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For us proud Trekkies, he was Dr. Timicin. The Kaelon scientist who fell for Lwaxana Troi on The Next Generation.
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I wasn’t going to say anything. I must be really SPECIAL! LOL!
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Well hopefully Melvin will change his ways. Be welcomed into the GSA. Might even be part of that schools extremely large gay brigade. 😊
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Open a New Window, Open a New Door
FormerMember4 commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Open a New Window, Open a New Door
I’m glad my Hunter wasn’t hurt worse. He’ll heal faster with Jaime on leave. The motivation needed to improve. I’m not sure how I feel about an emotionless, questioning, closeted Korean boy. @droughtquake is right, the Japanese are the stoic, friendly and somewhat detached. My Korean friends are friendly and easy going. -
Car Orgy! When the car is a rockin... You might want to start knockin. Victor is certainly something. If he continues to piss off Eli, he might find himself with some trouble. I have no doubt Eli has some powers to protect them.
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It is all up to Eric. They are miserable apart, whole together. I still want to stuff a sock in Rachel’s mouth, but it made Eric think. Adorable little Chloe said it best... You are my family Uncle Eric!
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This is a heartwarming tale of leaving home for college. Finding love, and yourself along the way. When Mikeal meets Adam during a Cosplay convention, it’s an awkward first encounter. When they meet again a few weeks later, sparks fly. Life will never be the same for either boy. A truly sweet story with life lessons along the way.
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An absolutely beautiful little story Cassie. Loved these two characters.
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Beautiful New Year celebration. Adam brought out Mikeal’s confidence. While Mikeal broke down Adam’s protective walls. Great chapter.
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Adam is the calm and rational that Mikeal needs. He lessens the sting, while disarming Mikeal. Giving other things to consider.
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First Christmas as a couple. Entering the unknown United. Really heartwarming chapter.
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I like Mikeal’s dad. It’s unfortunate to find out you’re adopted like that. The silver lining is Mikeal being able to come clean. His fathers support will be needed later.
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Wow! Happy Holidays, you’re adopted. Poor Mikeal... Really crappy thing his sister did.
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This chapter totally captured the longing when you’re separated. The sparks igniting when reunited. Smoking hot!
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This was an important moment in this relationship. Adam is right in not hiding. Wanting to meet the parents with no deception. Being honest with Mikeal, but not giving ultimatums.
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What a wonderful chapter. Adam is the perfect first lover. Always considerate with some experience. My first BF was in high school. First time was for both. It helps when one has some experience.
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This chapter was very well done. We have background on Adam and the L word. It’s clear Mikeal wasn’t ready to tell parents. I think him not being secure in relationship is the reason. He’s waiting for those three magic words.
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I loved the intimacy of this chapter. The dialogue and connection had so much realism.
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What a chapter. What happened to Julie is horrific. I’m glad it wasn’t worse. Not all guys are creeps, but a lot in college. She has Mikeal and Adam for support.
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Sweet chapter. Adam already understands how to handle Mikael. He explained his feelings carefully. Allowing Mikael a chance to re-examine his own.
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I like how easy Mikael slipped into Adam’s world. Conventions are fun. Less stress when you’re a character. I hope the L word doesn’t cause a freak out.
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Mikael’s jealousy was so palpable. I’m happy to see him go out of his comfort zone.
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You’re no fun! You don’t want a lil peekaboo?? 🤨
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Poor Mikael! He and I share an exhausting quality, overthinking. Hopefully Julie can get him to relax. She has a long history with him. The more time with Adam he spends, the more comfortable in his skin he’ll be.
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I like how this opened. Mikael’s personality has started forming well in first chapter. It’s apparent relationships haven’t been important enough to explore. Whether it was awkwardness, or something else. I look forward to finding out.
