puppilull The part about the friend is only a hypothetical situation ... Thank you for taking the time to responding to my comments. Apologies if my ranting seems a bit convoluted ... however I'm tired and depressed after a night with little sleep and I feel that no one wants to hear any more on this matter. I'll part ways with J and L; I do not wish them ill but I won't wish them well either. They've become people that I don't feel I know anymore ...

Many happy returns ! May you live long, be healthy, happy and prosperous ! Big birthday kiss for you Drew !

@Puppilull I would have stayed the hell out of their bedroom ... but this being a site for gay fiction, intimate moments would most often be written for all to read ... Sometimes curiosity does kill the cat ... If I could explain myself clearly then I really wouldn't feel the way that I do, but gut reactions are seldom logical ... For me there is nothing consensual about violence, heavy BDSM is effectively a form of ritualised abuse and I will NOT stand and see my friends / acquaintances suffer from it ... One could argue that there is a line separating BDSM and abuse, but I look at this line and it is so faint that it may well be non-existent ... Violence begets violence, will BDSM become so main stream that we AGAIN accept that some sort of domestic violence could be tolerated ? "Oh, he / she is a sub, so of course you'd expect the dom to punish him / her whenever it is warranted." Substitute "sub" with "woman" and "dom" with husband and the reaction from most people nowadays would be revulsion. Would we normalise this kind of behaviour ? I see more and more stories with this BDSM tag on them, whether it is yours, or @Timothy M. 's Clueless Camping, or @Dayne Mora 's EPIC series, or @Sasha Distan 's Best Circles of Hell series (I must say that I bring grief to myself by sticking with demons); these stories cover a really wide range of different subject matters and with characters of different ages but somewhere in them there's this casual attitude towards toys or clubs or acts of a BDSM nature. I suppose that I shouldn't be hating Joey or Lucas but should be hating our society for de-sensitising us on this act of inflicting pain on others to gain pleasure for ourselves; all in the name of not "judging" others and what they're doing is consensual so let them be. I ask myself thus, is it now permissible to be cruel to others as long as they let us ? As for the matter of polyamory / threesomes, maybe I'll explain my prejudice against it sometime; but I'll be drawing on some painful personal experiences, so maybe some other time, or maybe never ...

History repeating itself ... this is so sad ...

I h8 you ...

I have unfollowed this story, why am I still getting notifications ? I'm so upset that I feel ill ... Honestly I haven't read this chapter, but I'm beginning to hate both Joel and Lucas ... Dean could go f-ck himself for all I care ... I just wanted all this to go away ... I'm really, really upset; you think you know some people (J & L) and then they show their dark side to you; you feel betrayed and violated ... The start of the story / series have been intriguing and the characters were upstanding / caring / compassionate; I really object to how they've turned out and there's nothing I could do about it ... I can't even scream, I'm just whimpering ... lying prostrate wishing I'll just fade away ...

I'm quite surprised to find out that I'm a vindictive person, because I take great satisfaction in the way Corey would be ignoring Brett for a few more chapters in this story. It would serve him right, that two timing bastard ... YES, I've read this story before and have enjoyed it immensely ! Now I'm so glad it's being posted on GA, this way I could vent my (probably unfounded) anger at the characters who I dislike, like Brett, Corey's mother and someone who would make an appearance soon ... Charlie had been and would continue to be a great friend and ally for Corey ... however I really should cut the young people some slack, teenagers would be teenagers and they should be allowed some free passes to make mistakes ...

I suppose this function only works in the "full" site version rather than the mobile version ...

I've watched Dallas, the original series, a long, long time ago ... Has there really been a gay version of that prime time soap ? I agree with @centexhairysub that conversation between Maria and her two dads should be very interesting, to say the least ... I really hope that Raymond and Danny could mend their fences and to try and see if they could develop a relationship ... YES ! I'm the ultimate romantic ...

This chapter completely negates the sweetness in Chapter 3. Did this take place before their marriage ? Apologies, but I haven't read this in detail ... Just NO ...

Screaming ... running away ... tripped over something, barely getting up ... continue running ... and screaming ...

I'm sorry, but Brett was a bastard; he wanted to be with someone else and didn't even have the guts to come clean. In the first chapter he just told Corey he couldn't accept himself being gay and walked out but in fact, he had been two timing Corey, so yeah, in my book he would definitely be a bastard !

NO, you most certainly did not ... I hate horror movies ... I'm scared of them ...