I am always amazed at your story telling. One reader above said he wanted to be adopted by this family. Understandable. I would like to have them as friends. Even better would be to live near you so I could get to know you, too. You have a sexy mind.
Your characters are believable, the story line compelling; makes me not want to stop reading, just as I did last night. I won't read stories here that are not complete because I've been burned a few too many times. At any rate, I started this about 0100 hours last night and read until 0800 this morning so I could finish it. Just couldn't quit.
Keep writing. Much love and hugs.