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Some excellent poetry. Serious, funny, deep, romantic, tim has written some incredible pieces here and also in his other active poetry folder, Bits and Pieces. National Poetry Writing Month is a poem a day for 30 days. A lot of dedication and hard work. You say, oh I don't like poetry, well, try some on for size. The more you read, the more you will see and understand. And as tim tells people often, there is no right or wrong way to think or read poetry but let your brain mull it over, and then you'll see. Congratulations tim.
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A very successful month, tim. you should be very proud of the work you've done. There have been some truly outstanding poetry written. Well done, my boy xoxo
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Okay not what I expected, not at all. Very well done!
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Wonderful all of them. However the Toronto Van tragedy poems were sad but well done. Much better poetry this year my boy.
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That was terrific! Lots of love and fun! Well done, boy.
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Great, solid, advice, you do feed us well. Great job, boy!
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I've come back to these several times. @MacGreg is correct, you are remarkable. This week, you wrote that amazing poem, your ballad, seven other poems, you've worked on your main project. You gone to work, looked after Me and dealt with some very down days, all this week. You are strong, resilient - remarkable. This week's poems are each your voice, each part of you...they too are remarkable. I'm proud of you, boy.
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Indeed, he is.
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What is it about this draws me back, over and over?
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Glad you enjoyed...it's interesting to watch him.
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Damn boy! You know I sit and watch. ..see you writing, mumbling, grousing 'the end isn't right' and I know you write, and fiddle, and cut, and rewrite some more. This was so well done. Never stop challenging yourself! What a treasure!
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Awesome, as someone said! Excellent work!
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Let us hope she's found peace, and freedom from her pain. Lovely poem, tim.
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You? Any kind of useless doesn't apply. I'd like to see a list of those words that hold you hostage. Write down five, then five sentences. ..then see where that takes you. tim wrote a wonderful monologue piece rather that way. Write a lesson, or a blog...tell me all about business law! Whatever, just write. Poem was very good btw.
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I come back because I watch you suffer and question your talent, so much lately. I can just tell you this and will, but I want to write it also. So you know it's not just words. You may not weave words like some others, but you are not they. tim, you are a talented, beautiful soul, you are bright, and funny and you have your own eye, like any photographer. AC says it so well above. you see things in your own, honest way, and you tell us about it, about how you feel, and often that we should look at little harder, too. Trust in your own voice, your own talent, and write your own stories and poetry. M xo
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No, last year was not a happy time. Write when you feel to, tim ... it doesn't matter
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A good week my boy ... don't pressure yourself and I'm sure you will meet your goal. Partial to April 4th and 5th, and to Ghosts. xo
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tim, I know you miss him. I do too, but I know what you felt for him. I'd expect nothing less from you, my boy. Pine cones...remember that lady who stopped to watch him play? Him tossing it in the air and racing after it? She said, "That's just made my day." That I won't forget. xo
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He was a great little thing. 17lbs of attitude that dog. But he adored tim, it was love at first sight. He drove me crazy when he was a puppy (thanks Mom). He was miniature poodle size and was tiny enough to get under the sofa as a pup, which was very close to the floor...and he'd race around...I wanted to give him back! It was difficult at the end, it happened so quickly and it was very hard on tim.
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Tapestries of Imagination (a Haibun)
MichaelS36 commented on MacGreg's story chapter in Tapestries of Imagination (a Haibun)
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Tapestries of Imagination (a Haibun)
MichaelS36 commented on MacGreg's story chapter in Tapestries of Imagination (a Haibun)
No problem. .. Seriously these are wonderful things. Writing good poetry is hard, but this way? It floors me what you two do, and I'm not forgetting the one with Freerider. -
Talented pair...
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Tapestries of Imagination (a Haibun)
MichaelS36 commented on MacGreg's story chapter in Tapestries of Imagination (a Haibun)
Damn, you two write beautifully. If you're this good without knowing what the other is doing ... maybe you should collaborate and work together. Stunning. -
Mmmm, boys in collars. I'll remind mine to come and read your wonderful poem! Hope you are well, WolfM.
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TC2 - Chapter 1: Meeting Each Other
MichaelS36 commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 1: Meeting Each Other
Very nice, A! Brilliant job. Dad's a bit too lenient in my book, but I'm sure it will all work out. But it's a nice story, not over done, fells very realistic to me. I hope you'll try some other genres, outside of your norms.
