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chris191070

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  1. Great chapter. It seems Oscar won't get to spend as much time with the grandparents, as he would like. His parents want him home.
  2. Coconut, mushroom and anchovie pizza.
  3. Book 4, can't wait to read this.
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    Chapter 7

    Interesting chapter
  5. Interesting chapter. A hearing date, but no clue as to what for. Silas probably fucked up all the cases, because the clients were gay. Next chapter please 🙏
  6. I love crumpets, with plenty of butter
  7. This rewrite gives us more depth and complexity as thoughts and emotions are explored. If you thought the original was good, then you will enjoy this rewrite as it's easier to read, but much more detailed. This is a wonderful story of intrigue and adventure, that comes highly recommended.
  8. Awesome chapter. Benjamin and Joseph are safe and happy in there new home with Kevin and Ian.
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    Chapter 2

    🤐🤐
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    Chapter 2

    That's brilliant 👏
  11. Fred has lodged two appeals. Will he be successful in both?
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    Chapter 2

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    Chapter 2

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    Chapter 2

    I left no tease/cliffhanger. That would be evil.
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    The Return Home

    A beautiful chapter. A happy family goes home to Manchester. Good times ahead for Kevin, Ian, Joseph and Benjamin. The documents were a great success. I like that Ox, becomes the boys Grandpa.
  16. Awesome start to the new story.
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    Chapter 18

    A great chapter, but a hard chapter to read.
  18. Ken arrived at the precinct just as Sal was leaving with his lawyer, or more accurately, Joe Vincente’s lawyer. “Hi Sal,” he said. Sal gave Ken a smirky smile, and said nothing “I’m really sorry for the inconvenience,” Ken said sincerely. Now that he knew that Sal was his bodyguard, as well as Joe’s, his attitude took a new route. Sal was so shocked by Ken’s apparent sincerity that all he could do was mumble, “Sure.” Ken headed straight to Lt. Morton’s office. He went ri
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    Chapter 8 S2

    Devin is gonna be in so much trouble with Gramp and Pops, they will see the video. That neighbour is getting worse, she needs sorting out. Great time at the dog park had by all.
  20. Some amazing stories on this list.
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    Chapter 4

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    Chapter 4

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