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The Silken Web - Trapped
Ivor Slipper commented on Ivor Slipper's story chapter in The Silken Web - Trapped
Hi CG: Boy, you really want to make life difficult for me - a different prompt for each chapter and not just a follow up!! Brandon's never really had sex though - he's only been a provider to others with no relationship apart from what he got from Chuck when he was dressed in drag, so he has no experience of love. Looks as if I've got myself a task....... Thank for the review CG. Ivor. -
The Silken Web - Trapped
Ivor Slipper commented on Ivor Slipper's story chapter in The Silken Web - Trapped
Hi Lisa: Thanks for the review and glad you liked the story. I think you and LadyDe 'win' and there will have to be another chapter..... If you do read the Striped Socks story, be prepared for a few little shocks :-) Ivor. -
The Silken Web - Trapped
Ivor Slipper commented on Ivor Slipper's story chapter in The Silken Web - Trapped
Hi Geron: Agreed, much darker than my norm, but am intrigued and pleased to see the response it has achieved. Am inclined to agree with LadyDe & Lisa that if there is another chapter it will have to show Brandon in a happier light. -
The Silken Web - Trapped
Ivor Slipper commented on Ivor Slipper's story chapter in The Silken Web - Trapped
LadyDe, you have raised a possibility that I had not considered until now. This was meant as a simple on off story in response to the prompt, but the idea of a turnaround in Brandon's sucky life does have some appeal. Thanks for the review - and the thought. -
The Silken Web - Trapped
Ivor Slipper commented on Ivor Slipper's story chapter in The Silken Web - Trapped
Hi Mikiesboy, Appreciate the review. Have to admit this was a pretty dark tale compared to my normal stories, but that was just how it came out when I started with those prompts. -
Prompts Writing Prompts #532 & #533
Ivor Slipper commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Writing World
My first attempt at a Prompt Story: http://www.gayauthors.org/story/ivor-slipper/thesilkenweb/1 -
I came to my senses as I heard the sound of him doing his traditional doughnut as he drove off from my apartment in his Corvette. This time though it was different; he wasn’t satisfied with just the one but had to do three. I lay there while he did them hoping that he might lose control and smash his fucking Corvette into the fire hydrant on the opposite side of the street. No such luck though as I heard him roar off down the street. I winced as the pain shot through my ass again, but decided I
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A rather dark tale, at least in the first part. Written using Prompt 532
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Hi there, I'm pleased that you managed to stay with this story until the end despite your doubts about the content. Doubtless there are a couple out there in the real world just like Julian and Lance who make each other very happy in many ways, just one of which happens to be the little games the both enjoy.
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Thank you for reading the story and the review. I'm pleased that the story produced a reaction from you. What happened to Jake & Ren was sad and unfair, but as Gary said in his review they did both get to experience real love albeit for far too brief a time. Ivor.
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Great story. I'm glad CG pointed me in your direction.
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Hi CG, I became aware that some (a lot of?) readers were bothered or even put off by the spanking in the story. The story original appeared elsewhere where it drew virtually no comments either positive or negative, but I decided to rewrite the final chapter in an attempt to try and explain the spanking aspect of the relationship between Julian and Lance. I hope I managed to convey that to them it is a game and a kink in which they are both happy to participate. On that basis I think they are ideally suited as equal partners. Lance has found someone he can care for and nurture while Julian feels lucky to have found the love of his life at the first attempt. Am glad that you enjoyed the story and appreciate your support.
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Thanks, Geron. I consider myself fortunate to have stumbled across the picture of 'Julian' on that walkway which sparked this story. I too hope there are some real stories like this happening in actual life, but I fear that is not the case for the real 'Julian'.
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After our short holiday life settled back into its routine. One thing that had been firmly established in that routine was that every Sunday morning we made a point of shaving each other’s pubes. Julian was now spending time on his sketching and also invested in some brushes and watercolour paints. If the weather was decent on a Sunday we would now quite often drive out into the country after having lunch at our favourite restaurant and he would either do some sketches if we found somewhere inte
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CG, I reckon these two would find Disneyland boring! That is unless it had a very long 'Tunnel of Love'. And are they wise to leave Parker holding the fort? Who knows what she might get up to while they're away....... Another very entertaining chapter Geron thanks.
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Getting to know all about you
Ivor Slipper commented on Ivor Slipper's story chapter in Getting to know all about you
Hi Gary, Glad you made it back. As I've said elsewhere the 'whipping stuff' forms only a small part of their relationship which is based on a lot else besides. Julian wanted to experience something and apparently liked it. Lance wasn't keen to oblige him, but couldn't see ant great harm in doing so. I'm sure as they get to know each other better their relationship is going to grow deeper. -
Thanks, Jay. I've tried to answer your question in my reply to CG. I know the 'whipping' isn't going to appeal to many readers, but this is very light,'fun' spanking which some people do find stimulating in real life. Maybe as their relationship grows things will change. Julian originally liked it because it made him feel Lance was still with him during some of the time they were apart, but now they are together, so perhaps......
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Hi CG, Thanks for the review. Happy you are still enjoying the story. I can't see that Becky can afford to move out, but she doesn't face the same problems as Julian so probably doesn't need to. Julian's first sexual 'experience' came after seeing someone in a film beaten with an implement very similar to the martinet he discovered at Lance's flat. Perhaps he felt a need to discover what it felt like? He apparently found it stimulating, hence the need for more.But is Lance really happy to oblige him? These two are on a voyage of discovery - 'getting to know all about you....'
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Thanks, Geron. Glad you are enjoying the tale. These two do seem to have a few outside things going for them in Lance's parents and Julian's sister. It looks like this relationship is based on more than just sex.
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I returned rather dejectedly to the flat. I moped for a while and then decided that as I’d been pretty lazy of late, apart from our activities in bed, I ought to get some exercise. I changed into my running gear and went for a five, or thereabout, miles run. On coming back I decided to luxuriate in a bath where I stayed until the water became quite cool. I got out, dried myself and then threw on an old pair of jeans, a t-shirt and a jumper. Looking at the clock I was surprised to see it was almo
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Thanks for the review, Geron. It does indeed seem that these two are meant for each other, but it is still very early days in their relationship.
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Thanks CG - glad you're enjoying my little tale. This is all a voyage of discovery for Julian who appears to have been very lucky in finding Lance to be his guide. No doubt there will be a few storms along the way though.
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Hi Jay, Glad you're liking the series and thanks for saying so. It's good to have a big sister in your corner for sure. As for the whipping, well it definitely isn't BDSM. Julian appears to have a kink possibly/probably caused as explained in an earlier chapter by having his first orgasm after seeing a scene on TV which created a subconscious wish to know what it actually felt like. Lance isn't that keen to whip him but is willing to go along with it - for now. (Some people do find a bit of spanking improves sex)
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I left it for a couple of hours and then texted him saying ‘How you feeling?’ I got a fairly quick reply that read ‘Fine! Wriggled about so much on bus people were looking at me ;-) Looking forward to taking you to bed with me.’ I was surprised to get a phone call from him late on Monday evening bearing in mind he’d said he only made calls on his phone in emergencies. “What’s the problem? You said you wouldn’t call me.” “It’s about meeting on Saturday.” My heart sank when I heard those word
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Jesse & Marty appear to be made for each other. It looks like being a long, hot summer...
