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No one HAS TO come out to their family, there is NO rigid rule about that ... DO NOT feel compelled to do anything that you're not ready for ... Just plan things at your own pace, it is not "chickening out"

I was going to tear you a new one (Is this expression inappropriate as English is not my mother tongue?) for breaking my heart with the brutal and gruesome ending. However, after reading your afterword, I have to admire you for your bravery in your personal life. Please stay safe and stay strong, all my positive thoughts go out to you ... p.s. It will be helpful, to me, at least, if you post a warning for future work (at the story description part) if there'd be graphic violence involved. Just so I am not caught by surprise completely ... okay I'm overly sensitive and a wuss, but I'm actually traumatised now ... I never choose to watch a horror movie, not in a cinema, not on TV, not on any other kind of devices ... p.p.s. Thank you for your work

Christians ? What christians ? What kind of monsters are they ? Although this is fiction, I'm sick to my stomach ... what an awful ending ...

Argh ... screaming loudly !!

Argh ... <quietly screaming>

As long as people like you, who don't give up hope, continue to speak out, we as a species will have a chance to survive / move forward and possibly progress to a better future ...

Why would the evil man (Sheriff) think he could get away with all that dumb shit ? Planting evidence, trumped up narcotics and murder charges ? Was he insane ? Oh, oh, oh ... Paul ended up being pissed off with Jeff ... not a good sign ...

Cliffhanger(s) are really overrated ... note how they've been used / abused to death by TV soaps ... The rewritten paragraphs read so much better, because I think I've read the first version and couldn't make head and tails of the story ... Bring on the Adam's family <finger snap, finger snap>

I know I should be comforting you with words of condolences and such, but I'm crying my eyes out ... Thank you for sharing a little bit of him with us ...

O M G, this tangent is going off to uncomfortable territory ... I fear that it'll not end well ...

Good night B, it's past midnight after all ...

NO ! Liam friend zoning Alek ?? :scream:

NO ! Liam, please, friend zoning Alek would be a big mistake ... please, no ... :run away sobbing: This frank and open conversation, though so authentic and real, breaks my heart ...

Argh ... there'll most probably be violence and bloodshed in the next chapter ... argh !

Cruel fate ... I always go on a rant when an author let something bad happen to one of the characters, because to me you are the god that created the world (story) that they live in. I usually lash out at the author for any hurt / heartache / abuse / etc that he / she has inflicted on the protagonist in the story ... That was brutal and cruel for a teenager to go through ! I DO NOT like it one bit ...

You are an evil author ...

Dirty boys ? tsk ?? More like dirty minded author AND like minded dirty readers ...

Okay, people are not rational when they are passionate and angry, at the same time ... BUT still it is disappointing that Taylan and Mitchell had acted that way ...

:crying: :sobbing: :going back to bed to shut out the world:

Wow ! This has been a lot of fun ! Cannot wait to start on the sequel / part 2 ...

I'll stop my binge reading now and go take a cold shower ... wow ...

"Overdue conversation" may lead to something more between Tony and Dillon, if you choose to continue this story ... Well, as it is, we would have to rely on our imagination to provide them with a HEV, for the time being ...

NO ! I don't know how this will end ! Actually I dread what I'll learn eventually ...

:run and seek refuge in a Chinese temple where these foreign devils hold no sway:

No, no, no ... a resounding NO !