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The Evidence Room - a haibun
MichaelS36 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in The Evidence Room - a haibun
I was with tim this day. I knew he wanted to be alone, but in that room, even with others near, you are alone. Facing the door from the victims and the guards sides, the hatch in the wall, they were hard to look at, and the gas column. Only one but in the real room, there were four. And had to be warm over 80f in there so the gas would work efficiently. The thought and planning that went into these chambers, and after, the elevator to move the bodies to the incinerators, dear God. And they knew the ones that drew them, they couldn't not. See it if you have the opportunity, but be prepared to be overwhelmed. Have a hand to hold when you leave. tim this piece is among your best. you did not ignore their pleas to be heard. xo -
tim has always written poetry, well as long as I've known him. I know how important it is to him. tim is a very caring man, sometimes too much and it shows in his poetry. He writes about social issues, Christmas, Remembrance Day and Thanksgiving, depression, love, joy and nature ... you name it and he writes about it. he writes about me as well and us. He has a poetic soul, a beautiful voice and I hope you'll choose to read some of his work.
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Ha! This was great. My kinda cop Quent is! I read this today, just wonderful. tim said it was one of best on GA, aside from @AC Benuswork, and he is right. A very entertaining story.
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This makes me sad. As I said in Lessons, never say never. Your poetry will come back to you, we will wait patiently for that strong clear voice to return. xo
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I think I was meant to have missed these. Chapter 78 ... you say goodbye. ...no more poetry. Then I'm drawn here. Have you read these, boy? They speak, in your clear beautiful voice. How can it be silent? Is your soul really silent? Take some time, get outside, reconnect, but never, never say never. xoxo
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Lol...funny! Lol
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To My Love for Valentine's Day
MichaelS36 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in To My Love for Valentine's Day
Beautiful. ..belongs in your D/s collection -
Poetry Prompt 9 Sonnets
MichaelS36 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 9 Sonnets
I am in awe, boy...wonderful. -
Poetry Prompt 17 - And To Sleep, My Son and Don't Wanna
MichaelS36 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 17 - And To Sleep, My Son and Don't Wanna
Wow. tim, these are wonderful! -
Wonderful, beautiful poems in this collection. We wait for tim's newer works, not knowing the treasures that buried here. If you have a soul, you must read these wonderful creations!
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We wait for your newer work .... not realizing the treasures here...
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Thanks Reader. You are a good friend to us both.
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You are an excellent writer. tim tells me sometimes he does his foreshadowing backwards, when he realizes he needs it!
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Not sure I'm humble. But I am committed to us.
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For This Remembrance Day
MichaelS36 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in For This Remembrance Day
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Ups and downs, boy. Yet here we are!
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boy, those words in the poem are true. ..I will love you until the end. Never doubt it. Beautiful, both of them. xoxo
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Poppies and Cornflowers
MichaelS36 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Poppies and Cornflowers
tim, all your poems of remembrance have been truly beautiful. .. -
Beautiful my boy.
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Maybe...not exactly me, but it's a great poem!
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Bits and Pieces, Fluff and Nonsense
MichaelS36 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Bits and Pieces, Fluff and Nonsense
Charming, and fun. Perhaps a challenge you can set for others. -
Great story. Full of love and hate. A struggle to survive what no one should go through. Well written.
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Music can move us, and remind us. This few hours with the great Van Morrison certainly did for you. Well done but heartbreaking poem. It's been a difficult few days for you. When you are in my arms, I know you feel safe, I can feel the tension drain from you. Remember your collar when you feel stress boy, touch it and I am with you. I love you boy and I will do so always.
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Nicely done. Words can drive us in many ways, good and bad. Also the lack of words is very telling. Not bothering to reply or answer, indifference - the lack of words is just as bad. You a great job with piece, molly.
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you know how I feel, boy. About one, and two. Parker is right, each is beautiful, and love surrounds us, if we invite it in. xo
