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  1. Brayon
    Thanks, Butcher. I glad you enjoyed the chapter. I have my favorite characters and couples in this series, and Jeremy and Travis are one.
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    Thanks, Wesley. As someone that has eaten a lot of Florida BBQ, I would rank it as: Campfire -> Charcoal -> Gas. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Tomorrow's will the last for Jeremy's story, but I am working on TC4 now. I'll post that one once it's all finished.
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    Thanks, mfa607. The final chapter of this story is queued up for tomorrow. Henderson and Manhattan are near where I live now. I have a friend that lives off of Dale Mabry and Euclid, in a 1 bedroom Apartment, and they raised his rent to $1100 a month when he renewed his lease last month.
  4. Brayon
    Thanks, Chris. There's some tension, but yes they are all becoming good friends.
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    Thanks, mfa607! I love it too. All the places I've mentioned in the Series, the Goody Goody, Firstwatch, Sally O'Neal's, are places that I've been too and enjoyed. Always open for suggestions of places where the boys can go too, so shoot me a PM, or post below, if you do. 🙂
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    Thanks for reading, and for the comment, Tonyr. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. If I have it set correctly, the next one should be out later today, around 1:00 pm Florida Time. EDIT: Correction... It's out now. I think a change I did earlier set it off to publish. The last chapter is set to be published tomorrow on 10/4/2018.
  7. Brayon
    Thanks, tim. And thank you for all the help you gave me on it.
  8. Brayon
    Thank you, Chris, for not only reading, and commenting on the story, but for Beta Reading as well. It was greatly appreciated.
  9. Brayon
    Thanks for reading, Glennish. It was a little difficult piecing all the dynamics together, but he had one himself. His Uncle that adopted him after Travis was dumped on him by his parents. It's surprising what kids know when people don't think they know what's going on. Jeremy stumbled over the paperwork when he was putting mail in the office for his parents. It was Ian and Debbie's mistake for leaving it sat out. Hockey will be in the Book Four, with some scene from inside Amalie Arena. Not sure about a double date, but the core family will be there.
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    LOL.
  11. Brayon
    Thanks for reading, Butcher! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. More will be revealed in the next couple. 🙂
  12. Brayon
    Thanks for reading, Wesley. More will be coming out about Jeremy and his sexual orientation, in the next two chapters, and the next book. Also, there is a very special stand-alone of one chapter that won't come out till after Book 4 and maybe Book 5 called Jeremy and Travis' First Time. It gets really descriptive.
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    Mornings came early in the Jacks household, and it was no different for Wednesday, June 13, 2018. Bryce was usually up by 5:00 am, to be ready to for work. Now that Travis was fifteen, he would let him sleep in, and stay home, instead of waking him up. This morning was a little different. The house was a historic bungalow on the outskirts of Ybor City off 24th Street. It was a small three bedroom, two-bath place, painted seafoam green with white trim. The interior was an open concept with a
  14. Brayon
    It was the morning of Saturday, June 9, 2018. Jeremy was awake and had been for about thirty minutes. He needed to relieve his bladder, had a raging hard-on from it, but couldn’t do anything about it. Like the past couple of nights, Robert had slept with him when the nightmares started. While Jeremy didn’t really mind, and silently welcomed it, that Robert slept with him all night, this morning Jeremy found himself pinned underneath Robert. He couldn’t help but smile looking at the boy that beca
  15. Brayon

    Chapter 16

    Brayon commented on Geron Kees's story chapter in Chapter 16

    I think one of the funniest stipulations being used lately is: "If you are allergic to this medicine, then don't use the medicine." I mean, seriously, 1. How do you know you're allergic until you take it? 2. Why would you continue to take it, once you know you are? "Yeah, this new pill gives me explosive, bloody, diarrhea, but man it keeps me from losing my hair to male pattern balding."
  16. Brayon
    First off, welcome to GA again. 🙂 To answer your question, yes, there are a number of members of GA who volunteer their time to do editing for us Authors. Most of them have a greenish EDITOR badge, like our Author badge here on the forums. The best way to contact one is to use the Private Club for Authors located here: There is an Editor forum there, where you can put in a request for an editor to help you, with your story. I've found that once you've posted a request it can take a couple of days, but you will be contacted by one, usually via private message.
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    Chapter 16

    Brayon commented on Geron Kees's story chapter in Chapter 16

    I wouldn't go that harsh. True, there is a difference between those who are legit allergic to them and those that don't because their Yoga Instructor said they were shyte, based on junk science.
  18. Brayon
    As most here on GA is aware, I'm an avid Role-Player. I have several worlds that I keep track of, and not just for my stories here on GA. Game Worlds and Story World are not that dissimilar. They each follow the same guidelines, but where one is more notes and narrative, the other is that plus game rules for everything from character creation to how spells affect the world. I routinely use Game Worlds as a foundation for my Story Rules. I keep both notebooks, and digital files with my world notes. OneDrive with Office seems to be the best in my opinion, followed by Google Drive and Docs.
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    Honestly I feel it's a dick move to skip any part of a story. Someone spent a lot of time and effort in creation.
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    Chapter 16

    Brayon commented on Geron Kees's story chapter in Chapter 16

    Humans are natural herd animals. It's why vaccines work, and why anti-vaccine people should be shunned and charged with child abuse.
  21. Brayon

    A Quick Drink

    Brayon commented on Myr's story chapter in A Quick Drink

    A very interesting flash piece, Myr. I like how with very little, you're able to capture, a reader's attention, and then have us wanting more. Very good man.
  22. Brayon
    Thanks, BB. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and thanks for the compliment.
  23. Brayon
    Excellent story, Agent D!
  24. Brayon
    It may say "Z is For Zombie," in the title, but don't let that fool you into thinking this is just another Walking Dead clone. It's not. Geron creates a world that feels alive in the post-apocalyptic sense of what happened during the Changes. It follows a brief period in the lives of a group of survivors who after two years, are more family than just a collection of people. And they are all under the age of 18. Five stars for this terrific tale.
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    Chapter 16

    Brayon commented on Geron Kees's story chapter in Chapter 16

    This was amazing. I liked how the ending explained a lot of what happened in previous chapters and the fact that you used real science with the gamma-ray burst. I've said a few times I would like to see a follow-up, about the family that the kids made, and I still would like that. How, and what, the characters are doing in the reawakened world. How their families will deal with Richie and Jeremy being an out couple? How Mike and Sherry are highly proficient with arms? How Marnie is more protective of her siblings, and the new woman, Mom? Excellent job. It was fantastic.
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