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FormerMember4

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  1. Payback is a biatch Caleb. All the stuff he’s put people through. Poor Lincoln feels he’s going to be discarded. Its pretty bad when you understand Kasey language. 😂
  2. Sex is a natural aspect of life and relationship. No matter if it’s a hookup, or founded on actual building relationship. Obviously if a hookup, one would expect more sex. Be true to characters and story. The one thing I hate. When an author treats sex as a character. It’s not. Anytime I see this, story loses focus and sex is repetitive.
  3. FormerMember4

    Chapter 6

    Absolutely heartbreaking for Eric. It’s not worth the pain, pining over family who doesn’t acknowledge you. Ryan is providing him a family. I hope Eric realizes soon that running is wrong. The more you run from your authentic self, the harder it gets to do.
  4. It’s actually from story on here... Posing for the Alpha. I’m doing everything possible to clean my feckin mouth on here.
  5. FormerMember4

    Chapter 3

    We all have those. A 1974 pic of me at 2 with red and white checked pants and white tee. What was my mother thinking with those big checks. So not flattering.
  6. Great chapter. Howdy Hunter, I’m jp. 🤠
  7. Shane Krendall is an up and coming movie star. He’s navigating the business. He’s also dealing with parents who disapprove of his sexuality. Shane has a lot of possible pitfalls. A story of hard choices and being yourself. An enjoyable read.
  8. So much hurt needs to be worked through in that house. It’s going to be hard for Ryder to be stress free. Oliver learned a valuable lesson. Heroes and idols are only human. Sometimes hard to understand that.
  9. I almost forgot to mention Dissonance, by @MacGreg. A truly wonderful story.
  10. Also something helpful. You can search stories using tags. Like crime, high school, fighting, etc.
  11. I would recommend From the cup of the worthless, by @Cynus. I would also recommend @Aceinthehole
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    Chapter 7

    I’m even more curious about Prism and Grim. Grim understands his power, as does Prism. They both choose not to exploit their gifts. Living by a (Do no harm) motto. That’s what I’m getting. Unless in danger. Prism’s description of honor was profound. Honor comes in many forms. Something for Styx to consider. Might help him to understand the choice of Max to let him go.
  13. Robbie needs the controlling personality of another to calm him feeling out of control. No father, losing mother, leaving England and being gay. All things out of his control.
  14. There isn’t a tissue box big enough for this chapter. Beautiful! I’m so happy that Charlie, Jacob, and Noah had a good life.
  15. Holy moose farts. A totally messed up adoption. Juggling Nathan, Alex, and now Tom. Give the boy a drink. He’s gonna need it. Robbie is a lightning rod for turmoil.
  16. Thanks to your highlighting this book, read sample and purchased. From reviews preparing for emotional rollercoaster.
  17. FormerMember4

    Foreign Soil

    Very impressive tim. You put us through so many emotions in this prompt. Scary world to envision. Well done.
  18. FormerMember4

    Chapter 3

    Nice chapter Ivor. Being out will make Adam more confident. I can only imagine what his mother said. Good riddance to bad rubbish. You make it sound so easy to take off skinny jeans. I beg to differ. 😆
  19. I’m with you @BHopper2. I really love this. The list to be read is way larger than I’m able to finish. These anthologies deserve the highlight.
  20. NOAH! That poor boy. Thankfully he’ll have Charlie. Not sure he will be singing Tomorrow anytime soon. We have a Dirty Grandma on our hands. The woman is looking for a play by play on grandsons sex life. Hilarious!
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    Chapter 8

    Ok, I’ve been saying it. Confirming that Carter is a twat. I believe he’s brought a lot of his crap on himself. Randy and Dean both need a smack. I don’t care how close they are... You don’t play tonsil hockey with anyone other than BF. Boundaries!!!
  22. FormerMember4

    Liars' Club

    I reread past few chapters. After this one, i have no doubt both Brett and Joey know. I wouldn’t be surprised that they’ve discussed it.
  23. FormerMember4

    Heartbreak

    Raw and full of emotion. A scenario in life that most can relate to. Well done!
  24. FormerMember4

    Liars' Club

    OMG! Joey is a raging drug addict... That explains so much. Just look at the slimeball father. His church is the house of Satan. Built on lies and sins. I have no more patience for Billy. He was doing so well standing up to Jack and the Dr. Brett stands up for Billy, while Billy can’t do the same.
  25. There’s no doubt they help each other. Ryder is a calming influence to Oliver. They share a passion that is pure. Oliver has no motives other than to learn. My only concern, let Oliver be a child while being mentored. Ryder was too young when catapulted into stardom. Don’t repeat the cycle.
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