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It wasn't specific to this prompt, but my story My Son, is all about this question. #ShamelessSelfPlug
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I watched the movie, but I've never read the book series. I might need to look if the library has them on OverDrive.
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TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Thank you, very much for reading, and for the support over the past seven chapters, centexhairysub. Working on a SciFi/Fantasy/Drama now, and then will hop back over to Adam and the boys. But I will be visiting them again, as I love this little family I built. -
TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Thanks for reading, and for you support flesco. Taking a break as I work on another project, but I will return to my boys in future stories. -
Death: A Poet's Perception
Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Death: A Poet's Perception
I swear to all the gods, and powers that be, that some days you're like laser focused directly into my noggin. Time for me to get a med adjustment, because old man Death on his pale horse was heavily in my thoughts today. Fantastic poems, they were well written, and I saw the visuals you painted with your words. -
Writers, How Do You Come Up With Chapter Titles?
Brayon replied to Aceinthehole's topic in The Lounge
Depends on the story, and if I'm doing more than one "chapter." I like chapter titles that are linked to the content of the chapter itself. However, I totally borked one story here on GA with the chapter titles. -
TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
You're welcome, glennish, and thank you for reading and for the support. Getting notes in order for the next TC book, while working on another project. -
TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Yeah, there was a clear climax and ending for this story, once I started to write. Keyword there is this story. I have plans for a couple of more with Adam, Rob, Duncan, Giles, Brayon, Chandon, and Jill, in the future. Some authors can do the "neverending story" approach, but I feel that would be a disservice to the characters and readers. Yes, the boat was in there for you. 😺 -
TC2 - Chapter 6: Friends in Low Places
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 6: Friends in Low Places
I'm glad you liked the chapter Xander. I knew you would point out all the locations. 😺 -
TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Thanks, Daddydavek. My thoughts on the next book will be a focus on the relationships. All three couples, and how they interact with each other. Working on notes now, but also working on another project as well. -
TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
You're welcome. -
TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
@rockycs Thanks for reading, and for the feedback, gonna grab your questions and answer them how I did it. Please note, some of this is fictionalized, but I did my best keeping it under real-world laws in two different states. From my understanding of reading Massachusetts law is this. If a child is born out of wedlock, the father's name is not added to the birth certificate. At any time, before the child turns 18, if the father is added to the document, the state will automatically seek back child support, and 1/2 of Medical Ins payments after a paternity test. In the confines of the story, the grandfather Matthew Turner forced a paternity test which triggered the state to seek back monies. The Monthly amount of $1013 a month in support, was the un-official amount from a Paternity website for MA, and one of their online calculators. Based on an avg monthly income of $4500.00 for Adam over 16 years. The medical insurance, I used an Obamacare calculator, and that was the cost for a single person per month for a silver plan. In the will, Michelle stipulated that the house and contents were Rob's but were to be sold, and money placed in a trust fund, for Robert until he turned 21. A loophole I found in FL law, and it looked like it was mirrored in MA law, was that the guardian of the minor had control of real-estate until the minor became of age. The judge that Matthew Turner went to, was one of the corrupt officials that was caught in the FBI sting. So, in order to keep Matthew Turner from causing headaches, Adam was going to buy the place before the deadline. However, what was not in the chapter above, was that the order became void once it went through a review after the judge was arrested. Score another for Tibs! This will be in the next book. -
TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Thank you! I'm working on research and notes now, but I have a few ideas floating around. -
I wish that would be the case too. Another element that is true in this story, and I copied it for My Son, was Brayon's parents were Democrats. True blooded, card-carrying, I voted for Bill Clinton, Democrats. Without getting political, and with facts to back it up from the CDC study I got my homeless youth stats from, Gay youth being disowned and kicked out of their homes crosses all demographics. Rich, Poor, White, Black, Evangelical, Atheist, Republican, or Democrat... it does not matter. It happens all over the country too. I went with reality in this story, and got a very nasty PM from someone saying "the left would never do that." Sadly, they do.
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TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Thank you, tim. I appreciate all the help you gave me over this project. You're a great friend. -
TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Thank you for reading, Tonyr. You did get it right. There will be future books with them in the future. I have a couple of different Tampa Chronicle books planned, and they will be in them. -
TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
I appreciate the feedback and thank you for reading, Bft. I've got a couple of different stories planned, and they will be back. I had a lot of fun writing about them. -
TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Thanks, a bunch, Chris191070, for reading, reviewing, and leaving feedback. I truly appreciate it all. -
TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Thanks for reading, JeffreyL! I appreciate the feedback, and I'm glad it came across like it did. They, along with Brayon, Chandon, and Jill from New Life, will be back in a future installment. I got a couple of different ones that I have planned. -
TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Thanks, jp. That is what I was hoping for, that would come across. A stronger bond between the principal characters. Yes, the grandparents will not be going to the Prison, aka Camp Cupcake, Martha Stewart went to. -
TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Thank you for reading, Firewall910! I'm glad you enjoyed it. -
TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
Thanks for looking at my other work. -
Thanks for reading the chapter, and for the review, Chris191070. Brayon, Chandon, and Jill will be back when we see Adam, Rob, Duncan and Giles.
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Thank you for reading, Bft! All my stories have some elements from my life in them. In this one, the characters Brayon and Chandon are based on two High School friends, who were a couple. Brayon's parents did disown him, and Chandon's did take him in. The names are different, and most is fictionalized, but that was the key element.
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Thank you for reading, Bndmetl. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Also, this was the 3rd story I posted to GA.
