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Whoooo shit just hit de fan a lot is happening 😊 wait for next chapter intriguing 😍 it
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Love love ❤️ the story but because each chapter is written by different ppl it can be so confusing who is black Blu or Kyle and how Jared’s story was told was so confusing it didn’t make sense seriously 😐 pls do a lot more editing but love the story though
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Awww missed this thanks and happy birthday to you dear may all ur wishes come true enjoy your day
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Don’t like horror movies never have never will so the video at the beginning scared 😱 me so much the first time I tried to read this story so I stopped been ages am back trying again so far so good but next time put the video at the bottom not the top let the reader love the story before seeing the video but now u are scaring ppl from ur story
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The Backstory (Part Three)
Sussins commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Backstory (Part Three)
Love the way u write feels like we are having a conversation reading 📖 ur story is fun u are a great writer -
The Backstory (Part One)
Sussins commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Backstory (Part One)
Lmao 😂 first chapter and am loving it great story -
Great great story loved every little bit of it wish I was Eli he has de most fun really enjoyed it very much 🤗
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How high is this 11yr olds iQ who just woke up from a 7wk coma too smart for his own good so far I like the story but my brain can’t comprehend it but 😏 will see if I can finish it great story 😬
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Exactly at 11 yrs no child talks like that y was he running his fathers business with him or something or did he just finish IMO I was going to read it but am really having second thoughts because it’s not realistic if he was 14 or 15 yes because he is at dis time probably having conversations with his dad about business and he understands some things but at 11 even with a high iQ this is crazy
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Should have been longer this week since u didn’t post last week 😒😞😞
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Great I didn’t finish it but I think 🤔 I love this ending better😍😀
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So how many of you agree with me that Tina pushed him🙋🏽♀️ That bitch be crazy u can’t force a man to love u that’s stopped and killing the man he loves will make things even worse for u
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I watched a yaoi anime on YouTube about a guy Yuri he was an ice skater I forgot the name of the guy who came to train him he was an Olympic medal 🥇 winner or something I didn’t finish it though it sounds like I just read their love story am I right? Anyway it was a good story
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Ok 😥beautiful story I really loved it we all wish for love like that
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1st of all beautiful story 2nd am in love with 😍 the story love stories like dis where u get to fight every day for the person you love u get to value your relationship in the end because you worked for it love it can’t wait for the next chapter
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(Rubbing my hands together ) woooo this sounds like a beautiful story 🤗🤩🤤
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Ok am done can’t read anymore 👍🏽✌🏾
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Well he seems to be taking everything in stride for a fourteen year old isn’t he worried 😧 his parents will be worried and he looking for him why I he moving out of home now seriously who does that and u are a werewolf and he is not freaking out really 🤪🤪🤪🤪 ok well I think u needed a beta because I don’t want to put u down but this all of it is very bad I will freak out if someone just tells me am a werewolf seriously 😳 I will but 🤔
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Ok ok kkk so he is not worried he hasn’t even called his parents he is comparing his dick with a 12yr old? Ok am trying to rape my mind around dis story😤🤔 been wondering why I never read it now I know it’s really confusing 😐🙈 interesting premise but 🤔😐😏🙃🤨☹️😟
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Chapter 16...Epilogue/Conclusion
Sussins commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 16...Epilogue/Conclusion
For ur first story it’s really good it’s reads like it was written by a veteran lovely story love is beautiful -
Chapter 22...The Epilogue
Sussins commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 22...The Epilogue
Second time reading 📖 it and I loved it even more been looking for it for weeks looked for it under disability and after reading it again I realize Chase or Kaleb thought there was a disability beautiful story really love it -
Cameron after finding the imposter the imposter tries to capture him he fights of he and his goons gets away and to find the real John by starting from the party and the last person he saw John with? How is that?
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Oh nooo it’s a beautiful story so far hope it’s unblocked soon
