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Jack needs to tell all his "friends" to just go home!! Murray might be the exception!!
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This is undoubtedly one of the most gripping stories I have ever read - here or anywhere else! It has actually brought about serious recollections on my own past behaviors which, in turn, are causing introspective thinking and some self cleansing. I can't imagine how difficult this is for you to write Geoff - but thank you for this powerful and moving account of incidents and events. David
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WOW!! Everyone reading this chapter felt the raw and powerful emotions you conveyed so well. Thank you Geoff for sharing this with us!
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This is not a good idea!!!
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So true Chris 191070 - the burden of carrying secrets will eventfully become too much to bear!!! Also, I agree, switching from 1st to 3rd person has been seamless. Great chapter!!
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Well I'm hooked! Great Start!!
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A wonderful story Ethan! I'm so glad I stumbled onto it by accident! Your writing is superb! Your ability of giving life to characters is refreshing and captivating. Plus I'm a succor for HEA (happy endings)!! Take care!
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NOT happy ? I'm over the moon! It's about time!! Love it!!
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Jordan's abandonment issues and his fear of disappointing his Mother may be the reason he is reluctant to be honest with everyone! However, lies have a way of coming back to bite you in the ass! Great story Ethan! I am really enjoying the ride!!
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Well I was surprised at the anger Jenn had and is still keeping! Hopefully she'll come around!
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Well I'm of the opinion that Jenn will be pissed but eventually happy when she learns the whole story!! Noah is her best friend!!
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Oh the tangled web you weave!! I love it!! Like everyone else, I'm looking forward to seeing Sebastard get his due!! But, as far as Jenn goes, I believe she already sees the connection/attraction between Ethan and Jordan. Another great chapter. Thank you Ethan.
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I'm late getting here but what a GREAT story. It's well written, good character development and maybe a little to much suspense - but that's ok - because it keeps all of us on our toes. Thank you Ethan. I love it!!!
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Another great addition Tim. You have a astonishing ability to put thoughts together that paint the picture!! I think we are ALL struggling somewhat with this chaos we're living with. Most of us are social beings and isolation takes a toll on everyone in some form or another - and to some - a greater degree! Take care my friend! David
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Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 8
KayDeeMac commented on Comicality's story chapter in Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 8
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Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 7
KayDeeMac commented on Comicality's story chapter in Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 7
HardPointz Yes - even in the darkest of days there is light that eventually shines through! I know from experience also! Don't give up, that special person is out there and eventually you will find him!! Take care and remember: things do get better!! David -
Another great chapter and "HOT" as hell!! (Verdammt !!!) These two are perfect for each other and hopefully the romance will continue after Hawaii. Greyson will have to deal with Mom, his controlling manager and, probably, NNN!
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I have to say I thought this might be somewhat autobiographical. It was very touching and very well written. I'll also bet it brings similar thoughts to many of us who have gone through similar journeys! Thank you Geoff! And Wesley8890 - you were not the only one shedding a few tears. Happy Belated Birthday!!
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Arch this was a sensational first story! I was able to believe in each character - even the bully David! You have a remarkable talent and I will certainly follow you for new stories. Thank you!! David
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Well it certainly kept me guessing. Good story!! Thanks invnarcel !
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I have to agree with drpaladin - Philip's life has definitely livened up several notches!
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I take it all back - Stanley is a master of deceit!!!!! AND dangerous!!
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Stanley is hopelessly taken in by Philip and I believe him! But he is already accepting Philip's eventual departure? Stanley is not accustomed to not getting what he wants but here, he seems to have already given up! Why???
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I'm still in the dark and confused about Stanley's behavior. Something does not add up regarding his soft endearing side and his psychotic mischievous side!
