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Great chapter! I would hate to see the one who hurt Fran while within the reach of Kitt, Symon or any of the Bear clan.... Just saying. Hamburger would resemble a steak in comparison to the remains .

Can we just turn Sebastian into a volleyball and have a 21 to zip shutout?

I agree with the above posts. I can not quite go to the point of not liking Jordan, but he really needs to come clean with his friend AND quit using anybody around him. I understand he is still new to his new lifestyle and sexuality, but at the least he should talk with Noah and Jenn and explain his mistakes and see what they think. I am sure Jenn will be disappointed, but it was really a small misstep and after a good ass chewing she will most likely understand and be very clear about the rules and the solution. I also think that Noah and Jordan need to slow down a bit. The excitement of something this new is hard to slow, but it is very easy to make mistakes if you are moving to fast. Both Noah and Jordan are basically still in the closet and while it is nice to only see the great things about being out and honest, the real world has many bumps and snags that need to be handled. It is unfortunate, but many people are still homophobic and make things harder for gay people so caution is better than carelessness...… Great story and style. Keep id going!!!!!

I understand that , but Kitt already has three kittens so to speak. I am sure he could find a way to adopt more........ just saying...

Great chapter. I wonder if Kitt making faces at the baby is showing a bit of a paternal desire??? Caz, you might want to reign Kitt in or we will end up with more kittens than we have hands or resources to deal with . Simon is rapidly learning about his mates past, for better or worse...... I hope that as this story evolves there is a chance that the seers that have disappeared will be found and reunited with those searching for them. Keep up the great writing!!!!!!

I am loving this story. The chapters are short, but they definitely tell the story. Now with Kitt actually thinking how his cat likes to cuddle and be petted, I am going to take that as a win for my "lap cat" prediction . Keep up the great writing Caz. I will always keep reading!

I don't like Sebastian and I hate cliffhangers!!

I am not an author nor an artist, but I would like to think that if I were, I would be pleased that my works were appreciated enough that they were remembered by someone living and trying to expand on my efforts...... Now as for someone wanting to proffit from my works directly, either while I were alive or after I am dead, I really hope some of the ghost stories have a small basis in truth..................................BOO

Outstanding chapter. Now that Simon knows about the feelings he has been having, he can concentrate on learning what having a lap cat is all about . Wonderful writing. Looking forward to more.

I to loved this story from the beginning.... Now I am kind of wondering about Kitryns common sence.... I think droping that bombshell on Simon, while he has his fangs in your throat, is a tiny bit foolhardy. Anyone else agree? Wonderful story and great writing Caz! Please keep it coming our way.

I agree with @Edward I think something is afoot with Nathan. I am not sure what, but things just seem to be going in diferent directions. With Nathans more flamboyant dress and actions and his new "job" with comercials, it just seems like Robbie does not quite fit in. Now Robbie is no saint either. His constant poking at Sue and Don can never really lead to good things. Like it or not, they are his parents/guardians now and therefore own his life until he becomes a legal adult. While I do not like Don at all and Sue has lessthan endearing moments, they both are providing a safe and healthy home for all their kids, Robbie included. It might go much farther for Robbie to attempt to have a calm conversation with the whole family about his feelings on his sexuality. Nicola and Daniel can add the views of younger people and possibly Sue and Don MAY begin to understand. I think Don is a hopeless homophobe, but Sue may begin to understand. In either case, simply taunting the barking dogs can only end with a painful bite. Now the Alex thing could be either very good or very bad for the future. I have always had a soft spot for Alex. We will see in future chapters..... Keep up the great story telling Dodger. I really like your style of writing and always look forward to more!!!

Good thoughts and best hopes for both of you. I am over the mountains to the east of Seattle, but I am sure there are cajun menus in Seattle. That city has everything you can think of if you look closely. If nothing else, it is the home of Amazon.com, so I know you could order some from them.... Yea, I know, Bad... Best wishes for you and your brother!!

Great news for both of you. It is unfortunate that your visit to the northwest is for such a serious reason. Hopefully your next visit will begin a better time for your brother, you and the rest of the family!!

Not quite a clifhanger but very close. I think Carl will be happy he is a Vamp if he starts teasing the kitty. My kittys have quick, sharp claws and teeth. I am very sure Kitryns are longer and sharper than my cats are... Now the magical temptress that Fran sees as her mom makes me a bit suspicous. We will see.... Keep it heading our way. I really like this story!! I also vote for longer chapters.

Another great story from an acomplished writer. I have to agree with most of the coments above, especially the ones that want more of an ending. When I was in high school I was camera happy. I was on the school yearbook staff. As I had a greater interest than most of the others I got to take most of the pictures of school sporting events. My trusty Minolta film camera with a multitude of lenses and accessorys went to almost every event. Pictures definately hold memories and a slice of time better than anything else. I had the availability of the school darkroom to develop and print anything for the yearbook. As I had a bulk film back and a motor drive for the camera, I would normally burn 50-100 feet of 35mm film at a single game. I do not remember how many frames that was, but I managed to catch some really neat pictures and some that the players would rather were not cought on film....... Hows that for a not ending . Geron keep up the excelent writing and keep the imagery you put so vividly into words coming our way!!!!

Good chapter. This gives us a view into Simons past and the way his life developed. It sure makes you wonder how he turned out to be a reasonable man/vamp. Keep it going. The story is very interesting and chalanges the mind to guess about future hapenings .

Outstanding chapter!!!! The emotions conveyed by your words were almost physical. I laughed and cried as the sceens exposed what was hapening. I felt Declans fear and hopelessness as he put the pieces togeather. Bailey needs an anchor to help him grieve and recover from a devistating loss. Declan can be that anchor if Bailey is willing to take his offer and reach out when things go bad. Just being able to hold someone and cry can make all the difference. Keep up the great writing!!!!

Congrats, Well Deserved!!

Great chapter Caz. I am eagerly waiting to hear Simons back story also. Keep it going .

I find the dynamic of Kit and Simon to be very sweet. I think Kitryn is begining to understand his feelings and Simon is still learning even though his subconcious keeps bushing him to Kitryn and the kits. This is a wonderful story with just the right ammount of love, danger and mystery to keep us wanting more. Great writing!!!!!

Outstanding chapter. Simple, charming and elegant. I also had to look up the flowers to see how they fit in. The little bit with using Lizs' scarf to make the ring cushion is just heart warming. Owens sister would definately approve and feel welcomed into this new family. Carlos, you have reached a new high in your writing.

This was a great chapter with the fun of play told in a very realistic way. My 20+ pound boy cat does the same thing when we play fight. A couple of good solid whacks with a sheathed claw paw. Keep up the great work Caz!!!

This story has a way of being sweet and a bit caustic all at the same time....Kinda like real life and real friends. I love the characters you have developed and the reality of some of the interactions. There is just enough 'camp' in some of the players to make it funny and serious at the same time. Is it possible that Don is beginning to loosen up a tiny bit? Sue still seems to fluxuate unpredictably depending on the wind direction. And then there is Alex... it will be very interesting where he goes and how he plays into the final picture...... Keep up the great writing.

Great story. It is nice to read something short, sweet and happy once in a while. This story reminds us that we never really know what lies around the next corner in life.

I love this story and the others it is related to. Great work!!! Now for the seperation of Pat and Declan,,,,I smell a fishy church rat wandering the halls.....