Ivor Slipper
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Yep - would be a short story otherwise. 🙂
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Indeed so, as there are still 12 chapters remaining.
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A brief furlough - I cannot say time to recharge their batteries - before operations resume.
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The 'opposite side of the tracks' does seem to work well in this type of story.
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Glad you read it @raven1. Those challenges can produce good stories as is evident from the recent 'Secret Author' challenge/contest here.
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True, but don't forget what Flitch said in Chapter 2: Flitch had no mouth with which to smile, yet Jamie felt the action somehow, anyway. "There will be much between us later, cub. An equalizing of gifts for one another. The promise of such is enough." That sounds like a sort of payment.
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Thanks for reading @raven1 and for your comments along the way. It did seem the right location at which to end the story.
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Perhaps there is something in the Czech gene pool. 🙂 They also invented what was later modified by the British and then became know as the Bren gun after Brno where it first came to light. And then there is also Semtex!
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I'm looking on it as a sort of 'Lens Lease' 🙂
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A very wise decision by Jamie to go back to the castle so he can pass on the new knowledge to Kundun. Better to be safe than sorry! No doubt Kundun's flabber will be truly gasted by what Jamie has to impart. 🙂
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I'm sure back then many things were brushed under the carpet, or at least kicked into the long grass.
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Time for thinking caps. I suspect something in the comments will be perceptive.
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Wayne has definitely been welcomed by Ethan's parents, which coupled with the birthday presents, has shown him he is most definitely wanted. Have to hope that the janitor may be able to help them get hold of the camera.
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It would seem that Reynolds & Jackson believe they are untouchable. It remains to be seen if they are beatable, unlike Ethan & Wayne who definitely are. 🙂
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It does seem that the worms are starting to turn.
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There is definitely a fair sized bunch of bigots with power to dislike in this story. Take your time to enjoy the 'battle'.
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" Only fools rush in where even mages fear to tread." What a brilliant line!! And what a battle scene! I was getting worried for Jamie there until somehow he thought to remove Skoda's knack. A case of Czech mate perhaps?? 😀
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On which basis you'll be even less happy with what happen in the next chapter.
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No doubt the school board reflects the time and place. I agree, it is rewarding when a story produces reactions and comments from readers.
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I agree with your comments on relationships @raven1 It does look like trouble is brewing for Wayne & Ethan.
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A wise choice. That's the sparkling variety.
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A bit cheesy, but you might well be right! 🙂 Cheddar Gorge - Wikipedia
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It is time for reflection!
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If it's a good glue you shouldn't need rivets as well...😀
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Indeed so. Yet you will see from earlier comments that several people found what I was describing to be ' almost unbelievable'.
