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    Chapter 6

    Brayon commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 6

    The chapter was interesting, but like others have said the toilet scene seemed out of place. Aside from that, I did enjoy it.
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    Chapter 5

    Brayon commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 5

    I like Keith. He seems like a very good character. I also notice you like the Arthurian Legends a lot. This being a second project you used them.
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    Chapter 4

    Brayon commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Yet another interesting chapter.
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    Chapter 3

    Brayon commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Fantastic chapter. Love the religious twist.
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    Chapter 2

    Brayon commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Awesome action, and a very dramatic fight scene. Loved it.
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    Chapter 1

    Brayon commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Great first chapter. Damien and Marc both seem really cool. The way aggressive Veronica was off-putting. On-ward!
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    Ok. Both of these are on the practice list.
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    I definitely will be looking it up, when it comes out.
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    Both poems are great. I liked the visuals you presented in both. As for the blog itself, @AC Benus is a marvelous poet and author. GA should be proud to have him here. I haven't seen the new checklist, but I did try the Tanka prompt before, and well it was a dumpster fire.
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    I found this on Imagur as part of a meme dump. Posted as a Status Update, but posting here as well just in case:
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    Paper Walls

    Brayon reviewed KD_stories's story in Fiction

    This was a fantastic story. As someone that struggles with Bipolar, Depression, and Anxiety, I must say the Author hit this one out of the park. The characters are entertaining and are very realistic. While, football (real football, not soccer) is not really my sport, I found the sports atmosphere well researched and portrayed. The main character and a supporting character were both ones I could relate too.
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    Thanks, KD_stories for reading and for the comment. I'm glad you found it enjoyable.
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    A fitting end to the trilogy. All three books were interesting in their own right. The same unique writing style, but you can tell the Author grew as a writer over the three books. An excellent read, for all three stories.
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    A great continuation of the storyline from the first of the trilogy. The storyline is still just as interesting as the first book, and the plot twists that develop in this one make the world bigger than in the first. Unlike the first book, there wasn't a lot of angst that seemed out of place. Even with the "dark" tag and warning, I didn't feel the story needed the warning. It does have dark undertones, but hey, it's war.
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    Thank you, Def. TC3 is done, and is the editing process. Should be posted soon. It is a single chapter only.
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    Thank you for reading, agent D. I'm hoping Tibot grows on you all.
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    Light

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Light

    Your halo is held up by devil horns. lol
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    Interesting storyline, with a unique style of writing. Too much angst at times, but still good.
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    Light

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Light

    This poem is fantastic. You can see the different stages, from self-doubt, in the beginning, to hope and love at the end. A lot of emotions tied up in three stanzas. Excellent job.
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    Happy Birthday!!!
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    682 is a good one. I'm going to add that to my practice lists.
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    An excellent story. Long, but worth the effort.
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    Summer Break 2018

    Brayon commented on Myr's blog entry in Myr's Corner

    Yes. Been helping around my Uncle's place with those Summer Projects. I've found that even after you finish one, two or three more get added to the list. May your summer be free of stress, and may you have time to get all your projects done.
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    I think what you're describing is something many of us who have Bipolar and depression face. There are times I'll sit down to do a practice piece, because my main project stories are just not talking to me, and they turn into some dark story, that I wonder where they came from. Those get shifted quickly to the "Never to be published" file, and I try to find something else to write about, or I put some music one or something to try to change my mood. I have spoken with my therapist before about this, and he's always wanted to talk to me to find out what the cause of them was. I hope you can work it out for yourself. I don't have any words of wisdom to give you, but I will wish you all the best.
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    I read this story a little over a year ago and realized today I hadn't left a review. Re-reading the story, I can see why I liked it before. The story features Hani, a genetic experiment whose outcome was not expected. In the short five chapters, he experiences a range of adventures, that leads to... I'll let you read it to find out. Excellent story, a must read.
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