Brayon

I have no words right now. I'm glad they added more reactions to the "like" system. I wanted to use the angry react, but my heart is too broken right now.

We talk a lot, and have become good friends over the past year and a half or so. You've mentioned your past a few times, we even talked about it today. This brought tears to my eyes. Even the poem you wrote and included in the store, which I'm assuming was the first poem you ever wrote, was full of emotion. Hugs man, lots of virtual hugs.

Thanks! I'll add later when I do an update. I notice a couple of things that I missed when transferring it over from the forums. Also, the forums are out of date as of right now.

Awesome!!! Thanks for the hard work y'all do!

Yuppers. Giles gets teased that he was almost a December baby, by the other three all the time. All lucky coincidence that they are all close together in the birthday department. It's with @Kitt, I sent it to her this morning for the edits. As soon, as I get it back, and do some final changes, I'll post it. 🙂 Working on chapter 3 now, so it will ready for editing soon.

Thanks for the comment, and for reading!

Thanks for the comment, and for reading!

Thank you for reading, I appreciate the feedback.

I'm not too familiar with Baseball, though Brayon Hopper plays, as you see above, and in the Rogue's Gallery on the My Son discussion page. But you're close. They have a boat now.

That's an Idea. I was thinking about tossing it up as a Prologue as well. Dramatis Personae like.

Thanks, Myr!

I noticed yesterday when I got a reaction to a Story Review I left, that it seems this is functioning now, as the Author responded to another member's review. Are we allowed to start using it? I know there were some issues as addressed above, but want to make sure it was cool to go ahead.

Congrats Dodger! I'm happy for you!

I should have it done soon, and I'll post it as something... lol. Haven't figured out where to stick it yet.

Thanks for reading, Bft! I think Jeremy will find that living with Rob, Adam, and Duncan will be completely different from what he is used to. I will mention one thing, Jeremy doesn't know his parents were getting a divorce. Right now, no one else in the Isen family knows aside from Duncan, who Ian and Debbie told before they were to fly home. Duncan and Adam haven't told anyone, and I haven't decided if they will tell Jer or not. I'm leaning on them not mentioning the divorce, as it's a moot point.

A very interesting love story. Good concept well thought out.

Thanks, Xander! Sadly, Jeremy is having nightmares, but you'll see more of that in Chapter 2. I'll have to look up EL-AL, but in my notes, I had the Isen's on British Airways. Also, there's a surprise for you in Chapter 2.

That is amazing and impressive.

Wow, where to start. I enjoyed the story as it was an interesting tale. Very heavy on the sports references, specifically Baseball. Had to google some of the terms. The main characters were written like they were older than the fourteen-year-olds they were depicted as. There were some formatting issues with a few of the chapters, but can be corrected. Overall a decent story.

Thank you for reading glennish! I appreciate the support. I completely agree with you, that it should help to heal him, and chapter 2 is about that. I do have plans for Jer to find a person to develop a romantic relationship with, but that might be for a while.

Thanks for reading and for the comment Spikey! When I was plotting the next full book, Jeremy somehow just showed up. The note I wrote after he showed up, and I included him in a few paragrphs said, "Jadon is Duncan's Nephew, and he lives with Adam, Duncan, and Rob." (Jadon was Jeremy's original name before it was pointed out I had several characters with similar sounding names.) I knew he wasn't in TC1 or TC2, but I had written him into the opening chapter of the next full book (book four now). So, that led to Book Three, as a way to introduce Jeremy and to get him with the family on a perm basis.

No need to feel sorry, tim. Writing when your emotions are all roller-coasting is a hard feat to accomplish. The poems you presented here are well-written and do envoke different emotions. Masterly crafted.

Thanks for reading, mfa607! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Thanks for reading, Jeffrey! You just hit a good point. I think I need to make a chart for the site, or a rogue's gallery of sorts and post it. Also with descriptions too. Thank you! Chapter 2 is progressing, and I'll get it to the editors ASAP.

It's the old saying of "It takes all kinds..." The diversity of thought, opinion, and experience are just as valid as all the other forms. The thing that bothers me most in the GLBT community at large is the intolerance that has developed over the years. Not only towards other "factions" in the GLBT community but to those outside of it as well. It's like we are branching out into little camps, and fighting against each other. Like we have gay conservatives and gay liberals who fight over politics. Gay religious folks who fight with gay atheists. On and on. We're all the same community, we can have disagreements, but we should celebrate our oneness as a diverse group. Just the other day I was out having coffee and lunch with a friend visiting from out of town, and we ran into some of his old college friends. I'm sad to say, there was a Heterophobe among them, spouting off all sorts of nonsense about straights. It was disgusting, and I even told him as such. Needless to say, my friend and I left, shaking our heads at the whole experience, and wondering when this cancer of hate started in our community.