Really? Premise great bad bad writing I finished it means it could have been a great story next time get someone to edit it this was really bad but interesting
Yh I was looking forward to a sex scene between them as so dey could really make love without worry of lahja killing kiorl but really I wish for Nassau to find love again they people lose the love of their lives to death and are still able to love again
I love ur stories but u don't really give a lot of back stories. What did Dale's father do, what happened with Dale and de football team I don't want to find out almost to de end of de story when u mention them tell us wat happened it makes ur stories difficult to read sometimes even though I still read them just try and change dat thanks