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  1. This was discussed on another thread by Myr. If you liked the story, that will happen.
  2. It’s the simple things in life. ☺️
  3. Hello GA Staff, I have a question for your accessibility users. Specifically, ones using Apple products. Theres a usability issue I believe GA would have no control over. It’s either Envision, Apple, or Envision and Apple related. In order to get to some emoticons, categories list has to be expanded. An action which can be hit or miss. Also extremely aggravating. My question; Can most used emoticons be placed at top of list? If so, list most often wouldn’t need to be expanded for accessibility users. Thanks for your time. jp
  4. All read and reviewed.
  5. This is a great one Renee. I agree with many of these things @craftingmom points out. As a reader, I’m drawn to an active introduction. If it doesn’t grab me, i put the tablet down. The thesaurus is huge. Using words like happy, sad excessively are aggravating. A reader feels like they’re reading a story by a fourth grader. All good points.
  6. FormerMember4

    New Love

    Sometimes the relationship we need is the one with ourselves.
  7. Oh girlfriend, I love that story. ❤️❤️❤️
  8. FormerMember4

    New Love

    Beautifully said and expressed. The heart knows what it does and doesn’t want. Sometimes conflicting with our mind and actions.
  9. FormerMember4

    Temporary Chasm

    Sir, I wish you nothing but peace. Love you. xo
  10. I was thinking Anders and Mason. I think Mason is a big ole closet homo. For Zoe, the guy that works with Cody.
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    Chapter 5

    Gene is making it so hard to care for him. Blaming everyone else doesn’t help him. Stop the feckin self-pity party. He should love and respect Joey for what he gave Alan. Alan had a lot less than Gene. A one-way ticket to death and the desertion of practically everyone who meant anything to him. Stop being a selfish prick and change your destiny.
  12. Oh Moggy! I hope those are true native Americans singing. This is bordering on cultural misappropriation.
  13. Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for the backstory AC. 💋
  14. One of my favorite classical pieces by Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart
  15. His legacy will live on with his remarkable writing, and in the ones who remember and speak of him.
  16. These both play on the best part of Christmas. The magic, wonder and innocence.
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    Chapter 13

    I really like this story. Toby is attentive and listens to Liam’s concerns. They’re off to a good start. Firstly, the relationship was first built on friendship. Secondly, and most important is the communication they are building.
  18. Sorry you had to deal with that on your birthday. Your mother will never listen, no matter your age. Trust me on that. Your sisters family is in minority. You should not have to sacrifice on your damn day. Go enjoy your trip next year while they eat their cardboard tofu vomit cake. Happy Birthday!
  19. This shows a sweet and adorable side. Cheers to pink pickles.
  20. Congrats on the achievements for 2017. I have no doubt that your writing will be successful next year. You have a style that is enjoyable.
  21. PoorMason, he’s still a loser. Learning that us gays are EVERYWHERE! Muhahaha
  22. FormerMember4

    Slow Dance

    Very nice Parker. Jazz is known to hit all the right notes.
  23. Good chapter Carlos. Far beyond your typical teen coming of age fare.
  24. FormerMember4

    Lessons

    Beautifully done Tim. You get right to the emotion. I really connect to #3. xoxo
  25. FormerMember4

    Chapter 4

    I’m ready to shake Gene. I do feel for him over Joey. However, at some point you need to take some responsibility. You can’t keep blaming others for own decisions.
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