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Your Hubby agrees with you. LOL. He said so, on my prompt short.
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*Does the Snoopy Dance*
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I'm so jealous right now.
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2018 Newsletter Halloween Challenge: Extreme Halloween
Brayon replied to Cia's topic in Forum Games and Humor
Hmm, space didn't work for a gritty Samhain. -
2018 Newsletter Halloween Challenge: Extreme Halloween
Brayon replied to Cia's topic in Forum Games and Humor
I liked the spoof videos one gay porn studio did called, Twinklight. -
TC3 – Chapter 2: Heartbreak
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC3 – Chapter 2: Heartbreak
Thank you very much, @Butcher56, for reading and commenting on the story. This chapter was hard for me to write, because of the pain that Jeremy felt. In my style of writing, I try to put myself in my characters' shoes and then write how I think and feel, they would feel. On the adoptions, Adam and Duncan's parenting style is to treat Rob and Jer more as equals given their ages. While they did discover all the laws, regulations, and such stuff, they still wanted to give the boys a choice instead of forcing the issue. I knew both boys would be Yes's, but Jeremy would be a chaotic mix of emotions. Some elements are being carried over to the next book for them. With the narrow scope that this book was, I decided to carry over the odd payments to the next book. Have to give the forensic accountant time to do research. The final 3 chapters are done, and currently with my editor Kitt. -
TC3 - Chapter 1: Meet Jeremy
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC3 - Chapter 1: Meet Jeremy
Sleep Well. I'm on the insomniac patrol right now, and it's 3:00 am. -
TC3 - Chapter 1: Meet Jeremy
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC3 - Chapter 1: Meet Jeremy
Thanks for reading, Buddy. I'm loving these characters, they go back over two previous stories. To get more info on Adam, Duncan, and Robert, the previous story My Son. Is all about them. Brayon and Chanon are from the first story called A New Life and A New Home. This story has three more chapters, just waiting for them to come back from the editor. I've actually decided to put on hold two projects, so I can go ahead and do the next book. -
That was... AWESOME!!! Great story man, and wow. You could feel the fear Nathan had.
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TC3 – Chapter 2: Heartbreak
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC3 – Chapter 2: Heartbreak
Thank you very much, for the comment and reading, travlbug. You summed up what I was trying to do with this chapter and the family overall. 💖 -
TC3 – Chapter 2: Heartbreak
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC3 – Chapter 2: Heartbreak
I really appreciate it, too! Thanks, Kitt. -
TC3 – Chapter 2: Heartbreak
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC3 – Chapter 2: Heartbreak
Thanks for reading, Daddydavek! I appreciate the comment. The final three chapters are done and with my editing team, plotting for book four is almost done, and revamping book 5's chapter 1, and reorganizing my notes for it. For the adoptions, they are mainly doing it because they love both kids, Adam and Jer are just getting to know each other, but he loves him nevertheless. However, during the week Adam and Duncan were discussing it, they found out all the legal barriers Step-Parents, and Legal Guardians face. Both in Florida and Nationally. So that was another factor in it. -
TC3 – Chapter 2: Heartbreak
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC3 – Chapter 2: Heartbreak
Thanks, Glennish, for reading and for comment. At this point in Jeremy's story, no he doesn't know about the divorce. That will be explained in the next chapter. Chapter 3 is around 7000 words too and was the planned end of Jeremy's story. The BONUS Chapters 4, 5, are focused on Travis, who's introduced in Chapter 3. Chapter 4 is over 6000 words, and Chapter 5 was almost 9000 words. Here's something that got cut out of the first chapter, and I couldn't find a way to add it back in: The final version of this is what made it into the story. -
2018 Newsletter Halloween Challenge: Extreme Halloween
Brayon replied to Cia's topic in Forum Games and Humor
Less than 1000 words. We had a challenge last year that was a Flash Fiction piece of 500 words or less. -
TC3 – Chapter 2: Heartbreak
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC3 – Chapter 2: Heartbreak
Thank you for reading, Wesley. I'm sorry it made you cry but happy it did as well. I was hoping that Jeremy's pain came across. The next chapter is titled: Healing Starts. And there is some action in it. 🙂 -
TC3 – Chapter 2: Heartbreak
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC3 – Chapter 2: Heartbreak
Thank you, very much, Chris. For reading and helping. Jeremy needs his family, and he has two adults, that will love him unconditionally. Duncan already spoiled Jeremy before he came to live with him. That Nikon Camera he bought him (first chapter) is over $6000.00. Yeah, it was. Having had to do that when my father died, I channeled what I felt into Jeremy. Just made it double. I will say, Jeremy now has a fear of flying. -
It was 2:45 am on Thursday, June 7, 2018, and Jeremy couldn’t sleep. He lay in his bed, tears streaming down his face, as they had been every night since they learned of his parents’ deaths. Dressed in a cool loose nightshirt and boxers, Jeremy was about to give up on sleep and return to reading on his tablet, when he heard a knock on his bedroom door. “Come in.” He wiped his eyes and turned to face the doorway. The tablet lit up the room in a soft glow. Robert entered his cousin’s room
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Beautiful imagery and I almost felt like I was in the woods somewhere watching this.
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Awesome!!
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697 is sparking ideas!
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... so the next time that you feel unproductive watch this.
Brayon replied to MrM's topic in Writer's Circle
Good video. I have to agree with both. -
2018 Newsletter Halloween Challenge: Extreme Halloween
Brayon replied to Cia's topic in Forum Games and Humor
How does one keep a Bonfire in Space? Hmm... Is this a Trick or a Treat? -
So for the past couple of weeks, I missed posting a Topic Tuesday. The reason being was I went back to school. It's the University of Phoenix, online, designed for people are non-traditional who have Home/Work responsibilities, and has certain attendance and participation requirements. The class week runs Tuesday thru Monday. Now that we are in week three, I feel I'm starting to get a schedule that works for School, Family, and my passion for Writing. This is Time Management, which each of us has our own way to do. For me, I do home chores first, then schoolwork, and at the end of the day I work on my writing. I have several projects going, so I only get to work on one at a time now, in order to focus on getting that one done. I have a bit more time than the average person being disabled, and not working, but my goal is to get this degree and get back into the job market. So How about you? How do you handle Time Management?
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Continued prayers for you and your brother. Godspeed that it's successful.
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Gotcha. Sorry for the confusion, I didn't know.
