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This was absolutely beautiful. Well written, not what I was expecting once I saw Jim. But I love how Sam let dam break, and the unleashed emotions flooded out. It was wonderful.

This was fantastic. Very loving, and touching. You could feel the love they both had for each other, even after the incident and time apart.

Thanks, AC I'll take a look at it.

Damn onions. Wow tim, just wow. Fantastic, excellently written, vivid. I feel that John did the correct thing, in trying to save Tommy and then defending himself from Jack. There were warning signs from the beginning. The BDSM club, and him whipping the sub like that. Makes me think, that Jack didn't just "find" the place while in Med School, and was trying to make John into one of his boys. I'm glad John stood up for that sub in the bar and helped Tommy.

Wow, tim. This brought a tear to my eye. Loved it.

Where can I find a Green Door? Fantastic prompt story tim.

Well, Daniel did get the prize that he wanted in the raffle. Fantastic short, tim. I could see Danny with two left feet, stepping on toes.

This was a fantastic chapter, lots of action, lots of insight into the character of the kids. Sherry and Mike saved their bacon. I would not want to be them with the ringing in their ears from mike's timely gunfire in the truck. Sherry's heroic act saved them and saved the truck and supplies. Fantastic chapter!

I'm sorry that you have to go through all that miss molly, with your family, and friends. Know that you are in my prayers.

I'm so looking forward to when it comes out.

I'm glad you enjoyed all of these, and for all the reactions, Backwoods. The wrong number would be good as a First Line prompt. Damn man... you just inspired a new prompt.

Most of them were just free-writing and practice pieces. Number 3 was a short under 500-word scene that was part of a newsletter game. Number 11 & 12, center on me a little, but twisted a little. Number 16... Well, that's based on a real event. The names are changed to protect the not so innocent. EDIT: But almost all the prompts came from GA, and in the Writing Prompt forum, or in the blogs when they get posted.

My main issue with Enterprise was the final episode. All its other issues are secondary to that. Speaking of Prequels, Star Trek Online is bringing Discovery in as a new starting point for the game. It will like the Romulan, Klingon, 23rd Century Starfleet, and the Jem'hadar, starting points with a special storyline and private areas that only DISCO toons can be in, and then merge with the 26th century Starfleet.

Very true, and Marnie didn't really give any details on where it was, except for "The zombie is out at the edge of the field. It's been throwing small trees at the camp and making a commotion. Just acting really weird." This could be anywhere around the cleared zone. In chapter 1 and 2 it described walking out of the forest into the clearing, and the snares in the tree line, they were supposed to have checked in the morning. With only one access road into the Base Camp, as far as we know, that zombie made the perfect trap. With it being at the camp, and doing this specifically to go after Richie and Jeremy (assumption based on Marnie's reaction), it makes me wonder if the lore about them "shutting down" at night is correct or not. It could have followed the boys, and at first light saw them leave, and set about getting the trap ready. If it did shut down, how did it know the boys were not there, and will be in a truck? It only had a general since of where they were heading when it spotted them. Unless these things can track, after a 12 - 15 hour head start.

Wow. Awesome chapter. With the zombies being insanely superhuman, and intelligent, they have a fight on their hands. I hope they can get the truck stopped before they hit the trap, and that Richie and Mike can bring it down with their weapons.

Well said.

Spot on. Every one of those poems hits home. You are an artist with words, and paint vivid pictures that you can only see in the mind. Hugs man, lots of hugs. You know my answer for what's beyond.

Thanks, Bft, for reading and the comment. Jer and Rob's brotherly love is something that makes me smile when I write. In my mind, they grow a permanent brotherly bond, that will last for the rest of their lives. Just as soon as I get the next one back, and I finish polishing it, It will be posted. I'm already working on the next book, but that one won't be posted until its fully completed.

I read this story when it first came out and just reread it. It's a very funny story, and I can see a psycho cat doing all that. I had one.

They used them in the First Chapter, after Jeremy took a couple shots at the Zombie. I assumed they had one with them in the truck. At the very least they might have a CB unit in the truck and one at base camp. Again, that's my assumption.

That is awesome. I love it when a writer takes the time to do research to make things as accurate as possible. Taking a liberty is something that is in our toolkit as a writer. One thing I need to remember is something I quoted from @Mikiesboy in my signature, which was a quote from Samuel Coleridge: I'm guilty of forgetting to include things in chapters that I wanted.

Another excellent chapter and you end on cliffy that is making me want the next chapter now. I love how the three boys interacted with each other, and how "professional" they were. It's nice to see that the new way of life was drilled into them enough that it's second nature. One point, I'd like to make. The gasoline for the truck and station. It shouldn't last more than 2 to 3 years, as gas would turn into a gel. Diesel wouldn't, and diesel cars/trucks can also be ran off of cooking oil. There's even a blend of it called Bio-diesel, which Willie Nelson owns out west in the USA, called Bio-Willie.

#699 is so going to be done.

Thanks, mfa607, for your comment and reading the story. Hopefully, more will be out soon. The final three chapters of Jeremy's story are done and off at the editor. She's queued up with with a bunch that a lot of us sent her.

I updated the list, add a note at the bottom, and fixed some miss spellings and grammar in the listing. I'm not sure why it sent out a new post notification when it was just an update. Now, the final 3 chapters are done, and with my second editor, just waiting for them to get back, and when they do, they will get posted ASAP.