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  1. FormerMember4
    I look forward to these. C James antho is interesting, Jake lead to a full premium story.
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    I like (Just like you earned head cheerleader, I’m sure you put the HEAD in that title). That’s a Mean Girls moment if I’ve seen one.
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    Why don’t you take a one way ticket to my ass? That was classic. Keep digging at spread me Sarah. Dustin was hilarious this chapter. Hope he gets his chance at a real relationship. Joey and his downfall is a recipe for disaster. I could see his ass going postal.
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    Chapter 8

    FormerMember4 commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Good chapter. I’m wondering if more than bureaucracy is involved. Could there be a corrupt person, or faction in the Order profiting? Turning head to the guild issue.
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    That was a well needed talk between Teddy and his father. To know he’s failing his kids and wife is a wake up call. Being honest with Oli was right approach. He needs to see Ryder’s emotional and physical struggles. That allows him to help and understand. Never confront a pregnant woman. You will always lose. The slap heard around the world.
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    I somehow missed notification on this. Another sweet fairy tale. I’ve always loved dragons. I really love the idea of dragon reading in a rocker. Well done and fun tim. xo
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    This was an enjoyable read. Based on some legitimate things in casino business. This author knew Vegas. He mixed fictional and factual names for buildings. The Nero is a fictional hotel, but based on a real property. I enjoyed the main characters, who live in my neighborhood. The author did fantastic work mapping the city and suburbs.
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    I can follow, as long as story is thought out. Like tim, I cringe with predictability. Even in an unreal universe, it must be based on some truths. Not impossibilities.
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    Drew is rising in the ranks at a celebrated Vegas casino. His life quickly changes when meeting Bob, the friend of a high rollers son. Sparks quickly fly between these two. As a Vegas resident, I’m pleasantly surprised with the story. No doubt the author knew Vegas. Mixed with fictional and factual buildings. A well written and enjoyable story.
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    Great chapter. Looking forward to Vic’s time at college. I’m starting the petition now! Hunter needs his own story. YUMMY! Ride that cowboy!!
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    Another great tip. Very helpful for newbies. Also a good refresher for those around the site longer.
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    Connor Owens is starting his first year of college. Not an easy task when you’re introverted and socially awkward. Life will soon change when Connor meets Jared. Jared is confident and the popular jock. This is a beautiful story. Being on your own, conquering your fears are wonderful accomplishments. Add in falling in love. You have all the makings for this wonderful tale.
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    Just Ryder

    FormerMember4 commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Just Ryder

    So much was said in this chapter. Not all spoken. They fit like a puzzle. They say it takes a village to raise a child. The same for this family. Ryder doesn’t see yet that he is and always was and will be an Haner.
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    Chapter 9

    FormerMember4 commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 9

    TJ has been stunted. Both emotionally and physically. No guidance means bad choices. Can Randy and family give him a solid foundation to help.
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    Great chapter. Ceiling sex and a pet bat. January has pet jewel names for them. Pax is Topaz. A color that has shades of all their colors.
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    Living in Vegas, I’ll have to check these out. Vegas has its own unique flair.
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    Thanks molly. It’s just disrespectful to the art of writing.
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    I don’t understand this. If you’re going to be a lazy writer, Why bother?
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    Kevin has had the life of hard knocks. The knocks continue after entering the major leagues. Watch as Kevin navigates through the highs and lows. Another enjoyable offering to this series.
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    Chapter 7

    FormerMember4 commented on Hudson Bartholomew's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Very, very sexy. Ryan is one sexy dude who is all that and a bag of chips. Makes my toes curl.
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    Oliver the Mad

    FormerMember4 commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Oliver the Mad

    Thankfully Oli has his drums. Without them, he could have shot up school by now. Everyone disregards him. They talk at him and don’t listen. Of course the kid would rebel. I also feel Oli shows characteristics of ADHD. Ryder was able to let things roll off his back when he was young. Whereas Oli lets things fester. I am so happy to see signs of the old mother. Oli is the healing catalyst for the family. The mother will be the glue to keep them together.
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    Supernova

    FormerMember4 commented on MacGreg's story chapter in Supernova

    A beautiful poem of two bonding as one. Exquisite poem Sir.
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    It’s the dedication that counts @wildone. You get the silver medal. 😉
  24. FormerMember4
    The best part is showing LGBTQ people they are normal. Love like everyone else. It also sends a very public message to the ones trying to send us back 50 years.
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    Great parenting. They allowed each child their emotions. It’s normal to be conflicted. Not everything was awful about their mother. Each child should write her a letter. Help their healing. I think trouble brewing with Mr. Nocock. I wonder if they can get some advice from the judge to handle that matter. The kids will be truly Blu and Kyle’s... That’s feckin something to celebrate. Blow up some neon balloons! 😆
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