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I so wish Emily would have told Billy to get out of the car. I hope Brett doesn’t forgive Billy. Sounds harsh, but lesson never forgotten. For me... Too many constant mistakes. You can’t save them all. Especially when they don’t want to save themselves.

Can I bitchslap that moron? Learn nothing! Whine the whole chapter about himself. Just no words...

We see many changes in the life of CJ and gang in this continuing saga. CJ will make some life altering choices... deal with some loss. Through it all, he will travel his road with increased maturity, understanding, and honor. Carlos continues this honest portrayal of the many phases of life. Controlling your destiny and truth. While making tough choices, learning life lessons, and sometimes stumbling along the way.

It’s not really fair to rate poetry. Poetry is a deeply personal gift given by a poet. You may connect, but everyone will interpret differently. @Mikiesboy takes you on a journey through life. Seen through his eyes. It’s a ride well worth taking. Not always happy, not always sad... Just honest and from the heart.

Should I call you Tom? What a wonderful way to surprise your friend. Hope you have had a wonderful time. Canada is home, but you’ll always be a cute English boy. 🤗

Damn you papi! You started my day with the ugly cry... I didn’t think Liz would go so quick. That song has great meaning to me. It played at my mom’s memorial. You got the tone and feeling just right for this chapter... 😭

That’s good to hear... A recharge does a mind and body good. 😘

Hopefully experiencing 24 thousand volts of Justice through his gonads.

Happy that Cid laid it all on the table. A toast to new beginnings. 🍻🍻

Clever writing... witty dialogue. That’s all you need to know about this whodunit. Any story with scotch as a main character is aces in my book. A definite must read.

Sometimes we need a break for ourselves. That’s ok, but don’t stop completely tim. Your words paint wonderful pictures, sing beautiful songs.

Yes! Devon and Ashley are an ABC after school special in progress.

I agree with you! I don’t think they were close. Devon resents Kevin. He wants fathers praise. Yet, father and coach see Kevin is the better player. Where Devon wants acknowledgement, Kevin wants to be left alone.

Great chapter. Sorry this is the end. Quite the sensual bonding between king, queen, and champion. We sacrifice for the ones we love. There was only one logical choice... choosing Ra.

I hope the mother uses her mother’s intuition and does the right thing. Kevin will only get more depressed without family ally. That’s certainly not Devon. Thankfully we have a likable character in Stanley. Paul is just a pathetic follower who will never find popularity he craves. Ashley has no self respect or personality. I think the coach could help Kevin. I don’t think telling him were all counting on you is helpful. Kevin was crying... you see there’s a problem. Don’t put more pressure on him.

Great chapter. Andy has definitely grown. He is now comfortable in his skin. Theres one thing driving me crazy. I’m sure it’s auto correct. Is the cowboys bf Jaime or Jamie. Every chapter with him goes back and forth.

This made me cry. At the end of the day it’s the ones you love that matter.

You hit on the saddest thing. If you’re basically begging partner to be honest with you, there’s nothing to build on. Spikey has it so right... there’s no growth in these unlikeable characters. Yet, I keep hoping.

Billy is the town idiot! He may be book smart, but isn’t street smart. Brett has been giving hints. He is his own worst enemy. I’m beginning to think that he can’t function without self sabotage.

I’m reading now as well. Well written. I don’t know why, but reminds me of the 50/60 detective style shows. Worth a read.

Poor Troy! I hope he wasn’t raped. Although his initial reactions don’t show that. He needs to open up to Adam. If those kids get away with anything because of the detective... Watch Out! Mr. C won’t tolerate that.

Ok, a lot in this chapter. Thank you for not making a mockery of D/s. Each relationship is different in degree. You have hit on characteristics accurately. Greg is showing he needs to be in control. This needs to be a partnership. Even if he gets last word. His partner must be willing and wish for same. As a sub, I know Chris is willing. He told Greg’s father he liked aggressive and controlling partners. Not sure if he realized this to be a trait. A butler is a perfect job. By nature, subs are people pleasers. Chris may not know it, but Greg has already started training. At some point Chris will have to say it’s what he wants. Greg has already started checklists, taking control of household and Chris’s duties. Chris has even acknowledged he likes some of the freedom it gives him. Giving control is a natural sub trait.

Charge that snake with attempted murder! Poor Ryder. Ruining their first Christmas. Hey Blake, I’ll apply to be your babysitter. 😉

Haven’t seen yet. Definitely will. The book Simon vs. the Homo sapiens agenda was a wonderful book.

Hey A! Good chapter. I have continued. As you said, Chris and Greg are playing on more equal terms. Definitely a power play going on. Chris is uncomfortable without any control. Natural with his past.